I feel similarly about this
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I was worried there for a while because my idea was so full of holes…
I wanted to do a plot twist at the end but the problem is that it’s been done before, more than once, and so it’s become an expectation at this point and it doesn’t have the same effect.
So I’m going to do a plot twist on a plot twist. Hehe. It sounds cool in theory. Let’s hope I can deliver.
I’m not out of the woods yet though. I still need to figure out what the Sams want.
Ideas?
What could a pair of siblings (adults) want from a medium?
Deliver a message to a dead relative? Reason with a ghost that’s haunting them? Perform a cool ritual to flex on their friends?
One idea I was toying with is if one of them was doing a ritual and it went bad and now they need a medium to fix it. 
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Maybe they want this
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Look at all these names for my fictional characters for The Breakers Series.
Damn…
EDIT: NOT ANYMORE! I am going to choose my favorite names and make changes! 
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IDEA GENERATED.
I know what I’m doing.
I’m scrapping the earlier rewrite idea because I have a better one. Thankfully, I didn’t spend a lot of time on the other one.
We’ve got ourselves a ghost story about a pair of paranormal investigators that get a bit more than what they signed up for.
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I had a similar idea before. Imagine Supernatural but halfway through the first season they are accompanied by a complete wildcard warlock werewolf Satanist of German descent.
Yes, you can steal my idea.
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On Topic: I am going to attempt to figure out things with The Breakers Series.
Off Topic: Meh, I got nothing. No…wait…it is hot as hell in my bedroom, but I don’t want to turn the fan on…screw it.
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I figure out the FOUR plot lines to The Breaker Series and I’ve made some changes to the overall story.
Twenty chapters plus an epilogue and a prologue and all of these chapter are broken into four somewhat lengthy parts.
That is my story. I really couldn’t do it the other way, so I named made the titles chapter titles and whatnot instead.
Here is the final product that is much better than the last one in opinion.
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Damn…made an oopsie while doing the screenshot.
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Ah-ha! I think Red Reign could potentially do good as a sort of lengthy short story set on Llyria, but turn into a horror novel.
Hmm… that sounds much better than what I was originally going for. This will be a fun experience too. I never fully attempted to write horror in play format.
So, I am going to do it that way. Just for purely fun.
NOTE: I am still working on The Breakers Novel, but it will be me trying to work on two things at once to give myself a change in story pace.
Nothing else to report.
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I think a simple, emotional reason is the best, even if it was done before. So I vote for an important ‘unfinished business’ with a living person, something life-altering.
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Yes. In the end, I finally cracked it. No plot twists needed.
They’re YouTube ghost chasers who want to get better audience and patrons so a real medium would be a good addition to their team.
But they have to convince him first.
It’s a simple premise actually which is awesome. I’m looking forward to simple.
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I have a little project called Meteorite and my main character has NO FREAKING NAME. Her parents never named her and she is older and nameless. People don’t even know what to call her or like her because she is just there. Her father dislikes her and for some reason, never kicked her to the curb. The same applies to her mother who died years ago. Her father is a captain of a space ship that can break down at any given moment. But her father is drunkard and an asshole who cherishes the ship more than his own daughter. Eventually, he will fix the ship and around that time, he will get rid of his daughter (the nameless main character) by ditching her on a planet somewhere.
The MC’s adventure will take place on some random planet where she learns who she really is and makes a name for herself.
So, yeah, I have a nameless MC who will later gift herself a name unlike her useless parents Roth and Lira.
This is an experience. And it is written in first person, which makes it all the more better in my opinion.
Ha! Funny!
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I was so wrong in a sense! Estelle (the nameless MC) was abandoned by Roth (her father) along with the ship that is also named Estelle for reasons unknown. My MC named herself after her “father” abandoned her along with the ship that she thought he cared about more than anything in the world.
She is currently on a desert planet or rather in the middle of a desert on some planet all alone and has been asleep for five whole days unaware that Roth and the crew were getting ready to leave the ship go elsewhere.
Man, Roth and even Lira(the mother) are assholes to the extreme. Damn…Estelle, I feel for ya!
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Slightly Off Topic: Wanna read some webtoons, but have the urge to keep writing and creating.
On Topic: I want to write, but don’t know if I should start on The Breakers Novel, the slightly new version of Red Reign, or go back to Project Meteorite.
Off Topic: I places to be tomorrow and it is 6: 32 pm. I will to go to sleep soon to get ready. I want to go, but man I just want to stay home. I must go to help my mother out since she is slowly recovering from a bad back.
Meh, whatever, I’ll go because I want to help out and that will make me want to write even more.
Nothing else to report and I tired to chatting about random nonsensical things on here that don’t often times pertain to my writing endeavor.
So, I am going to do something before my it is bedtime.
See ya later!
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Managed to finish a chapter yesterday! (and start the next one ~)
Considering the characters are finally in the last place they needed to be, the next couple of chapters will have more action compared to the “slower” previous 2 chapters.
Though classes start again in just 4 days, so we’ll see how much progress I can make before drowning in classwork & studies
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I LOVE it! It is a fresh take on Ghost Busters, so you have a ‘sleeper’ comp that will help you. Go you! It’s a fantastic premise.
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I got back from going out with my mother and now I am going to write, have YouTube or anime in the background going, and hopefully read some webtoons.
I need to finish The God of High School (webtoon) and finish rereading Tower of God (webtoon), even though I am all caught up but I just want to refresh my memory and enjoy myself. There are two other webtoons I need to get back to reading which is Solo Leveling and The Great Mage Returns After 4000 Years. Plus, I need to finish the latest chapter of my glorious One Piece manga.
I wanted to read Marital Peak and some other webtoons too, but that can wait a bit.
Marital Peak is over 2k chapters like come on I can’t catch up that fast!
So, I got reading and writing to get finish and my god I know what I want to do with The Breakers Novel and overall stories set in the fictional world of Llyria.
I shall return to explain more.
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I haven’t actually thought about Ghost Busters. Hmmm. Interesting.
I think I know what I’m going to rewatch this weekend.
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The thing about Llyria is that it needs to be written in a series of stories that are set in the world rather a novel series.
I can still focus on the world of Llyria but with different characters doing different things in the world.
So, The Breakers Novel’s chapter titles will be turned into separate stories whether standalone novels or short stories.
I will do other short stories or even standalone novels set in Llyria.
I WILL NOT DO A NOVEL SERIES FOCUSED IN LLYRIA!!! I refused and I don’t want to change my mind.
I am doing too much! I hate it!
Qualeshia, calm the fuck down!
So, I am going to do some writing and get back into reading webtoons and manga.
Enough talking…time to get to work.
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