I’m working on a new WIP I’m super excited about. It’s about a gay witchy romance set in a total fantasy setting. Lots of romantic tension, dark material, violence, war, etc.
I have two chapters and I will read and comment on two chapters of your story!
Thanks so much for reading and your comments! Feno is a doll, I enjoyed writing him lol.
I really love your characters! The trader especially. Southern charm must work on me
Read your first two chapters, and I have enjoyed them very much.
You have a solid tale to tell, and your introductions to Feno and Vallei are done nicely. The connection of Future Memories are nicely done also… Keep writing this tale, the First Person may not be to my liking, but it does work.
I wish you all the best for this tale, and I can see a following for it.