I was referred here by a friendly person on WattPad; I have a fresh account on there and I have never participated or interfaced with any of these literary platforms and I am a completely amateur writer.
I apologize if this is the wrong format or etiquette for these posts. If I have made a mistake, let me know and I’ll correct it or take this down.
That being said, I have three chapters (~2k words each, 9k total) of a fantasy story posted on WattPad. I would appreciate someone taking a look, and sharing something back. Feedback also wanted!
The link –
"Nephistes, a young boy, none older than 100 years old, and his mother, Phala, travel into the varied and ostentatious depths of the Under-Soyl – the endless, cosmic ink resting below the world; the furnace of Creation; the Lower Dominion of the Lord of Death, Veksys.
This on-going story treads the steps of Nephistes as he learns and assumes his role in rapture. "