R4R betas: I have the start of a book

I am looking for people to give me an impression of my work so far. It is six chapters so far, not too long and I will return the favor. I don’t necessarily have a preference on what to review, but would be opposed to sexually explicit themes, thank you.
Oh, and of course, who could forget everyone’s favorite forms!

Title/Link: Never: Children of World’s End
Synopsis: The inevitable occurs: a clash between worlds bridged by the novelty of time travel. Kristina Seward is only 13 years old, but with the aid of her brother and a mysterious mentor, she will attempt to enter the dark places of the universe and come back alive.


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