Short Story R4R

Hi, everyone! I am looking for feedback on my short story, which is 1763 words. It is for an anthology I plan on submitting to. It is due on the 15th of this month, so the sooner it’s done, the better.
Just tell me whatever sucks about it and needs to be fixed. Also, my main question is “Does the story fit the theme of the anthology as described here?”

If you are interested, please DM me to get the link to see it, since I don’t feel comfortable posting the link in public, as I am unsure as to whether that goes against their submission rules or not.

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