Confusing? In need of feedback for this sentence.

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Worse.

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It’s the first time, so I might actually delete it, showing him eating it instead. Or none at all. It’s not really important :stuck_out_tongue: I just wanted to know, if I do decide to keep the sentence, I could find a way to make it clear.

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I guess I’ve got to expect confusion from a non-sci-fi audience. That ain’t heavy speculation…

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It’s too hard to tell without reading the whole book.
Some books, you just accept everything as is, others make you question.

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So, then, it’s up to how valuable the criticism is, on that one spot.

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