Working on my first draft and I’ve been really stuck on this scene(s), not sure if I can count them as one or two really. Like I’m trying to get into this project and I’m fixating on getting the vibe right and all of that so I’m just not moving forward because I want it to be good.
I was wondering if anyone had some time if they’d be willing to give it a read and give me an opinion. I’ve had my head so buried in this I don’t know what to think anymore.
It’s almost completely unedited, 6k words and it will lack some outside context seeing as this scene is not in the beginning of the book. I’m not looking for any super detailed critiques. Just want to know if its engaging and just general thoughts. I’d really really appreciate it! Let me know if you’re interested and I’ll send them to you.