It’s Rue Jay with another problem. With all that’s coming the more that I dig into the story, I think I need feedback on my title, and if you think it should be changed, some ideas will make me very grateful.
Plot: Impoverished witch Mercy Synn has always dreamed of a better life. On her eighteenth birthday, the king of the kingdom summons her to the castle where she discovers that she’s a princess as well as a twin. Now, Mercy wants revenge on her father, and she wants the throne.
The title so far is Mercy’s Revenge.