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I have been feeling discouraged lately, Iโ€™m going to post my recent work so that you cab critique it.

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@Akje Imagine if the female lead in a romance novel looked like this:

Then she would have a reason to think she is ugly and be insecure about her looks.

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I saved this one under Prince Adam/ He-man in post-Apocalyptic Korean mostrr-hunting level-up.

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Wrow amazing description

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Will never happen, Iโ€™m guessing, since romance readers want to live vicariously through the heroine, and no one wants to be uggers. (โ™ฏ^.^แƒฆ)

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Yes but beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Though Mikoko is objectively pretty ugly.

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Thatโ€™s when fetishes help. Some guys care less about a perfection of face if they can grab a perfect butt. That and familiarity makes things prettier because youโ€™re no longer seeing differences in the face from your internal standard.
But thatโ€™s more irl.

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Some would say TOO irl.

Fetishes is why monster romance always tones down the monsterous aspects, because there are only so many people who would want to not only have sex with, but marry, have kids, and grow old together with a creature who looks like a water hydra.

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This is a floating head with legs. :slight_smile:

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@J.L.O

https://imgur.io/a/sjrjxbA

New Year, New Terrible Desicions!

https://theghostinmymachine.com/2016/12/26/the-most-dangerous-games-japanese-new-year-ritual/

Itโ€™s amazing how a smartphone can go so long without being plugged in and still be far from 0%.

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I agree.

But they donโ€™t have to be too sexual. My husband was in band and so he marched in parades carrying a baritone. Crashed at a friendโ€™s place and that means bunking with people (too many people, too little space). Barely know him, heโ€™s not being intimate, but his arm does wind up across my waistโ€“and itโ€™s just solid. It was a, โ€œI wouldnโ€™t have looked twice at the guy, but this feels like security.โ€

That would have been about 17-18 years ago. And itโ€™s funny because it took years to get used to having someone sleep that close to me all the time.

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https://forum.wackywriters.com/t/mostly-ghostly/9096/1367?u=notarussianbot

It means that you canโ€™t have this on the soundtrack now:

https://youtu.be/imoePo4zXTs

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@copyedit Is this girl better than or worse than Vi? Attractiveness aside.

That is rediculous. But then Levis did try to make โ€œThe Good Shepardโ€ look sexy so it deserves that treatment. Lol

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these two characters are not equivalent at all. mainly because Vi is a central character whereas Mikoko is a side character, and because Vi is Jinxโ€™s sister and Mikoko is a love interest, orโ€ฆ wants to be a love interest.

thereโ€™s no real way to compare them since they play completely different roles and are nothing alike in personality, backstory, or motivation.

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Itโ€™s the closest thing to a love interest Kaiji gets.

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okay ยฏ_(ใƒ„)_/ยฏ

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