Hi! I’m new here and I’m looking for someone to give me an honest opinion about my writing, story, characters etc. If anyone would be so kind to do that, I would appreciate it because I really want to improve!
I’m writing my first draft right now, so I could send it to you when I finish
The story is about a man who took part in a secret government program that was supposed to create the perfect spy using psychotronics, but it was shut down and now he’s a criminal, selling information to anyone who pays him well. He made a mistake in the past that hurt the person he cared about and most of the story concentrates on him finding out what really happenned, and whose fault was that. It also includes remote viewing.