Beta Reader - Send Me Your Stuff - Open

I have a google draft that I made just today, if you’ll take it

Is this the one you are looking to add to the group editing thread? :slight_smile:

1 Like

Different, entirely. Wasn’t even planning on writing it so soon.

1 Like

Feel free to send it over :slight_smile: Vintaginity@gmail.com

1 Like


IF you’re still offering beta-reads…

Genre: Western (With thriller and mystery elements).
Blurb: Andrew Slain, an ordinary man who moved out of Texas with his wife and daughter to live in Arizona in an attempt to leave behind his debauched past, finds life in the desert to be more difficult than he realized. So when the opportunity to short-hand his situation arises, he wastes no time by joining a posse to catch a criminal who has a $5000 bounty on his head- against his wife’s wishes. However, as he travels through the desert, clues are found, but the perpetrator is nowhere to be found. On top of that, the bounty quickly becomes blood in the water for other, more experienced hunters. And soon, the posse has more to worry about than just one psychopathic killer.
The reward reels in the Pioneer and Dragoon, a pair of ruthless bounty hunters with haunting pasts that still affect their decisions. The killer El Tomador has a deal with the posse leader, and later his infamous lust for vengeance finds a target on Andrew’s back. Andrew himself soon learns that his actions have severe consequences that lead him on a path that will change who he is forever.

Link: Ignobles - Fazen Lai - Wattpad

The book is done, the next chapter is coming out today. I’m uploading them twice a week.

Would absolutely love a glance at my current work in progress! Has 18 chapters right now.

When I finally grow bold enough to break free of my chains, I stumble right into the most unlikely of places–the lands of my apparent fated, and he’s got danger written all over him. He’s unfairly attractive, possessive, and dominant in ways I find confusingly alluring, and also…gentle.

The more I try to ignore our bond, the more I seem to fall into his gravity.

But his pack wants nothing to do with me, and solidifying our mating bond will destroy a magic in me that is key to finding my family. It’s only made worse when an old, awakening magic whispers to help me…but only if I leave my fated. Who in the hell can I trust in a world I barely know, especially with people I just met?

All I wanted was a simple life in the woods, not this chaotic mess of carnal desires, obligations, and choices so hard to make that I am sure it will damn near kill me.

This topic was automatically closed 14 days after the last reply. New replies are no longer allowed.