I recently finished my YA novel, Bliss, and am looking for beta readers to focus predominantly on character development and plot progression from the readers point of view.
I’ll be 100% honest, it’s pretty much fluff so if you’re not into that I totally understand. The MC is also 18 and about to start university, but the story doesn’t really deal with anything explicit unless you count alcohol consumption as an explicit topic for YA fiction. There’s also swearing.
I’ll also read any work of yours and focus on any areas you want me to look at, just let me know down below. Also let me know how you’d like to recieve any feedback.
I read pretty much anything, the only genres I may struggle with is sci-fi and horror, but I’m great with lit fic, historical fic, ya, na, fantasy and everything in between.
Bliss is 33 chapters and around 77,000 words. I don’t mind if your work is longer.
Two weeks. Two weeks of sun, sand and stress-free fun. At least, that’s the package Lizzie was sold. Little does she know, the package was a dream. A sweetly wrapped lie fed to her by those she trusts the most.
There will be sand, sure.
And sun, lots of it.
Well, with Isaac in tow, that’s pretty much impossible.
Convinced he’s still bad news, Lizzie is determined to enjoy every single second of her vacation without him. Just because he’s next door doesn’t mean they’ll cross paths…right?