After losing during the ancient war then gaining a severe injury, a former Saint named Renna gets transported into the future thus becoming an eight year old Gaian girl with memory loss. Fast forward to many years later when the eight year girl is now a twenty-two year old woman and wealthy heiress to the Calverstone Family named Jorildyn. The moment she decides to become a Knight of the KUA, some of her memories come back in pieces. Eventually, Jorildyn will unravel the truth about herself and her lost memories, what has changed in the world since the ancient war, and why becoming a Knight is so important to her past memories. She works with a princess of the many First Dynasties who are the offspring and descendants to the very Saints that are ruling the world, becomes a Knight to not just save her family and figure out a way to dismantle the system. All of this is happening while Renna’s fallen Saints continue to search for their missing queen, while they cause chaos to the world as a rebel faction targeting the very Saints and the First Dynasties themselves.
That is the plot of the story now that I analyzed it better. Does this plot remind you of any stories or anything you know? And I don’t mean the tropes so to speak.
Honestly, this plot is NOTHING like One Piece or Tower of God. My other comments and threads are me wishing that it was. The only way I am trying to make Project Glorious in likeness to One Piece and Tower of God is through the world-building, magic system, lore and etc which is a BEHEMOTH.
Plot wise, the story is something totally different, based on something I don’t even know.
This sounds very well thought out, and as such the whole Time Scale of when her memories come back gives rise to little things that could intrude her dreams before she becomes of age also… Little dips into her child age and teenage also (stuff that portents the future in subtle ways), and much harder imagery in latter years…
But I feel that from what you have said in your plot blurb that even if there was something similar, you have given enough diversity to your tale that it could stand alone in its genre and world building alone.
And when I get some time I will read it, and offer my comments in kind… With honesty…
As no one likes crit, I will only crit if I feel it will be helpful, and I will add my reasons only… By that I will mean no harm…
