# My organization isn't fleshed out enough and might not fit the story anymore. **URL:** \ **Category:** The Chatters\ **Tags:** chat, question, discussion, writing, help\ **Created:** [October 11, 2025, 8:01pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857 "2025-10-11T20:01:37Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 13\ **Page:** 2
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 12:35am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/21 "2025-10-12T00:35:55Z")
I don’t even know what is similar to my book. That is where I struggle. ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 12:36am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/22 "2025-10-12T00:36:20Z")
Yeah. ---
**Author:** ![thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/thatstheway/32/33303_2.png) [@thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/thatstheway)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 12:36am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/23 "2025-10-12T00:36:22Z")
just consume things in the same genres. ---
**Author:** ![thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/thatstheway/32/33303_2.png) [@thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/thatstheway)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 12:36am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/24 "2025-10-12T00:36:43Z")
i mean more detailed. ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 12:37am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/25 "2025-10-12T00:37:59Z")
Ah, understood. ---
**Author:** ![JojoDahlia](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/jojodahlia/32/62765_2.png) [@JojoDahlia](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/JojoDahlia)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 4:39pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/26 "2025-10-12T16:39:29Z")
> [@Qualeshia12](#): > > > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > > > Who do they fight? > > Nobody. > > > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > > > What weapons do they fight with? > > There is no fighting So you’re telling me there’s a whole organisation of _knights_ that don’t fight? What do they even do? How are they expected to be bodyguards without any combat experience? How do they help people? What are these “missions”? How do they end wars lol with a hug and a handshake? ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 4:48pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/27 "2025-10-12T16:48:46Z")
> [@JojoDahlia](#): > > How do they end wars lol with a hug and a handshake? Purging nations. Meaning they set magical bombs that turn the entire nation into a toxic wasteland. > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > How do they help people? What are these “missions”? They solve problems for nations that they can’t solve themselves. From things on a national level to a local level. > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > How are they expected to be bodyguards without any combat experience? They do have combat experience. > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > So you’re telling me there’s a whole organisation of _knights_ that don’t fight? In a way, yes. > [@JojoDahlia](#): > > What do they even do? Search and rescue, bodyguard work, sending out aid, stopping wars, and taking on odd jobs. ---
**Author:** ![JojoDahlia](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/jojodahlia/32/62765_2.png) [@JojoDahlia](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/JojoDahlia)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 8:40pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/28 "2025-10-12T20:40:01Z")
So… they do fight. I think you need to really have a deep think about it. What we’re dealing with is a faction. This article will help you; there’s a bunch of questions for you to answer. Go into detail. > **[Factions in Science Fiction and Fantasy (How to Build a Faction)](https://chaoticanwriter.com/factions-in-science-fiction-and-fantasy-how-to-build-a-faction/)** > > Raise the banners! ... Today, we’re going to learn about factions in fantasy and science fiction, and how to build your own factions! ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 8:50pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/29 "2025-10-12T20:50:35Z")
Thanks 😊 ---
**Author:** ![SecretDurham](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/secretdurham/32/13240_2.png) [@SecretDurham](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/SecretDurham)\ **Post date:** [October 12, 2025, 10:55pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/30 "2025-10-12T22:55:24Z")
I have a small group who call themselves Sentinel’s… They keep watch over a few towns to the east… Similar duties as such as the KUA I guess… If Knights and Saints don’t seem to fit, try some new ideas for replacing Knights, but keep the Union Alliance. SD ---
**Author:** ![thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/thatstheway/32/33303_2.png) [@thatstheway](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/thatstheway)\ **Post date:** [October 13, 2025, 12:21am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/31 "2025-10-13T00:21:18Z")
another thing you can try is ask yourself what if… and then fill in the what if like what if the knights hate technology? and just answer those. you don’t have to use all of them. but you might find something. or it may generate a spark. ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 13, 2025, 1:31am UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/32 "2025-10-13T01:31:15Z")
Interesting. I might have an idea 💡. ---
**Author:** ![Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/user_avatar/forum.wackywriters.com/qualeshia12/32/63136_2.png) [@Qualeshia12](https://forum.wackywriters.com/u/Qualeshia12)\ **Post date:** [October 13, 2025, 3:40pm UTC](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857/33 "2025-10-13T15:40:07Z")
> [@SecretDurham](#): > > If Knights and Saints don’t seem to fit, try some new ideas for replacing Knights, but keep the Union Alliance. Saints work, but the Knights might work after this idea that I got. [Previous page](https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/my-organization-isnt-fleshed-out-enough-and-might-not-fit-the-story-anymore/15857.md?page=1)