Thoughts on this? (UPDATED!) opening scene

Alright, I’ll try with the past tense. The inseparable part, yeah, you’re right. I might be able to do without it.

Thank you for your help! :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

This is great, much better and more engaging than the original, for sure!

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Thanks! As long as it’s a start, I can finally move on :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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