I need your help to create my blurb. I miss that thing that will make the reader start my story I don’t really know how to transform this bad summary into a great blurb
Basically, my story is a teen fiction. It’s about a 16-years-old girl who is sent to a military academy accordingly to her dead mother’s will. She used to be a sassy young girl that lives basically alone since she is 13 because her mother is often in travel for work. She and her mother don’t really have a relationship, when they are both in the house, it’s like they are roommate, they acknowledge each other and that’s all. (I know it’s kind of sad …) So one day her mother died and when her will is found, she asks for her daughter to be sent to the military academy, because she already arrange details about it. Her first day at the academy are difficult, but she hopefully meet some friends that help her to adapt to this new environment.
Feel free to ask question I really need someone’s help on that
PS: English is not my mother tongue, so I apologize for the grammar