Hi everyone! I’m about to finish my book/story on Wattpad, and I would love to get some opinions on it, because I’d really like to know what I should work on, what should I improve and what (if anything) I’m doing right
In return, I can give you a permanent follow if you want to. The reason why I’m not offering to critique your story, is because I don’t think I’m good at it. Plus, english is my second language, so I’m not comfortable correcting others If you can think of any other way I can pay you, let me know!
Oh, and by the way, you don’t have to read the whole story if you don’t want to! If you only want to do the first few chapters that’s fine too.
Here’s the link to my story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/229565789-the-wildflower-and-the-wildfire
Blurb: Samuel Johnson disappeared from a small town in Colorado back in 2010, without leaving a trace. Kids at school spread rumors that he had taken his own life somewhere out in the mountains and police suspected foul play. But his best friend Zoey knew something else was going on.
Now, eight years later and just when Zoey thinks she can finally leave the past behind, she randomly finds Sam in California. Homeless, with guilt and a dark past that still haunts him, Sam struggles to tell Zoey the truth about what lead to his disappearance, even when she so desperately needs answers.
Some people are meant to stay in your heart, but not in your life. Some people come into your life only to spread the fire, while other help you rise from the ashes. One thing is for sure though: nothing in this life is a coincidence.