The answer lies somewhere in all the nonsense.
Seventeen-year-old Eryn ignores her conscience and acts selfishly toward others, leading to the discovery of an old bracelet she’s strangely drawn to.
Putting it on was a big mistake!
The bracelet chucks her into a chaotic, magical realm with no internet. The worst part is that a monster of pure madness—the elusive Gibberjabby—haunts the realm. The monster controls Ace, an army captain, and tries to kidnap Eryn, wanting her for a power she didn’t know she had.
When she accidentally frees Ace from the monster’s mental clutches, she learns of a long-time battle against the Gibberjabby. She befriends Duxim, a sweet hare boy, and Clue, a quiet and kind soldier, who both want her to help.
As Eryn struggles to figure out the secrets of her power, the madness begins to reign supreme, causing destruction. If she can’t stop the monster soon, she will be thrown back into her home world and forced to watch her friends die.
I got one single comment on FB. Someone said I should be more specific about what kind of fantasy elements the story has, but idk what else I could add without making the blurb long and complicated 
This is what they said:
Is the monster the only antagonist? Are there any other fantasy elements? There’s magic, a monster, friends on a quest, are there wizards, fairy, elves, dragons, kings, queens? Like what kind of fantasy world is it?
There are two mad queens, but the last time I put “two mad queens” I was asked “queens ruling what” and when I added that in, I was told it was too much detail and that I should not put the queens in 
I could say part of the world has upside down trees and yellow snakes that spell words, or a jester that recites poetry randomly, but those are details.
If I say too much, I’m not giving a teaser anymore either.
What should I do? Or is this enough?
That gives me a better idea, thanks 
