So… Having one of those good Ol manic phases and those who have them know how productivity-crushing they can be. I decided to shelf my Mystery and do a New Adult story set in college.
The Premise is :
Ian Hernandez love’s love. Mostly the honeymoon phase. The wealthy pansexual known for his whirlwind romances that never last longer than six months. When he breaks the heart of campus finesser Farhan Grover, it piques the interest of his roommate, Aubrie Ames, a well-known heartbreaker who just might be Ian’s match. If she doesn’t Fall in love first. Will Aubrie give Ian a taste of his own medicine or will she be the next casualty of the six-month rule?
I made this cover as last minute as I decided to make this story and im gawking at it thinking… Does this look dark to other people? I wouldn’t be able to tell where im at mentally so can you rip this thing apart tell me the vibe it gives what should change. If anything is gross to you etc.
UPDATE: I cant fix her arm Canva doesn’t have any other bodies I can alter the color to so going to ignore it. Aside from that I thiiiink I edited according to suggestions and also made five new title cards. Can you guys vote on the one you like and let me know if anything else should change please and thank you
Please vote on the one you like but also if you see something let me know. I don’t plan on posting until Nov 30 P.S I noticed she’s a little smooshed will fix later lol