Desert Desserts - Group Editing

- :clinking_glasses:Knightlys Tracking List :clinking_glasses: -

My Stories:
:crescent_moon:Wolf & Hood-60 chaps complete
:white_flower:Midnight Lotus- 9 chaps - ongoing- possibly updating soon
:dragon_face: All These Wicked Hearts- Chap 1 available for any one that wants to read. Would like feedback on concept and initial interest to determine if I keep running with it.

Group Stories:

:ring:*@Vintaginity || Wedding Bells || 1|| 1- Waiting on new

:smiling_imp:*@TMinx804 || The Devils Highway || 10 || 1 ||- Starting

:wolf:*@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 50 || 24- Finishing up.

:full_moon:*@Shea || Throne of Misery || 24 || 24-waiting on new

:sparkler:*@akaiItachi || Spells || 32 || 26 ||

:love_letter:*@Halfley ||1 ||1||- Waiting on

:curly_loop:*@MargTheCoffeeAddict || Atomic Hearts || 3|| 3 ||- waiting on new


User || Book || Chapters Posted || Last Chapter Read ||


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Hey all! I got less done than anticipated this week- and by less I mean nothing, as my husband decided to graciously share his cold. So I’ve been groggy but the fog is slowly lifting.

Chapter 1 of All These Wicked Hearts has been sent- let me know if you didn’t receive and will resend. I am saving Wicked Lies for my eyes only- cause it’s messy but have other tales if anyone is up to snuff on my stuff. I also don’t know where I lie respective to what others have read of my work. I am horrid at keeping track. I aim to just knock em all up to complete or up to-date though as quick as possible.

@Vintaginity Wishing you rest as you come up to your due date and hope you have an easy delivery! @TMinx804 Love all your wickedly dark tales! Send em over!
@CarlaBlack let me know if you have questions or additional thoughts with the 3rd Vs 1st on yours. I am right there with you and flopping sides on my latest tales. First is so hard for me. PS: Finished Manacled and it broke me…Gobsmacked by the caliber of FF writing. I am promptly devouring another to supplement what is now a craving I never thought I would have…

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Hey all! Hope your new year is going well.

Can you please place me on hiatus until I can get caught up? I’m falling quite a bit behind with everyones stories. :slight_smile:

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I just switched the story I’m currently working on to 1st person. The book I’m reading is in 1st and all of a sudden I’m liking it. I was really on the fence with it before. Its such a pain to go back and change all the tenses :face_exhaling:

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Of course! I’ll have that updated for the next Weeks assignment. :slight_smile:

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:cloud_with_snow: Tiffani :cloud_with_snow:

@Vintaginity - Erin’s Mistakes 25 // 18
@KnightofEmpires - Wolf & Hood- 30 // 25
- Midnight Lotus 9 // 9
-All These Wicked Lies 1 // 0
@Shea - Throne of Misery- 25 // 25
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable- 50 // 30
@akaiItachi - Spells- 32 // 26

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- :clinking_glasses:Knightlys Tracking List :clinking_glasses: -

My Stories:
:crescent_moon:Wolf & Hood-60 chaps complete
:white_flower:Midnight Lotus- 9 chaps - ongoing- possibly updating soon
:dragon_face: All These Wicked Hearts- Chap 1 available for any one that wants to read. Would like feedback on concept and initial interest to determine if I keep running with it.

Group Stories:

:ring:*@Vintaginity || Wedding Bells || 1|| 1- Waiting on new

:smiling_imp:*@TMinx804 || The Devils Highway || 10 || 2 ||
Come Away With Me || 10 || 0 ||Recieved
Lavender Hall || 10 || 0 ||Recieved

:wolf:*@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 50 || 24- Finishing up.

:full_moon:*@Shea || Throne of Misery || 24 || 24-waiting on new- hiatus

:sparkler:*@akaiItachi || Spells || 32 || 27 ||

:love_letter:*@Halfley ||1 ||1||- Waiting on

:curly_loop:*@MargTheCoffeeAddict || Atomic Hearts || 3|| 3 ||- waiting on new


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Hey all! Happy end of Jan- can’t belive how fast time is flying. I’m trying to write a bit more in the background- but nothing new posted yet. Will be very busy next week, applogies if I don’t get much done for the next submission.

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Desert Desserts (6)

- The Desserts -

User || Book || Chapter # || Email ||


@Vintaginity || Erin’s Mistakes || 18 || vintaginity@gmail.com

@TMinx804 || Devil’s Highway || 7 || tminx804@gmail.com

Either/Or

|| Come Away With Me || 6 ||

@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 53 || catcarlablack@gmail.com

@akaiItachi || Spells || 27 || choudharyrahil20@gmail.com

@Halfley || Awaiting Story || 0 || This text will be blurred

@KnightofEmpires || Midnight Lotus || 2 || fairytalefable@gmail.com


- The Deserts -

Please do not send chapters to those on Hiatus unless asked to do so. Members in a catch up status will stay there until asked to be removed or once it has been more than 60 days since their last response. Members on a Not Responsive status will be removed after 3 weeks of being on the hiatus tab, and are welcome to rejoin when they want.


@Shea || Throne of Misery || 25 || Hiatus ||

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- Brittani’s Tracking -

@TMinx804 || Come Away With Me || 10 || 0 ||

@CarlaBlack || Awaiting New Story ||

@KnightofEmpires || Midnight Lotus|| 9 || 9

|| All These Wicked Lies || 1 || 1

@akaiItachi || Spells || 31 || 24 ||

@Halfley || Awaiting Story || 0 || 0 ||

@Shea || Throne Of Misery || 24 || 23 ||


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Happy Monday! How is everyone doing? This month is flying by so fast! This might be the first January in my life that hasn’t felt like 40 weeks longs. XD I guess the older you get the more true that becomes. Just found out my parents are thinking about putting down the family dog I grew up with now that he is getting so old. He’s had such a good long life and things have gotten really hard for him, just sad that this is a closure of another chapter. Now that there’s no kids at my parents house and hasn’t been for 7 years since I’m an only child, I don’t think they will ever get another dog. Weird place to be for me. Still haven’t made any progress on anything and I apologize for that guys! Hopefully soon so I can stop saying that lmfao. Here’s to another good week!

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Sorry to hear about the pup. Dogs give us so much joy and love and it’s so hard when we lose them. Their lives are much too short. :cry: :broken_heart:

Awww noooo! @Vintaginity I’m sorry about your family dog that sucks. Hopefully they don’t have too but I get it. I went through the same ours passed at 16, it’s heartbreaking but good to know that they are no longer suffering. Always tough with fur babies and my heart goes out to you and your family. Sending hugs and love! :mending_heart:

For those that have read/ reading Wolf & Hood @Vintaginity @TMinx804. I have changed the opening chapter - I’m working on the second draft now- spliting and revamping the book and leaning more to the comedy. I was wondering if you would mind taking a look at the first chapter in comparison to the original and letting me know your thoughts for better or worse? Please let me know if you have time/ would be interested. <3

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Of course I will take a look this week. Is it a different doc or did you change the 1st chapter of the original doc. Either way I will need access :slight_smile:

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I’ll send you a seperate doc! <3 Thank you!

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Thank you so much fo your comments! I’m currently re-writing chapter 9 with the 3rd POV and I need to change a few, well, a lot of the story actually.
Have you tried wrote just a chapter or two, see how the pace is? Then send it to us!

Manacled was my first FF ever and I think I set the bar very high! It took my one if not two week to get over it. I wanted to read Draco Malfoy and the Mortifying Ordeal of Being in Love (supposely also very good) but I was too much on my hanger over of Manacled still. What did you read, if I may ask?

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I’m sorry about you family dog. Its always so sad to lose a family member. We love them so much :cry:

I’m sorry if I was not reading this week, I was just caught up with life and my sudden inspiration to write my fourth draft. Its going well, so I don’t want to stop when I’m into it and when husband and kids leave me alone for enough time!

I’ll catch soon, I promise.

Also, if you want, you could stop reading the second draft of White Forst. I just re-read some chapters (as some might had notice with some closed comments) and IT’S SO CRINGE I AM SO SORRY. :joy: And it’s so freaking long with endless chapters omg.
I learned a lot since two years now, and I’m more structured and consistent.
Maybe you won’t want to read that monster again, and I totally get it :joy: but I change a lot of things in the plots and the building of the relationship. The main line is still the same, but more clarify.
Let me know if you want to be add on the fourth draft 3rd POV!

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:cloud_with_snow: Tiffani :cloud_with_snow:

@Vintaginity - Erin’s Mistakes 25 // 19
@KnightofEmpires - Wolf & Hood- 30 // 27
- Midnight Lotus 9 // 9
-All These Wicked Lies 1 // 0
@Shea - Throne of Misery- 25 // 25
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable- waiting for new draft
@akaiItachi - Spells- 32 // 26

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If you have a new draft it’s probably more helpful to critique that one than a version you’re not going with. Add me onto the new one when you’re ready :slight_smile:

I admire you writing several drafts. I can bang out a book in a few months but I really, really struggle with re-writing my stories. :persevere: Something I need to work on!

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HALFLEY’S UPDATES.

Hello everyone! It’s me again. I’m here to just notify you that I’ll be working on the writing aspect of my story and keep the planning to a minimum. I’m trying to get back into writing and the only way to do this is to just write and hope it doesn’t look like an absolute incoherent mess. I’m sorry for the delay in the story and updates. I’m just trying to get too many stories onto paper, which isn’t helping.

So I’m just going to write and see where it goes. Planning is a stage I absolutely despise but I need to get the basics down for the characters and the kingdoms. Otherwise I’m going to be writing god knows what.


The Story.

Sabree is a 16 year-old princess living in a temple near the castle she once adored and called home, under a false name. Her family was massacred in a fire, which caused more damage than Sabree knows. Now, her uncle is on the throne and life seems to be going well. But outside the temple walls, life is horrendous. Sabree’s kingdom is cast into poverty and she needs to travel to the one place, where she knows, she’ll find help. But … the war that raged through the neighbouring kingdoms centuries ago has left them divided. Can Sabree manage to take back her throne? Can she find help and find out who wanted her family dead?

Chapters.

I’m looking forward to writing this story but I’m focusing on some major and minor characters first before I write the first chapter. I have been wanting to write this story for a couple of years now. So… I hope you guys will like this.


Why am I not writing x?

The reason I’m going between one story and the other is that I don’t feel like a single story can keep me focused. I feel the need to write more than one story at once. But I know I can’t do that. So, I’ll be focusing on this story. It has a working title, but not a “real” title.

I hope to finish this story and I hope to write it and find some critique partners and beta readers. Who not only give feedback but keep me writing as well.

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I can return the compliment to you as well!
You wrote so many stories, I would love to have this kind of imagination! But I’m stuck with my MCs and they won’t let go until the very end.

I will made the new doc of the fourth draft and add you to it :slight_smile:

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