Saints are gods in the world of Alagossia. Ravakalyn are demonic gods.
After losing during the ancient war then gaining a severe injury, a former Saint named Renna gets transported into the future thus becoming an eight year old Gaian girl with memory loss. Fast forward to many years later when the eight year girl is now a twenty-two year old woman and wealthy heiress to the Calverstone Family named Jorildyn. The moment she decides to become a Knight of the KUA, some of her memories come back in pieces. Eventually, Jorildyn will unravel the truth about herself and her lost memories, what has changed in the world since the ancient war, and why becoming a Knight is so important to her past memories. She works with a princess of the many First Dynasties who are the offspring and descendants to the very Saints that are ruling the world, becomes a Knight to not just save her family and figure out a way to dismantle the system. All of this is happening while Renna’s fallen Saints continue to search for their missing queen, while they cause chaos to the world as a rebel faction targeting the very Saints and the First Dynasties themselves.
Action and Adventure science-fantasy.
I’m not sure what you mean. For now, I am showing Jorildyn and Aeris becoming Knights and who they are as people.
Pacing, foreshadowing, and execution. I know that these are drafts and there are so much room for edits, but I worry about that. I worry about tenses WAY more though. I also worry how I am going to keep the readers engaged while expanding the plot and making them understand what’s going on.
Trying to NOT allow that to take center stage as the story and plot slowly progresses. I tend to go crazy with world-building which is a negative. I want to still focus on the world of Alagossia, but I also want to focus more on the plot and characters.
Fantasy
Making sure the characters are believable/not overpowered, making sure there’s enough action but not too much of it.
I’m also terrible at coming up with summaries for stories, even with the plot info.
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