The Knighthood Union Alliance needs an enemy. The only enemy that I can think of is the Ravakalyn.
So, I have decided to make the Ravakalyn the main antagonist along with Jorildyn who is still the protagonist of the story.
Because I just came up with this idea of Knights fighting against the vile evil that are the Ravakalyn, I decided to keep that for the second draft. I’m going to continue the first draft, but the second draft will have the change.
The Ravakalyn are Saints who lost their divinity and became demonic eldritch beings that have three forms. They are always in their Anti and Shadow forms, but only turn into their Alter form when they enter the Alagossian society to blend among the other races.
The Knights are tasked to fight off against these creatures which are scattered across the world, creating havoc and destruction.
That’s going to be Project Red’s new story idea for the second draft and beyond.
How do you defeat a deadly enemy that is well hidden among your own kind?
Thoughts and feelings?
