✧ MULTIMEDIA HELP & CRITIQUE | share your recent art/graphics here!

dumplingbabe · May 12, 2021, 6:33pm

heyyy haven’t been in here a while but i need some critique / feedback for a photo manip i’m doing for an astronomy project i have at school

(this is one of my first ever manips so i have no idea what to improve on >.<)

i’m afraid the lighting/shadows looks unrealistic, and i’d really appreciate any feedback anyone has on this to improve! tyyy!

stella_vigo · May 12, 2021, 6:42pm

The only thing I can say is that I think the shadow for the girl should be on the opposite side. In your picture the light seems to be coming from the top, yet the shadow is pointed towards the light (the top-left). Maybe if you put it directly behind her then it would be more realistic.

But everything else looks really good. Like, whoa. You sure this is one of your firsts? It looks so professional

Manya707 · May 12, 2021, 6:51pm

THIS LOOKS AMAZING- and yeah I agree with @/stella_vigo

dumplingbabe · May 12, 2021, 7:25pm

omg i knew something was off with the shadows, thank you sm!

TheMidnightAssassin · May 12, 2021, 7:56pm

This is just amazing

deathinreverie · May 13, 2021, 10:46am

Oh my, this is absolutely stunning! Doesn’t seem like a first, that’s for sure xD
just correct the shadow for the girl, as @/stella_vigo mentioned

Was revamping an old cover but it ended up becoming this so … Thoughts?

Manya707 · May 13, 2021, 5:56pm

THAT IS GORGEOUS I-

deathinreverie · May 14, 2021, 12:42am

Thank you! I’m glad you like it!

NotARussianBot · May 14, 2021, 12:44am

What do you think of this lineart?

TheMidnightAssassin · May 14, 2021, 12:45am

Really good considering I hate line work (and it’s wobbly)

NotARussianBot · May 14, 2021, 12:45am

I kind of love line work.

Novel_Worm · May 14, 2021, 1:29am

How is it so smooth… cries

Novel_Worm · May 14, 2021, 11:18am

Made my first poster today! It’s also the graphic I made in this genre, though I’ve been wanting to try for a while!

and this is a fan cover (hand lettered!) for @/MandaMae’s book. I don’t know if it’s good enough to show to her yet… (also, please don’t judge the crown. I was lazy on it. might revisit later.)

hazelnuttys · May 15, 2021, 1:24am

i just made this cover and i dont like how it looks at all, can someone help me improve on this please

Manya707 · May 15, 2021, 1:33am

perhaps center the text and enlarge it?

hazelnuttys · May 15, 2021, 1:36am

i’ll try that, thanks ^^
i put the text at the side cause i wanted it to seem like it was on the cloud, im not sure how to explain it but i was trying to make it look 3D smismksmkms

deathinreverie · May 15, 2021, 3:00am

This is so cool! And the lineart is so smoooth!!!

deathinreverie · May 15, 2021, 3:01am

If this was a movie, I’d definitely watch it based off the poster alone! And that cover is absolutely gorgeous!

deathinreverie · May 15, 2021, 3:02am

It’s pretty, though I agree with Manya. Centering the text + enlargening it would make it look much better! Maybe you could add a texture or two? Just to make the graphics pop a bit more and add a bit more variety in terms of colour? Just my thoughts though! You do you!

deathinreverie · May 15, 2021, 3:06am

Been a while since I made a colouring. This is all cold blues, even though that hadn’t been what I intended originally xD but oh well. Thoughts?
yes, the images don’t coordinate well for the colouring but jeez is it difficult to get images as such so, I gave up xD