Foxwood's "Ask me about characters, magick, setting, and I'll ask you, too"

Yeah, I did this before. It was great.

Ask me questions about any of the things below. You can grill me and make me repeat myself. You don’t have to look at previous posts to see if you are asking the same question as other people.

I will, in turn, ask you questions. We can chat about our world building and characters and maybe work out issues and stuff on the way. Who knows? We can brainstorm, too.

How to begin? Tell me something about your main character, ask me a few questions, and we’ll go from there :blush: Don’t feel like you have to ask a lot if you don’t have anything much.


World: Strangearth (it’s like our world, but not really)

Country: Arcanland (inspired by 1850-1890s USA. Has 30 states.)

In Arcanland, demons are everywhere. It’s so common that people don’t think too much of it, and Arcans have learned that as long as you’re not mean to demons, they won’t do anything to you. Not even possession.

Books: An omniscient duology called Their Posthumous Lives duology. Everything here is based on book 1, Project Demon Friend.


Creatures:

Demon

Intelligent creatures in all shapes and sizes. They live in the world of the dead, the underworld, or hell if you prefer to call it. Contracting with humans is how they get to the land of the living. One demon per one human. The human will gain powers and the demon will gain souls. There’s high ranks and lesser demons.

Demonic creature

These can vary from high intelligence humanoids to instinct-living animals. They don’t need to contract with humans to go to the land of the living. Various shapes and sizes. Not all of them speak.

Angellic

Debating on if I should rename them, so people don’t imagine beings with wings. They’re beings of light and more like amoeba than creatures with intelligence. They live on instincts. If the humans are clown fish, they are the sea anemone. They protect the human and give half their powers, and humans give them access to “misfortune“ energy (haven’t fleshed this out yet).

Other:

  • “the fallen“: angellics who have been thrown out of the heavens
  • “the outcast“: demons who have been exiled for breaking the law
  • “the disgraced“: one case so far. It’s a creature that belongs nowhere as it broke the laws of angellics and demons. The single case one is called “the Disgraced Imperfect“ based on its true form being hideous after a failed pursuit of perfection.

Organizations:

The Red Circle

Richard’s assassin organization. Previously, he would get hired to murder. Now he tells his members who to go after based on the gray clouds or melting faces he sees. At least 30 people currently belong here, both old and new. They leave a blood circle behind in the crime scene as their signature.

Horned ram cult

a.k.a The Protectors of Light cult. Sacrifices servant girls and women to get wishes granted. Not much else is known in most of book 1 until the end.


Main Characters:

Richard

Immortal assassin on his seventh life cycle. Eternally 32. Handlebar mustache. Can see glimpses of the future. Has vampiric tendencies in that he gains adrenaline from drinking blood. He sees greedy, terrible people as being covered is gray clouds or having melting faces. His goal in life is to “cleanse the world“ and get rid of them.

Charcoal

a.k.a Vassago. A demon prince who has contracted with Richard for all his lives. He talks like a posh British gentleman and lands a number of sarcastic remarks. Like all demons, he finds humans entertaining and fascinating. As a demon, he has many powers. One of them is seeing the future.

Mallord

50s. Retired legendary detective turned children’s mystery book series writer. Alias is Millard Jason. He can see glimpses of the future, and gets this power from his angellic. Unlike most humans, he knows who his angellic is and has met it in the spirit realm. Mallord comes from a corrupted family.

Allen

early 50s. Illegally resurrected by Mallord 30 years ago (why? hmm, you can ask). Reinvented his life. Illegal resurrection means that he can’t talk about it at all out loud or he’ll die immediately.

Michael

15 years old. Mallord’s son. May or may not be protected by an angellic on the verge of corruption. Involved in Will’s gang. Is very protective of his sister Rose and joined the gang to become stronger. Distant from his father.

Anastasia

40s. An escaped servant who is on a mission to find her missing husband. Originally from Ruskava and wants to go home. Has a sixth sense power called ektora which is often also found in trained mediums. Was a nurse. No children.

Tovmeyidnan

Pronoun: it. Poses as a demonic creature, but it’s actually the infamous Disgraced Imperfect. This is a big secret. Lived with Richard two years so far and does household chores in exchange for food and shelter. It has two forms: Tommy (stuck-up stable boy) and Anna (kind, middle-aged woman).


Other characters:

Will

22 years old. gang leader. Called, “broccoli hair“ behind his back. Anger issues. Cult member. Comes to own a ship called the Florence which belongs to the cult.

Penelope

late 40s. Mallord’s wife. Determined to keep her nosy husband retired and her family safe. She’ll even withhold information from people looking for his help. Her being the wife of Mallord is a secret. They think she’s married to Millard Jason, Mallord’s alias.

Rose

10 years old. Has Down’s Syndrome (not diagnosed yet). Mallord and Penelope’s daughter. Protected by angellic. Has the power to turn nightmares into good dreams, can have out-of-body experience at night while dreaming, and can do other dream-related things.

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Let’s do this! :grin:

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and anyone else :wink:

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I’m working on Dead Rising meets Sweet Home in a teen drama context and with the art style of Rumiko Takahashi. Word salad, I know.

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What became the inspiration for your story? @TheTigerWriter

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Demon: No Legion? (Multiple demons inhabiting one body.)
Demonic Creature: Any plans to make them cute little puppies or run the joke of you can’t tell demonic cats apart from normal cats?
Angels: what’s funny is the word just means messenger. Cherubim and Seraphim, Thrones, et al, may not be angels at all. They are all considered heavenly beings. SO: it really is going to depend on the understanding of the audience as to how it’s taken.

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Sounds like a well-organized mafia more than anything else lol

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Let me find my glasses and get back to you :joy:

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You’ve mentioned that demons are pretty common. Are the Angellic also common or are they rare? Does anyone know about them?

Okie let’s go with the series I’m working on :partying_face:

Main character is Hathor.

Immortal, Lyriumian, Fae and Demigod. Princess of Lyriumia.
She’s the Vessel of Time and a Phoenix, both of which she’s just found out about. Let’s say a lot of people are not thrilled about this mix and she’s having a hard time adjusting to these new powers. Powers are time related

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Tell me, what does this look like? What made you decide to put them together? Let me try to look into your word salad ingredients.


It started out as Anna Karenina, Father Goriot, and then a little bit of Sherlock Holmes ft. Robert Downey Jr., and also all those horror movies I had been watching.

@Qualeshia12 So, what are you working on right now, and what’s the inspiration for it?


No legion? Well, yes legion. Lots legion. They’re just holding the fort, so to speak, in the land of the dead, while their master enjoys himself. That’s how it goes :stuck_out_tongue:

I didn’t say they weren’t cute :wink: And there’s no plan to make a joke of not being able to tell them apart. The focus is less on the demonic creatures and more on the main demon. That being said, there is a mention of a girl who feeds a demon cat, and it’s unclear whether or not she knows it’s a demon cat because the demon cat hasn’t spoken to her or revealed it’s full demon self yet.

She might think it’s a cat with a weird tail :stuck_out_tongue:

The demon cat in question is named Grima, btw.

That’s interesting. I feel like I might have known it at some point though :stuck_out_tongue: So, in my story, they’re angellics… and I’m contemplating calling them light people or light beings or something along those lines. I don’t want people imagining winged humanoids or the stereotypical heavenly being.

@J.L.O So, what have you been working on recently?


lol, actually, that might be a great description XD


Angellics are as common as demons. Maybe even more commonly around. To some, an angellic is like an abstract idea and they don’t really think angellics are a real thing. Other people call them angels and messengers of god and think they have wings (they don’t). And then there’s people who have spoken to demons and learned about angellics that way.

The last one is most common I think.

@alenatenjo Okay, tell me does she shapeshift? Phoenix is often associated with coming back from the dead, so, can she do that? Manipulate life and death? And how did she find out she was a Phoenix? Was she showing signs?

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Project Succession. My inspiration was an anime series that I wanted a while back, but the story slowly turned in something entirely different. I don’t have a clear source of inspiration.

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Stories have a tendency to evolve, don’t they?

So, what are your favorite things about Project Succession? :blush:

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Dead Rising started as Capcom’s answer to Konami’s Resident Evil, and the game acts as a dark horror-satire on American society-especially the first game, that takes place in a mall full of zombies.

Sweet Home is quite possibly the GOAT of the webtoon platform, wherein instead of a zombie apocalypse, people are twisted by their desires to become monsters, each with a unique and creative design.

A while ago I realized that my problem with zombie apocalypse stories is that zombies…are pretty boring, if you don’t put in effort into making them unique. And I don’t mean just giving them a cool new name, I’m talking powers, abilities, tactics, etc.

Effectively the monsters are entirely lucid and intelligent, but entirely ruled by their Id. This also means that they are incapable of lying.

In addition, I wanted to add in some occult ideas about desire, identity, and societal control.

Finally, to make it just an extra layer of weird, it is drawn like a Shoujo manga from the 1980s. That’s right, it is mean to appeal to teenage girls.

Also it takes place in South Korea. Because nobody does zombie stories like South Korea. George Romero would be proud!

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Was the cow goddess angle intentional?

She can also take the form of a lioness, a cobra, or a sycamore. Because all Egyptian Goddesses are actually just other Egyptian Goddesses in disguise.

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The different way I’m using vampires in my story.

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You also said that people are protected by Angelics. Are those people aware of it or do they think they have really good luck?

Nope, can’t shapeshift. Unless you count changing into her alternate form but technically that’s not shapeshift :thinking:

Hathor’s an Undead Immortal so she’s already both dead and alive at the same time. She can only manipulate life and death within the restraints of her time magic or what she’s allowed to do as the Vessel of Time.

Phoenixes are the four “original souls” of Creation said to come from the Beast (one of the primary forces that made Creation in the first place - it’s existence has been confirmed). So each time a Phoenix pops up throughout history, it’s the same person living a new life. Being a Phoenix grants you some pretty intense primal power but the true extent isn’t known. In that way, it definitely is associated with coming back from the dead and/or living forever.

Hathor didn’t know she was a Phoenix until her power activated. Even then she didn’t know until the other three showed her the Mark that had appeared and that they’d sensed her power awakening. There isn’t actually a way to detect a Phoenix before the power activates unless the one detecting it is also a Phoenix.

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She was named after the Goddess Hathor, yes. The Goddess also pops up sometimes in the short stories.

MC of my other series (Amneris, Hathor’s mother) spends a lot of time in the Duat and is friends with a lot of the Egyptian Pantheon. She liked the Goddess Hathor so named her daughter after her.

Interesting note: Hathor’s half-brother is named Horus :joy:

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Someone actually remembers me?

Jk jk-

Replying to this so I can answer later ^^

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That sounds so cool!

So, what are the common powers and abilities of these zombies, and do you still call them “zombies“? (made me realize I don’t know where “zombie“, as a word, came from)

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Oh cool :grin:

Richard is kind of like a vampire with a twist, too. (He’s called the Vampyre, by some in his organization because of his ability to become energized after drinking blood which is thanks to his demon having this ability)

So, what are your vampires like, and are they still called “vampire“?

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They are too smart to be called such, closer to a preta, or hungry ghost.

Generally, they are more durable and endurant than humans, but each one is unique.

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