Can you explain your story in a blunt/straight-forward way?
My Turn:
After NUMEROUS yet ANNOYING changes, I have finally settled on something.
Here is it, folks!
A mysterious girl helps a bunch of special Knights save the world all while holding important secrets and information that doesn’t understand why she does in the first place.
Werewolf ones?
Alphas are assholes. The women who deal when them have to be inventive. Doesn’t matter the twists and turns, the formula doesn’t change that much.
To Make a Kinder Children’s Tale is about a bad theif that an Elven prince is forced to become betrothed to by treaty. Everyone expects her to get knocked up and cocoon herself and emerge a giant butterfly and fly away with his child, never to be seen by Elves again. The dumbass falls for her.
By blunt, I take it you mean an elevator pitch? Nope, not yet. But I’m working on it! I can, however, do short and messy:
A therapist develops an eating disorder after one of her patients kills and injures dozens of women during a shooting spree, including another patient of hers. ¯\_(ﭢ)_/¯