I think that’s one of the problems with books today. Writers don’t want to let their characters sin, but that would actually make them more relatable. They’re just so paranoid that readers today will think the character is a mouthpiece for the author and then slam the book with one star reviews on Goodreads, so they don’t let their characters say anything touchy.
I catch myself being like, “oh, well, maybe I shouldn’t have MC say THAT”
but then I have to remind myself that the MC could say that or have such-and-such beliefs, and then have a discussion about it, depending on how controversial it is in our society.
But what if none of them have a discussion? Is it the author’s responsibility to make the character discuss something that they really don’t actually care to discuss?
I tend to have the opposite problem. I think my Israeli characters are far too polite and restrained in their dialogues…Even Krista, who’s outward personality is basically a hormonal Asuka (her inner personality is like a mother-hen Triela), might be too mild…Real-world Israelis are renowned for having no internal filter, and no concept of personal space or privacy.* They will tell you what they think as they think it. Political correctness and social etiquette be damned.
-Israeli No1: “Remember, when you’re overseas, never talk about politics, religion, or sex.”
-Israeli No2: “But what else is there to talk about?”
~ a joke I found in a Israel travel guide book.
*Israel is a social country; everyone knows everything about everyone. ~ paraphrased quote from The Start-Up Nation.
*A secret is a piece of information you tell to one person at a time. ~ The Israelis: Ordinary People in an Extraordinary Land.
I think Japan’s social culture is the exact opposite of Israel’s culture. Before the times of Covid, there was a direct-flight service between Tokyo and Tel Aviv. That would have been an interesting trip.
There are several swear words in Hebrew.* Israelis also use Yiddish, Arabic and sometimes Russian curses. But they’re nothing like Australia’s curse vocabulary…That is to say, Australia’s vocabulary…
*A small selection I found on the internet.
zonna – whore, bitch
gachba – whore
ben-zonna – son of a bitch
bat-zonna – daughter of a whore
kelba – bitch
#shar-moota – slutty slut
chara – shit
zoobie – fuck it
manyak – bastard
miz-day-en – fucker
meh-toom-tam – stupid
tim-toom – stupidity
lech tiz-day-en – fuck off (to a male)
lechie tiz-day-nee – fuck off (to a female)
tistom-tah-peh – shut the fuck up (to a male)
tistamee-tah-peh – shut the fuck up (to a female)
tachat – ass
zine – dick
zine be-ayn – a dick in your eye (refusal to do something)
koos – pussy
#manoosh – pussy
nod – fart
#koos-EM-ek – your mother’s pussy
koos-em-em-em-em-em-EM-ek – your mo-mo-mo-mo-mother’s pussy (used to really exaggerate your anger, with stress on the last EM)
hapess me sheh ya-enay-otcha – go find someone to jerk you off
be-tachat-shelcha – up your ass
zine beh-sechel – you’re fucking my brain
(source)
Oh, during my trip to Israel (far too long ago) I continued the Australian tradition of giving the locals a thumbs up, as a sign of agreement or approval. About a month into my trip, I learnt the thumbs up translates into the middle finger (if not worse) in Israel. That explained the bizarre looks people gave me, and I ceased immediately.
If musicians can create whatever they want to and market it, why the hell are writers scared to do that?
The best way to be heard is to be your own hypeman. It’s not about the money, it’s about making a difference. The top publishing companies only care about the formulaic schlock that makes them money, so why not take a risk, self-publish, and keep most of that yourself? Who cares if you aren’t as popular as Colleen Hoover and don’t have her fanbase? I know I’d much rather have five loyal fans than thousands of TikTok girlies who will drop me when the next big thing comes along.
The art and telling a story should always come first. Then, whatever popularity and marketing you get from it should be a bonus. I know that everyone wants to be the next big thing, but you can be dropped at a hat if you try and edge out of the box you’ve written yourself into. Do you really wanna be known for one thing and trapped there for the rest of your life? No, you don’t.
You need to believe in your story, and yourself if you want to be a real writer. Everything else will come afterward. The big publishing companies can give you resources, but they are the ones in control, not you. Are the contracts and the money really worth the misery when you run out of steam?
Starting Part 4 of Chapter 1 since things are slowly revealing up to what is really going on. Not really stating in terms of the overall plot, but minor part of Jorildyn’s role as a Knight.
Chapter 1’s newer title that actually fits the chapter overall.
Returning back to Chapter 0, the things that happened in that chapter GREAT, TRULY GREATLY needs to be addressed as the story progresses.
Got to, attempt to, TRY TO jot things down before I make mistakes and getting things wrong, regardless of if it is first draft.
The plot overall and what evil await Jorildyn and who could potentially be the main big bad in the story. Also, touching more on Jorildyn’s backstory and mixed race’s history, along the meaning behind name/racial slur bestowed to her.
The story’s title and deciding if this needs to have second and third book in the future. I believe that it does need it.
That is all I got. Going go drink some coffee to keep me fully till dinner.
I want to bring this story in an unexpected direction, a very unexpected one. Something that no one sees coming, but weirdly works as a concept. I want people to be like “oh, wow”.