The only episode I have of them fighting about something is Tendri, when she was four or five, had this quirk of running on all fours. Tiny children go through a “four-legged” phase where they go from crawling around on their bellies to getting up on four legs…but Kattaluna are bipeds, so they have to learn to stand. Tendri went from standing to back down to four-legged because she taught herself how to run faster.
Pinti would see how others reacted to Tendri and ridiculed her. Tendri liked the attention. Pinti would get embarrassed. So, for family image, she would tell Tendri to not “walk like an animal” and then one day they had a fight about it.
Toys that could move if you turn a pully or crank something. A pully system to get water from deeper down a well. A support for older farmers to bend over when harvesting herbs (in the works). A wooden box-pouch thing that, with the pull of a lever, can open compartments so that herbs won’t get mixed up inside (in the works).
I also had a glimpse at her sketchbook and I think she might be trying to come up with a way to extend the roof for citizens to sit outside on the ground during summer.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I like everyone
Apart from the mains, I like the Arzonshua brothers. Aln, Kirlan, and Valan. They all have such different personalities yet are similar in a way. Among them, I do like Kirlan the best. He was initially supposed to be an only child. He’s really caring and has a big heart. He’s also a well-trained Hunter-Warrior. Can’t be fooled by his soft demeanor. I like him because he’s just so nice
You know you hear about these people who are just so nice all the time? They appear in the news as doing a good deed just because they like to make someone’s day or whatever. It’s like the word “mean” has never existed in their minds. They won’t fight because they’re angry. It’s never personal gain. They fight for others and especially that special someone. But they also never boast and are always humble.
That’s Kirlan. The kindness character.
Least favorite in what way? Hard to write would be Pinti. I had such a hard time figuring her out, she was my least favorite for a while despite being the main character.
In terms of the character would be Kalis. She’s the leader of the swamp Prendai clan and your typical problematic attention-seeker. She also is one of those “bad moms” in that she would exploit children left and right. She also treats children as adults, so if they do something bad, the punishment is the same harshness as what adults get. She’s like a dictator almost. She’s just bad. No one should like her.
Born with. If you have no magick, well, too bad
Editing has been going great so far I’m actually having to rewrite and edit at the same time. If you go to my recent posts on the Struggling Writers thread you can see me talk about it more.
There have been some drastic changes compared to the previous version (on Wattpad). Pinti’s story used to start at a younger age (12) and she didn’t get to actually be a clan leader before her family was murdered. Now, Pinti starts at a much older age (16) and is the clan leader. The story goes on to introduce more character relationships within the clan, too. Makes more sense to the plot this way.
I also used to have a strange thing going on with the Ilvagi and Kattaluna relationships. It used to be so complicated to explain, so I simplified it. There really is no need for their relationship to be the way it was before.
Good luck with your editing! I’ll be back with more questions