My organization isn't fleshed out enough and might not fit the story anymore.

I don’t even know what is similar to my book.

That is where I struggle.

Yeah.

just consume things in the same genres.

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i mean more detailed.

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Ah, understood.

So you’re telling me there’s a whole organisation of knights that don’t fight? What do they even do? How are they expected to be bodyguards without any combat experience? How do they help people? What are these “missions”? How do they end wars lol with a hug and a handshake?

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Purging nations. Meaning they set magical bombs that turn the entire nation into a toxic wasteland.

They solve problems for nations that they can’t solve themselves. From things on a national level to a local level.

They do have combat experience.

In a way, yes.

Search and rescue, bodyguard work, sending out aid, stopping wars, and taking on odd jobs.

So… they do fight. I think you need to really have a deep think about it. What we’re dealing with is a faction. This article will help you; there’s a bunch of questions for you to answer. Go into detail.

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Thanks :blush:

I have a small group who call themselves Sentinel’s… They keep watch over a few towns to the east… Similar duties as such as the KUA I guess…

If Knights and Saints don’t seem to fit, try some new ideas for replacing Knights, but keep the Union Alliance.

SD

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another thing you can try is
ask yourself what if…
and then fill in the what if

like what if the knights hate technology?
and just answer those.
you don’t have to use all of them. but you might find something. or it may generate a spark.

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Interesting.

I might have an idea :bulb:.

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Saints work, but the Knights might work after this idea that I got.