I added some comments to the red portion. 
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No worries, Just wanted to check and make sure.
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Tiffani
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers- 21 // 14
@KnightofEmpires - Wolf & Hood- 10 // 5
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable- 30 // 23
@Shea - Throne of Misery- 18 // 18
@norwood515- The Reason Jude Exists- 10 // 10
@Halfley - To Catch a Dream- 1 // 1
The Siren’s Lullaby - Chtr 2 posted
Thank you all for the incredible feedback and help. Every comment helps make a story better! If I ever get published, you’re all going in the back acknowledgements part <3
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I added my comments in! Like the addition! Can’t wait for more Siren! Will wait for updates and gonna try and power through some more Midnight Lotus here.
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- The Desserts -
User || Book || Chapter # || Email ||
@Vintaginity || Cake Toppers || 14 || vintaginity@gmail.com
@TMinx804 || Siren’s Lullaby || 2 || tminx804@gmail.com
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 35 || catcarlablack@gmail.com
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 19 || sheaxrhodes@gmail.com
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 11 || Avanorwood515@gmail.com
@Halfley || To Catch A Dream || 2 || authordstevens@gmail.com
@KnightofEmpires || Wolf & Hood || 2 || fairytalefable@gmail.com
- The Deserts -
Please do not send chapters to those on Hiatus unless asked to do so. Members in a catch up status will stay there until asked to be removed or once it has been more than 60 days since their last response. Members on a Not Responsive status will be removed after 3 weeks of being on the hiatus tab, and are welcome to rejoin when they want.
@akaiItachi || Spells || Hiatus ||
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[center]- Brittani’s Tracking -[/center]
@TMinx804 || The Siren’s Lullaby || 2 || 2
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 35 || 35
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 18 || 18
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 10 || 10
@Halfley || To Catch A Dream || 1 || 1
@KnightofEmpires || Wolf & Hood || 40 || 31
|| Midnight Lotus || 2 || 2
User || Book || Chapters Posted || Last Chapter Read ||
[center]- Comments -[/center]
Hello friends, my apologies on the later post today! I havent been able to sit down all day. 
I didnt even get to eat until almost 3pm and when you are on a cut thats rough! 
my husband and I found a freaking maggot on our floor so it was all hands on deck deep cleaning EVERYTHING! 
we are super clean people (especially compared to every one else’s house we’ve been to besides my parents.) so neither of us have ever had this happen before and we have no clue where it came from. Sigh. So I guess my already obsessed cleaning just got worse. 
that being said, my husband will need the computer tonight to film his podcast with my dad. That being said, I wont be able to fully update the thread until later tonight, or tomorrow. 
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Knightlys Tracking List -
Knightlys Tracking List -My Stories:
Blood & Cinders- 31 chaps complete
Wolf & Hood-60 chaps complete
Midnight Lotus- 2 chaps - ongoing
Group Stories:
*@Vintaginity || Cake Toppers || 21 || 14
*@TMinx804 || Siren || 2 || 2- waiting on chap 3
*@akaiItachi || Spells || 22 || 22- waiting on chap 23
*@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 25 || 14
*@Shea || Throne of Misery || 18 || 18- waiting on chap 19
*@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 10 || 10- waiting on chap 11
*@Halfley || To Catch a Dream || 1 || - Waiting on chap 2
User || Book || Chapters Posted || Last Chapter Read ||
- Comments -
Hey all! Got caught up on some works this week and will try and get updated fully this coming week! Midnight Lotus is up with another chapter for those that are interested!!!- Hard to figure out where to break this puppy up. lol Gonna try and do some more writing this week as work is slowing down a little -thank goodness. Hope everyone has a wonderful week!
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Oh my gosh. I’ve really been busy. I’ve had to do so much work to get my foster parent application in this last week. Oregon requires an arm and a leg, I swear. Im just glad I didn’t lose momentum with TOM! I really hope to finish this 2nd draft by August 4th which will be my 
1 year writing it! My apologies for the skipped critique, I think this week puts me at 3 chapters each to catch up on! So,
(I’ll be updating this as I go)
@KnightofEmpires B&C - ch 15 completed
@CarlaBlack Ornella - ch 16 completed
@Norwood515 Jude - ch 7 completed (8-10 to do)
@TMinx804 Siren - (1-2 to do)
@Vintaginity HC&C - ch 11 completed (12-14 to do)
-Also I think I’m missing To Catch a Dream from the list!
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I hope I get to read books 2 and 3! Both sound so interesting!!
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August 4th is a great day. That’s my b-day!! 
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You’re not missing it. I have stopped updating it, so there’s only one chapter out so far.
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Oh gotcha!
It’s been already 15 days!? Gosh!! 
I read those:
@Shea - Throne of Misery completed - Awaiting 19+
@Norwood515 - The reason Jude exist completed - Awaiting 11+
@KnightofEmpires - Blood and Cinders - Chapter 13 to 15
Next in line is:
@TMinx804 - Smear - Chapter 22+
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers - Chapter 10+
@TMinx804 - Sirens - Chapter 1+
And I’m waiting for:
@Halfley - To Catch a Dream completed Awaiting 2+
@akaiItachi - Spells completed Awaiting 22+
@KnightofEmpires - Midnight Lotus completed Awaiting 2+
Where can I buy some free time? 
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are you guys feeling better? Has the water issue been fixed?
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Right?! ouf I feel that haha! I hope you and the family are feeling better now! Did the Hubbys detox work? Been thinking of doing that myself haha. Also chap two is up for Midnight Lotus!
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- The Desserts -
User || Book || Chapter # || Email ||
@Vintaginity || Cake Toppers || 15 || vintaginity@gmail.com
@TMinx804 || Siren’s Lullaby || 3 || tminx804@gmail.com
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 36 || catcarlablack@gmail.com
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 19 || sheaxrhodes@gmail.com
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 11 || Avanorwood515@gmail.com
@Halfley || To Catch A Dream || 2 || authordstevens@gmail.com
@KnightofEmpires || Wolf & Hood || 3 || fairytalefable@gmail.com
|| Midnight Lotus || 2 ||
- The Deserts -
Please do not send chapters to those on Hiatus unless asked to do so. Members in a catch up status will stay there until asked to be removed or once it has been more than 60 days since their last response. Members on a Not Responsive status will be removed after 3 weeks of being on the hiatus tab, and are welcome to rejoin when they want.
@akaiItachi || Spells || Hiatus ||
[center]- Brittani’s Tracking -[/center]
@TMinx804 || The Siren’s Lullaby || 2 || 2
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 35 || 35
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 18 || 18
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 10 || 10
@Halfley || To Catch A Dream || 1 || 1
@KnightofEmpires || Wolf & Hood || 40 || 40
|| Midnight Lotus || 2 || 2
User || Book || Chapters Posted || Last Chapter Read ||
[center]- Comments -[/center]
Happy Sunday/Happy Father’s day! (At least in America) Looks like there are a few people trying to play catch up. Do we need to do a pause week for people again? Or do those who are trying to catch up feel like they can manage it. A pause week simply means no new chapters for the week. Let me know how you are doing!
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers- 21 // 15
@KnightofEmpires - Wolf & Hood- 10 // 6
- Midnight Lotus 2 // 2
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable- 30 // 24
@Shea - Throne of Misery- 18 // 18
@norwood515- The Reason Jude Exists- 10 // 10
@Halfley - To Catch a Dream- 1 // 1
The Siren’s Lullaby - Chtr 3 posted
Hi, I’m curious. What do people do in this thread? How does Group Editing work?
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There’s a group of us, and each week we send a chapter of our story to everyone else in the group. Throughout the week everyone gives feedback on everyone else’s chapters, while in return getting feedback on their chapter. We work through google documents and the assignments are updated every sunday.
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