Introduce your main characters and their stories by showing a few lines from the first chapter they appear in and add a picture if you like -- feel free to give your first impressions and ask questions <3

Hey everyone!

I thought it would be fun and inspiring for us to share a little sneak peek into our stories by introducing our main characters. Here’s how it works:

Share a few lines from the first chapter where your character makes their debut. It could be their introduction, their first piece of dialogue, or even a description that sets the stage for who they are.

Feel free to add a picture or any visual that you think captures the essence of your character! It could be an image you found online, an art piece, or something you’ve created yourself.

Share your first impressions or thoughts behind each other’s submissions. And ask about them if they’ve sparked your interest.

Let’s get to know each other’s characters and see the diversity of personalities and stories we’re all working on. Can’t wait to meet your characters!

Here’s mine. <3

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Oooh, are these from your website or blog? Nice! If not, you ought to do that. You could have a page for each character, with their picture and backstory and all that. (*^-‘) 乃

I need to do the same, but it’s so easy to give advice rather than take it. (♯^.^ღ)

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Here are the first few paragraphs taken from the first chapter of my book, introducing the main character, Alma.

There was nothing, and then suddenly everything all at once. Too much information surging through him. Sensory input threatened to overload his processor. White lights that were too bright. The scent of sterile chemical cleaners. The sensation of cold, hard metal against his back. Discomfort all around, and within. Too many thoughts and ideas to chase around. Everything was just too much.

There were voices that he didn’t recognize. And how could he? He hadn’t existed before this moment.

How did he know that? He tried to remember anything about before, but no memories came. Only information. Cold, hard information with no experience to back it up.

The voices continued. What were they saying? Finally, forcing himself to focus on one thing at a time, his systems were able to stabilize as he closed his eyes and concentrated on the voices.

“Is it finally calibrated?” a male voice asked.

“Almost,” a female answered. “It’s still stabilizing, but it’s 89% complete.”

Opening his eyes, he looked at the two humans speaking. The male was tall, middle aged but in good shape. He had wavy blond hair parted neatly and blue eyes. The man’s smile was a bit intimidating.

The female made him even more nervous as she leaned over him and frowned, scrutinizing him as if he were a bug under a microscope. She had dark hair, pulled back into a tight bun. Her eyes were dark as well, shaped like half circles. She was short and petite, but still seemed to command authority with the way she carried herself.

“Alright, it’s calibrated,” she said.

“Does it know its name?” the man asked.

“What is your designation?” She was speaking to him now.

“I am Alma.” How did he know that? No one had ever told him, and yet, it was information Alma had within him. He simply hadn’t accessed it until now.

“Do you know what you are?” the man asked, moving closer and grinning excitedly.

“I am a synthetic human,” Alma said.

Then suddenly he knew where this information was coming from. It was programmed into him. As he accessed the information for the questions being asked of him, he was able to mentally visualize his own schematics and see what he was. His core processor was where a brain would be in a human being. It carried all the information he had about the world around him, and the ability to continue learning more.

Most of his body was organic, grown in a lab and genetically engineered to function in tandem with his cybernetic parts. His brain, eyes, bone structure, and the microscopic machines in his blood stream were all robotic. The machines in his blood, that turned it a silvery color instead of red, were called nanites. They made sure his cybernetic and organic parts were compatible and functioned together in harmony.

Alma knew all this because he had access to his own blueprints. He knew that his body had been genetically engineered to be stronger, faster, and more durable and efficient than the average human was. He was still within human range of all of these aspects. But more like an Olympic athlete than someone who lived their life with a nine to five job. Everything about him was built to be better than a typical human.

Yet, he was still built to serve humans, not surpass them. He knew this just as instinctually as every other bit of information that had been programmed into him. But he wasn’t programmed to question this information. Still, he found himself wondering why he wasn’t at least considered equal to humans, rather than a product to be bought and sold for their benefit.

And an AI generated image of him.

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Hi! These are screenshots from Wattpad haha!

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Alma is so cute! :heart_eyes:

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Chapter one character extracts:

Dov Shaul
Freyja Mendel
Krista Gallant

The chapter is going through a rewrite, so final results may vary.

A few recent SDXL AI-generated character images.

Krista Gallant




Freyja Mendel




Dov Shaul




Receiving consistent character faces in SDXL can be challenging, and tinkering with the generation setups is equally addictive and time wasting.

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Introductions for Wolfbee, Featherwhisker, and Ternblossom (when they’re still kits/before the apprentice ceremony):

Meow

Wolfkit yawned as he blinked open his eyes, watching the light of the rising sun seep through the lichen curtain that covered the entrance to the nursery. He stretched out his front legs…then let out a surprised mew as something landed on him. He rolled over to stare at Featherkit, one of his sisters.

“Get up, get up, you lazy mouse!” Featherkit mewed excitedly. “Don’t you remember what today is?”

Ternkit, Wolfkit’s other sister, let out a mew from where she was sitting.

“It’s our apprentice ceremony!”

Featherkit ran over to her and pounced on her.

“That’s right!” she mewed, as Ternkit wriggled away. “I can’t wait to see who our mentors are!”

“I hope they’re nice…” Ternkit murmured softly.

“I can’t wait to see the territory!” Wolfkit added, feeling his own excitement mount.

Reference pictures that I found, for when they become warriors:

Wolfbee

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Featherwhisker

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Ternblossom

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I agree with this statement

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:wink:

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Here is mine

In the big city of Seattle, Evelyn Kelley, also known as Eve, is a known player not kill anyone in Undertale or other games that kill things. Kingdom Hearts is different than Undertale because LV means ‘Level of Violence’ in Undetale and not in the other games. Eve’s brown eyes would light up when something good happens, but it doesn’t happen often. Her red hair would sometimes get on the left side of her face. She could also play Doki Doki Literature Club and Bendy and the Ink Machine, she loves horror games a lot. She loves FNAF mostly, she watches videos about ‘Security Breach’ and other FNAF games and fangames as well. Doki Doki Literature Club is her favorite anime horror game and she cares about the Dokis. She could always try to help the Dokis out when she often fails. Her family isn’t like her at all, her little brother named JJ could kill the monsters in Undertale but never watch or play any horror games.

“Hey big sis!” said JJ in a happy tone with his blue eyes looking at Eve.

“What is it?” asked Eve in an uncomfortable voice.

“I’m going to play Undertale on the switch,” said JJ as he grabbed the switch, smiling.

“And do Genocide?” asked Eve as she looked scared.

“You know it!” said JJ happily. Eve felt sick in her stomach, she didn’t like killing as she thought of the monsters as her friends, their personalities were very different in every way.

“Why bro….?” asked Eve as she looked at him.

“It’s fun!” said JJ as Eve felt so sick.

“Killing the monsters? Hell no!” Eve walked to her room and closed the door, her room was filled with Pokemon, Kingdom Hearts, and Sonic posters, her feelings for video games will grow more than anything. Her room is her safe place, where she can just be her. Eve put her headphones on, also put some music on, and closed her eyes, thinking about her favorite games. As she fell asleep, the deeper her dream was, telling her to wake up. Eve could hear the Undertale game playing until nothing. She rolled into the ball and slept until something hit her head. Eve woke up and she blinked her eyes because she wasn’t in her room.

the pic of her

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Krista is exactly how I pictured her :grin:

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Reading your excerpt gave me Warrior cats nostalgia :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Wolfbee is such a cute name!

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The description where Nodalen smells the flowers is beautiful!

Does “Nodalen” mean something particular in her world?
And who is the cat?

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Lunar Heart, Shadow Bound:

Pinti's intro

Pinti climbed the watchtower, hoisting herself up on the roof, the highest point in Makiista Clan grounds. Away from the hustle-bustle of clan life below, she let out a deep sigh, and dangled her legs off the ledge, then noticed the bits and pieces of dried leaves stuck to her tail.

She sniffed. “Rosemary, chamomile, thyme,” she muttered, “I’m a walking herb pantry.”

It was no doubt from swishing her tail absentmindedly in the herb-drying room at home.

You’re not a child, Father would say. Of course not, Father, I would say. She scowled at having to worry about being presentable. Pinti got to work picking out the little pieces of herbs, but so much of it was tangled in her thick, fluffy tail. Took longer to take it all out than expected.

Once she was done, she lifted her head at last, noting the sun in centerstage above her head. It meant she had four hours until the official ascension ceremony to battle with her father, proving strength and cunning to the rest of the clan, and her mentor.

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