Desert Desserts - Group Editing

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Editor makes it easier, but if you don’t feel comfortable with that commenter works. :slight_smile: I’m sending you my two chapters now. :slight_smile: I also got your chapter, I’ll open it up today and see if it works. :slight_smile:

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I’ll send you mine when I get to my computer :slight_smile:

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Great. I look forward to reading them. :grin:

One note about mine, please ignore the lack of indentations and proper quotation tags. I’ll deal with those myself later. I mainly need the extras eyes for grammar and such.

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@Vintaginity
@EKShortstories

I finished your first chapters. I trust that you’ll take my suggestions as personally as I plan to take yours. :sweat_smile: I figure the more suggestions, the better anyway.

I might have time to read the second chapters later today. Having a lot of fun with this so far.

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Of course! :slight_smile: I write just for fun, so I know it can use a ton of improvement. I appreciate you helping and I’m so glad you are enjoying this so far. :slight_smile:

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Thank you!! I love the suggestions for sure! I’ll finish you guys’ works this week :slight_smile:

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MY SHORT STORY IS FINISHED!

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@Vintaginity
@EKShortstories

I finished your second chapters. I hope my suggestions weren’t too nitpicky. Please feel free to delete any that go against what your intention was, since ultimately only you can decide what that is.

Join us.

Since I’m enjoying this so much, I wouldn’t mind editing more than two chapters per week. :grin:

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I join…how?

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I dont think I got your second chapter. :slight_smile:

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Awesome job! Let me know if you want to be a part of the next round on Monday. :slight_smile:

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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you are enjoying this. :slight_smile: Monday starts our next round. :slight_smile:

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I want to be part of the next round on Monday.

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Great. :slight_smile: I’ll make sure you are added to that. I’m excited to read your short story.

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See of you see it now?? I’m going to finish yours and @Moonless-Nights tomorrow :smiley: busy weekend with my two jobs ahhh

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I see it now. Just didn’t realize it was on the same document as the first chapter. :slight_smile: I’m going to try and read it tonight, but I might have to do it monday morning. :slight_smile:

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This week’s groups:

Group 1:
@Vintaginity (chapter 3)
@EKShortstories (Chapter 3)
@Moonless-Nights (Chapter 2)
@NotARussianBot (Short Story)

Floaters: Please let me know if you’ve exchanged your chapters so I can keep things updated.
@copyedit
@rachelsfloetry

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Happy Monday everyone! Another week down and I’m feeling great about the progress I’ve made on my story so far. I hope you are as well. Get those chapters shared so we can continue working. :slight_smile:

If it’s easier for everyone I can start adding the emails to this post as well so people have access too it. Just let me know what you think about that. :slight_smile:

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Since we’re all using gmail maybe you could just list them but leave out the @gmail.com part. I would be okay using my full address, but whatever you guys think is best is fine with me.

And I’ll share my second chapter either later today or tomorrow. :grin:

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Haven’t forgotten about editing the rest of yours!! I’ll do it tomorrow morning, but still send me your next part :slight_smile: family is visiting this week, so I’ve been swamped!!

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My email is cutecobrawv@gmail.com

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