It did, at first. Sorry about that, I made changes to his character and the story.
Amneris, Leo, Nikki, Zoe, Carmin, Dan, Jay, Kayla, Hathor and Colt are all Immortals. Of the ten of them, only Carmin and Colt didn’t die before becoming Immortals. The other eight are what are called Undead Immortals because they are neither living nor dead, but they like to joke that they are dead (because technically they are)
Wow. You are clearly writing a universal epic here!
Thank you
No problem!
Oh my! This is totally my jam!!
I had the coolest LI character with this. His name is Keymaster and he’s the guardian inside a Musicbox clock
He has a very mad hatter vibe, especially since the main girl Roshneene keeps having to him to reset the clock/find the keys he’s hidden
He goes more and more insane each time until she faces her fear to save him and they set the clock properly together
My other character like this is Lord Masquerade, a kind, attentive nobleman who oversees an enchanted ball and magical carnival. True to name, he is always seen with a masquerade mask, shielding his full face (and hidden sadness/madness) from his guests.
Until his newest guest, Jenna , gets too curious and too close