Looking for Critiques on Chapter 2 (ONLY Chapter 2)

Hi, I’m Rue,

I’m looking for critiques on what I have so far for the second chapter of this fourth book in a series I’m writing (Please don’t judge me). It’s all on Google Docs, so I have the invite to suggest in the link below. Also, note that I’m currently looking for feedback on only Chapter 2 and that I haven’t finished any of the prior books in the series, but I know what happens, so please keep such in mind.

Here’s the link:


In exchange, I will critique a chapter of your book.

Hi there! If this offer is still open, I’ll trade the first chapter in Part I of my Waxing Silver book for critique! Let me know!

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