Hi everyone. For the first time in 6 months I’m writing again and would love to get some eyes and comments on the first chapter of my nineties time travel story.
It’s an early draft so please don’t expect much. It also doesn’t really work as a standalone story as it’s an alternative ending to another story I wrote last year, but the first chapter should be follow-able without having read the previous book. (Have I sold it to you yet?!)
Anyway, in return, I’ll either:
Read and comment on one chapter of your story.
Edit one chapter of your story.
Note that I’m better at editing than commenting, but feel free to chose either.
Hi Ava, your old client here
I’m up for the exchange since I’ve read the whole book. And for the payment, I will go with the second option (editing) since I still have the same problem as last year xD
Hey! We did an exchange a long time ago. Would you want to do a one-chapter exchange with my creator’s program book? I haven’t gotten any feedback on it at all and your input would be really helpful. Like your story its a very early draft. Link
I remember. And then life happened! Things are a little calmer now so we could either go back to our original exchange on our other stories. Or happy to go with the exchange you’re suggesting here.
I have completely rewritten everything we exchanged before and I’m about to rewrite it all again. It’s not really ready for feedback yet because I have to finish redoing it. But feedback on the book I’m using for the creator’s program would be helpful because I haven’t started designing that redraft yet.
I really love your new story idea! Honestly, sometimes I am super-envious of writers who keep working with the same cast and verse. I feel like my brain is like ‘squirrel!’ and chases after the new story. I want to discipline it more and make my stories deeper/better.