Why do you hate it? My reasons for hating it may be different from yours.
itās just
bleh
I donāt mean to annoy you but why? Is it the prose, the pacing, the characters, the concept?
If a friend wrote this story and asked for your thoughts on it, how would you react?
I always want to hear why people react to certain types of media the way that they do.
Quality irrelevant, why are you talking shit about someoneās story they wrote for fun?
Because they are working to be a published author. They go on Twitter and complain about getting rejected.
And try to blackmail people into publishing them.
So I donāt feel any shame in critiquing a short story they wrote for fun. They are a vile individual.
Same they want it.
Then critique their character, donāt just teabag their writing like a couple of preteen bullies. Youāre ignoring the real issues in favor of crying cringe, and it makes you look cringe.
Why do you feel so offended? We never used the word cringe once.
Yeah, because you have to literally use the word ācringeā for that to be what youāre doing.
Why are you so offended by a trans man writing a short story for fun that you have to drag it to a public writing forum and string it up for unwanted critique?
Why are you offended that a user in a public forum is critiquing a public work. Is it a crime now?
Your defensiveness makes no sense to me. Iām just critiquing a bad story. If the author has a problem he can come and talk to me.
Hold up, when was Tans brought up? I donāt remember seeing that anywhere, donāt mean itās not there.
If itās bad, being Trans donāt excuse it. If itās good, being Trans doesnāt augment it. Forcing things based upon someoneās orientation or gender is the dumpsterfire way of ensuring people associate their intense emotions on the āmasterpieceā with the identityā¦
I cannot understand why you are so upset. You can call me whatever names you like but I donāt see what I did wrong.
They mentioned it at the end and now identity politics is being used to make us feel bad. But I donāt feel bad, so Iām still going to talk about it.
JK Rowling has opinions that has colored her work. Conversely, people who are on the fence who like her books may be more favorable to her views. It is very muddy ground to add someoneās personal life to their writing, is all.