Struggling Writers’ Daily Den: rant, share, complain, ask, daily progress thing (Part 2)

Allen thought he could see three tails. It could be three cats?

Or not.

Just thought I’d share what happened last in Project Demon Friend.

I’ve figured out that demons can smell odd souls, and Allen’s illegally resurrected soul smells quite interesting to them, so they start surrounding him and bombarding him with questions like, “do you like cats? I could be your demon cat friend“.

He panics, but demons are normal in Arcanland, so no one comes to his help. They just look at him like, “oh, foreigners :roll_eyes:

Chapter 2 is going slowly but still good.

Good grief…

I’m calling the first draft of my Prequel complete. It’s 82k words. Scenes are missing. Holes to fill. There are some scenes that are just bare bones dialogue or descriptions. But it’s enough structure for me to move onto a second draft or return to the second draft of the novel that comes after. Progress over perfection. :crossed_fingers:

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I’m currently working on my world’s mythology. The more I work on it, the more I’m tempted to visit my older work to change things here and there.

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Hmm, might just be more important in how they promote stories or recommend books if someone is already reading something that belongs in a series. I set up my chronological novels and the only hint of it is when you check the story, in my case I have two stories in the series, it’ll say, “Season 1 of 2” or “Seasons 2 of 2.” :thinking: For some reason, the term “seasons” bothers me. :laughing: Why call it a series when you’re setting it up, but seasons on the public-facing side? :woman_shrugging:

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I just finished my characters’ timeline, highlighting where they were on what day and what they did.

Their resumes are full of holes: a 7-year gap, followed by 10 years of college, and then another 6-year gap. Who’d hire them with this?

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Huh, it’s interesting that they’re still slowly rolling it out. I first got the feature in August last year :thonk: thought everyone would’ve gotten it not long after.

It’s a good step in the right direction, but I was hoping it’d be more prominent. You have to scroll to the bottom to find it :face_with_diagonal_mouth:

As for whether non-chronological series show up differently, this is what I see for my larger series. I suppose the only difference is that books in a chronological series have “Season #” below each cover ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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The only way I can actually write is if I bs something and don’t limit myself to a blurb/synopsis/plan :ragejoy:

Seasons???

Like a show?

Why.

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That’s where the seasons show up?

What are they trying to do, make a TV show?

Who are they trying to appeal to? :sweat_smile:

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I mean, Wattpad has turned some of its mega-popular books into movies and TV shows :joy: but I agree, it’s odd they’d use the term for a book series. “Book” or “Volume” would’ve been a much better term.

Probably those who mainly consume visual media? Younger people? I’m not sure. Could be both.

That does remind me of how last week I was hanging out with a friend and he talked about getting his younger sister to read more. I suggested The Hunger Games, and he said that while he liked the story, the book was too long for his sister’s attention span :sob:

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I’m not procrastinating, you’re procrastinating.

Anyways, today instead of writing I have sketched a map of the cult’s camp and now i’m listing where the cult members live.

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everything’s fine.

She’ll probably think brochures are too long, too :sweat_smile:

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You know what, I was thinking, are they trying to be like a Web comic? Maybe it would make sense if comics had seasons

Actually, no, never mind, probably not XD

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A magical mad scientist inventor dude who needs an assistant… but no one wants to work with him because he’s too much a dick?

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Depends on what your genre is. If it’s comedy, get a narcissistic assistant. If it’s romance, a self-doubting one whom the scientist softens up to in time.

Share 1: It turns out that blond friend got overworked again last week, and he had to cancel Saturday’s reading exchange so he could rest :cry: completely understandable. Sucks that just when he thinks his workload is manageable, his boss pulls a funny one on him :melting_face: he did show up to write night yesterday. On the way home, he said that he’d let me know when he’s free for a reading exchange as soon as his free time doesn’t overlap with his exhaustion :ragejoy:

Share 2: So last week, one of my friends visited me in Chicago, and we explored the northwest neighborhoods of Logan Square and Wicker Park this time. We met up at Katherine Anne’s for some really good hot chocolate—which he agreed was the best hot chocolate in town, the hazelnut hot chocolate being his favorite—and then walked the Bloomingdale Trail to Wicker Park. We stopped by Myopic Books, a huge used bookstore in the neighborhood, and my friend was able to find a book he had read as a kid!

And call us immature, but we laughed so hard when we saw this page :rofl:

The book was in mint condition and priced at $11.50, so he bought it. He couldn’t find the sequels, though. Used bookstore moment.

Oh, this was also the hangout where he and I were lamenting how schoolchildren these days weren’t reading as much. My generation used to flex with books—if you brought your shiny hardcover copy of Geronimo Stilton’s Kingdom of Fantasy, you were automatically cool. Meanwhile his younger sister’s attention span’s too short to go through The Hunger Games. Tragic :melting_face:

Share 3: A lot of sharing, I know :joy: this one is only somewhat related so I’ll hide this under details, but it does concern the older guy from the write night group.

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I had a broken tower fan that I wanted to fix but lacked the tools, so I asked my friends if any of them could help me fix it. No-milk was willing to help, so I hauled my fan over to her apartment so we could figure out how to fix it.

We ended up talking quite a bit while trying to crack it open. When I admitted that I was reluctant to hang out with our thirty-year-old friend beyond write nights, she told me she feels the same way and also noticed that I’ve stopped inviting him to events. She admitted that she doesn’t have any positive things to say about him—she’d gotten offended on my behalf when he’d constantly interrupt me and mask criticisms as questions (for example, when he asked her, “Is it just me or does Stella never ask questions?”), disliked how he constantly made himself the victim, and was annoyed that he was not receptive to advice even if he’s asked for it in the first place.

One night, when he was feeling down after his lunch date got canceled that day, she stayed back at the tea bar to listen and give him advice (which he asked for). Not only did he not take her advice, but apparently, when she mentioned something about sex and romantic relationships, he asked her: “Why do you always bring up sex?”

Her reaction was: “I’ve been talking to you about not sex for more than an hour, and it wasn’t registering!”

The irony was that he was the one who’s been far more focused on sex, whereas she almost never brings it up, if at all.

When it turned out that we couldn’t open the fan that night because we didn’t have a long-enough screwdriver, I apologized for the inconvenience. She said it was fine since we got to hang out; in fact, she was relieved I said something about the thirty-year-old, because she wanted to vent about him so badly that she’s even ranted to her cousin about him :sob: it was cathartic for both of us.

On one hand, it does feel a bit sad. On the other hand, considering his age (and how he’s used it to invalidate people’s opinions), he only has himself to blame for being a less pleasant person to hang out with.

My fan may not have gotten fixed immediately, but man am I glad that I came over to her place. I was starting to wonder if I was harsh, crazy, or all these other things, and she was there to assure me that I was fine and that she was annoyed with him too :sob:

Progress: It’s small, but I’ve managed to add about a hundred words to Chapter LXV of Blood Will Tell. I don’t know when I’ll finish it, but the pieces are (very) slowly coming together!

I am going gung ho and writing whatever I want now

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Dw I already stole that idea :eyes:

He’s an avoidant bitch and she’s a pushover :eyes: