Well, who wants to gush on our male MAIN characters with me? Well, come friends!

My very rough response…

He is both a formidable (former) warrior, unusually strong and robust even among those of his past profession, yet he is also comically gentle, passive, and defenceless against other characters half his age and one-fifth his size (i.e. Freyja and Krista). Little can upset or unnerve this character, although attempting to upset or harm one of his few friends is a great way to attain his undivided (extremely hostile) attention.*

*Don’t give a machine gunner a reason to do his job ~ The Fat Electrician.

Dov Shaul. Dov is Hebrew for ‘bear’ (a teddy to his friends, a grizzly to his enemies). Shaul is Hebrew for ‘an honoured gentile’. Dov is agnostic Norse (Viking) Pagan, and his family have a generations-old bond with the Jewish community.
Dov once served in the Australian Commandos (scout-sniper / machine gunner). Dov enlisted at the age of 18, and left the Army at the age of 24. Dov is now Freyja’s mentor and close companion, and Krsita’s housemate, verbal punching bag, (secret) close friend.

Is that a joke, a death wish, or both? ~ Primarch Corvus Corax Dov Shaul.

Dov would probably laugh at the thought of some civilian challenging him. While in the Commandos, Dov represented the Army for inter-service, and inter-armed forces, AFL and boxing matches. He rarely lost. If any of Dov’s new housemates heard said civvie threatening Dov…well…Dov would not have time to respond before the offending Rocky wannabe became pink mist.*

*There is no physical way to get unalived faster than to screw around with the girls’ Dov ~ The Fat Electrician (edited).
*A real man? I was raised among and raised by real men. I was trained by and have fought alongside real men. You are a sad imitation, a pathetic mockery of a real man ~ Hannah, to the Rocky impersonator.

None at the moment, although Krista has plans.

No, but yes. Unknown to Dov, he is part-clone (ref. Freyja). When Dov resumes his Commando exercises, as a part of Freyja’s training, Dov surpasses his previous physical peaks attained during his Army service. Dov’s already impressive healing rate is also revealed to have received a discrete boost, thanks to some undisclosed gene editing conducted while the (medically) comatose Dov was in Dr Lander’s care.

Dov believes he is average to moderately attractive,* but many of Dov’s new female housemates (from veteran mercenaries to hormonal teenagers) believe Dov fits comfortably within the handsome category.
*Dov never had much of an ego, and his Special Forces career excised the little he had. Dov learnt, in combat, your ego is a bigger threat than hostile fire.

Dov left the Commandos, but the Commandos didn’t leave Dov (physically, at least). However, Dov’s emotions are often his greatest weakness. He is adverse to risking conflict with those who are no threat to him, or those who have no underlying desire to harm him (despite what their outlandish antics suggest, ref. Krista). This has resulted in some unusual friendships where the towering monstrosity of an Aussie was bossed around by a diminutive though iron-willed figure.* A weakness Krista is both keen to exploit, and eager to protect.

*Dov is a veteran of a score of engagements, and a warrior beyond peer, but he is not a leader ~ Helsreach audio book (edited).
*Their need reaches out to your heart as naturally as a flower turns to the sun, and they trap you ~ Exodus (1960s film).
*I pushed you, and pushed you, in search of your limits, only to discover you didn’t have any ~ Citizen X.

In the normal world, Dov handled them reasonably well. In Karen’s world, Dov is often floundering. Dov has to learn, fast, that many of the old world’s morals, ethics, norms, etc, are now irrelevant.* For example, Dov expected Polanski (and Wolff) to be more guarded / cautious about a foreign man becoming their daughter’s (Krista’s) friend, but neither cared. Polanski seemed more concerned about Krista leading their new housemates astray…at least give the jet-lagged Dov a chance to unpack first…

*When you stepped into my theater the outside world vanished, so why does its opinion matter? ~ Dr Lander.
*I was mafia once, now I’m in private security. Both those worlds required a unique set of morals, but I discarded those long ago. All that matters is friendship and loyalty ~ Karen (Lambs to Lions short story).

Also Karen’s mercenaries tend to view Dov’s companionship with the overly devoted Freyja as comical or adorable, and they otherwise leave their new housemates alone (sometimes),** further unsettling Dov, again expecting a more traditional (hyper-protective Israeli) response.*** To be fair, it’s not the most unusual situation the mercenaries encountered among their number.

**Don’t worry about upsetting my fighters. If I say you are kosher, and you respect them, then no problems ~ Karen.
**One, perhaps. Everyone will return on Wednesday. Good luck with their blunt curiosity ~ Polanski.

***Betray my family, break Freyja’s heart, I feed you to the desert ~ Hannah.

Dov grew up on a farm to the west of Toowoomba, Queensland, as the eldest of four children. Dov had one brother and two sisters (twins). After Dov left the Army he lived alone in a Brisbane apartment. Now, Dov just moved into Karen’s fortress-villa situated south of Be’er Sheva, Israel.

Dov’s solitary at times withdrawn nature resulted in Dov only having a few friends in Australia. Now he doesn’t have any parental figures or mentors (that’s his role, in a sense). Although Karen or Polanski or Hannah sometimes act as advisors.

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@alenatenjo

Don’t answer the appearance part, but everything else is fine.

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Sticking with the main main characters for this one too so only one person for a change :joy:

He’s still working on letting people see the kind of person he is. A traumatic death experience will do that to a person. But he’s very kind, caring, and loyal, is a hell of a lot smarter than people think, and is one of the very few of the main / main main characters with a voice of reason, and sense of right and wrong and relatively “normal” morals because he’s only newly Immortal

Colt Kymmer. He’s a member of the Queen’s Court but I still haven’t fully developed his exact role in it

“If that is what you believe, then I believe it is safe to say you have issues. Have a nice day”

Remember in the main female character thread how I said Amneris was in a complicated relationship? Yeah this is the other side of said complicated relationship :joy:

Yes, but he’s only recently become open to using his powers in public. Not human, just humanoid

Same answer as the female thread. I genuinely have no idea because I can’t see people that way so struggle to write what other people think of looks :joy:

Physically? Strength of your average Immortal. Emotionally and/or mentally? The dude is newly Immortal after being dead for almost 5,000 years so there’s still a few screwed loose, if you know what I mean. But all things considered, I’d say he’s doing very well emotionally and/or mentally

Not very well :joy: He’s still figuring them out because he’s new to the God Worlds (relatively speaking) and the “modern” age

Later down the line, he gets “adopted” by Lvaane as well but currently he doesn’t have a parent/parental figure that he shares a close bond with because, well, they’re all dead.

Current home life? Chaotic. He’s still getting used to living with nine other people. To say it’s an adjustment is putting it lightly, but they’re helping him sort things out

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Dang it I saw the message after I pressed send :rofl:

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Anybody want to give this one a try too?
Bump.

Hugo

He’s nervous in new situations, or when meeting new people, but he’s extremely friendly to his family and friends

Hugo Cooper, student like the others

He’s the type who will blame himself for something said to him, so he’ll think the person is right.

He’ll eventually realize his feelings for Crystal

Human, has telekinesis

A lot of people see him as cute. He has black hair and green eyes.

He doesn’t know who his father is. He has a good bond with his mother (who was worried about him until she met his friends, she still worries but it’s less then it used to be).

Dylan

He’s calm and collected. He prefers not to fight, but he will if he needs to defend or avenge someone he cares about.

Dylan Tailor

Just ignores them

He doesn’t really want that

Human, has hydrokinesis

Pretty attractive. He has two colored hair (black and white), as well as heterochromia (one eye is blue, one is green).

He was adopted by Crystal’s father (who, like mentioned in the other thread, is a teacher at the school). He has a good bond with him, as well as with Crystal.

Zephyr

He’s generally aloof. He cares deeply about those he cares about, if in a situation where they’re in danger, he’ll tell them to run, even if he’s in danger as well. He’s usually the one who starts the bickering with Crystal, but he still cares about her.

Zephyr Thorn

He’ll either ignore them, or decide he has to prove himself

Not dating anyone, no crushes

Human, has aerokinesis

Average, has orange hair and amber eyes

His mother died in childbirth. He cares a lot about his father, who is also a teacher at the school.

Kopa

He’s also pretty aloof, although less then Zephyr

Kopa Boater

He’ll just walk away from them

Also no romance

Human, geokinesis

Average, brown hair and hazel eyes

He cares deeply about both parents, although his bond is better with his mother

Damini

He can come off as aggressive. This is worse when he feels someone he cares about is being threatened. When bickering with Kopa, Zephyr, and Crystal, he has a tendency to go at it for longer, but just like the others, he still cares about them. He will easily jump in to defend them if needed.

Damini Bud

“Want me to prove otherwise?”

He’s dating Calida

Human, electrokinesis

Average, blond hair and brown eyes

He has a good bond with both parents, but stronger with his father

Kiran

He’s pretty laid-back, unless acting in defense

Kiran Smith

Ignore them, walk away, or ask them what they mean

He’s had a few crushes

Human, lumokinesis

He’s not extremely attractive, but he’s also not unattractive. He has white hair and green eyes.

Has a strong bond with his parents and step-parents, as well as his twin sister, Adriana. He tries to keep Adriana from overworking herself.

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Let’s do JD + Gabriel but JD first

  • What’s the main character’s name? What do they do for a living?

Juan David but everyone calls him JD, and he’s unemployed at the moment. He used to work as a dishwasher but he got fed up with that and quit his job. He’s currently looking for work, but is getting money through his “Sugar Daddy” and lover, Gabriel.

  • Someone tells your male character “you’re not a real man” how would they respond?

Just shrug and say “well, my biology begs to differ”. He doesn’t need to prove himself to anyone.

  • Is romance in life? Not at all? Maybe some day?

At the moment, he’s sorta dating Gabriel. Since he’s 20, this is his first “real relationship” with someone.

  • Do they use magic? Are they a humanoid species? Magical human? Just plain human?

No, but he thinks he might have accidentally used some to get Gabriel :joy:

  • Is the character a visionary beauty? Average in looks? Plain yet unappealing?

JD is about 5’10, shaved head, dark eyes, athletic, strong cheekbones, muscular. Clean shaven mostly but occasionally grows facial hair.

  • How strong is this character(s) in terms of emotionally, physically, and/or mentally?

Pretty strong physically and mentally and stoic emotionally. Can be a bit headstrong at times.

  • How does your character(s) handle their societal norms in their world?

He doesn’t care.

  • What’s their home life and what parent or parental figure do they share a closer bond with?

None of them, though his Dad tries to have a closer bond.

  • What is it about your male MAIN character(s) that you like most of all in terms of personality, character, motivations, mannerisms, and anything else?

I like how he’s actually pretty chill for a Churroverse guy :smiley:

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The main character from my new story.

He’s quite frustrating, really. He’s selfish, wayward, doesn’t make the best decisions. He’s in the throes of limerence, so I understand. He’s very charming though.

Arom. He’s a godling. And like the rest of the youth in Heaven, he’s idle; he doesn’t do anything for a living.

He would say they are correct, he is not a real man. Throughout his journey he actively pushes against the ideas and virtues of “manliness”.

Oh he’s in love alright.

He performs godly miracles: gifts the sound of Sweetness, steals the Beauty of songs, wraps his own shadow around his lover to shield him from the elements. That sort of thing.

He’s the God of Love so he’s quite sexy. He’s one of the two famed beauties of Heaven: himself and the mortal Ganymedes.

Not especially strong. Of course he’s got a beautiful physique, though not Gladiatorial. He can throw a spear and string a bow. Not very violent… yet.

Emotionally and mentally fraught, naturally capricious. He’s struggling with love & longing, responsibility, old prophecies. He outwardly carries a lightness in his disposition, which takes strength I think.

He upends it with wanton whoring and homosexuality.

He lives in Heaven, and is closer to his father because of proximity. His father is the god Vulcan, and his mother is the goddess Venus. They had divorced when Arom was very young, and since then Venus had preferred to spend most of the year down on earth.

He is beloved by everyone in Heaven (not by Ganymedes though). He sleeps during the day and spends his evenings with the youths of heaven in pursuit of pleasure. His squad includes: Hercules, the Champion of Rome; the Muses Cleo and Thalia; the Winds Zephyr and Euros; the goddess Victoria; and the goddess Proserpina, Regina Inferna.

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Michael

His love for his sister. He’s also a kind boy. When he has a goal, he’s determined to see it through and is willing to do whatever it takes to get there.

Michael is supposed to be going to school but he’s joined a street gang… :grimacing:

If that someone is not the gang members, his bottom lip will quiver and he will look down at his feet and say, “Sure I am” in a small voice. If it is the gang members, he will look at them and laugh and say “And that makes YOU a real man when you scream like a girl at spiders?”

He’s never thought about it. He’s fifteen and he’s got more important things to think about. Not once does he think about it until book 2 :smirk:

Michael does have an ability, but it’s unclear what it exactly is.

He actually has the ability to accurately predict what will happen during the present action. He can see it happening before it happens. Kind of like the guy in the movie Equalizer being able to predict how something will happen and then act on it afterwards in the exact same way. It’s hard for Michael to realize the ability because it also just seems like he has good intuition in the moment. In book 2, it will surprise him once in a magical way.

He’s an average looking kid. I think I remember from my notes…he has brown eyes.

Michael acts strong and he does slowly actually become strong, or so he thinks.

By joining a street gang XD He’s a little revolutionary.

Michael has a good relationship with his mother, and he loves his sister and wants to be her protector. He has a strained relationships with his father but only because he feels inferior in front of his father who was a legendary detective.


Michael also has an anger issue. He can get really angry and go absolutely crazy. That part of him is a dark side he unfortunately inherits from his father’s side. His father’s family has a history of mental issues and one is manic episodes (and possibly bipolar, but unclear because I’m not a psychologist). Michael can become angry and almost like another person and beat up people which is how the street gang initially found him and took him in.

Michael himself is on one hand afraid of this side of himself and on the other hand thinks if he can use it well, he can make himself strong with it and protect his sister.

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Apparently never did this one, so I’ll give it a shot:

Diego

What is it about your male MAIN character(s) that you like most of all in terms of personality, character, motivations, mannerisms, and anything else?

Honestly, his design is highly based off Vampire Hunter D and Hellsing aesthetics so there’s a bit of my own preferences reflected on him. Personality-wise, he’s a slight deconstruction of the “mysterious and stoic badass loner” type, which is fun to explore.

What’s the main character’s name? What do they do for a living?

Diego Manzur, professional paranormal crime investigator.

Someone tells your male character “you’re not a real man” how would they respond?

He doesn’t care about the ideal of “manliness”, more so doing his job well, so… he wouldn’t care.

Is romance in life? Not at all? Maybe some day?

He’s terribly inexperienced with romance due to his not-so-good social skills and dedication to his job, so it makes for amusing interactions with Marta (who does have more experience). He does slowly create and grow a bond with her, with a strong possibility of romance down the line.

His choice of clothing, creepy stare, and large amounts of scarring make him unappealing at a glance. He does have a muscular build, so your mileage may vary :joy:

Physically and mentally strong enough to go up against spooky ghosts and demons, weaker on the emotional side. He doesn’t use many words to express himself.

Actively goes against a lot social norms and boundaries if it means getting his assignment done, including trespassing and pushing potential teammates aside under the excuse of it being for their own safety.

He more or less lives at his employer’s HQ when he’s not traveling for his job. Does have a good relationship with his parents and grandfather, even if his father doesn’t agree with the “family trade”.

Octavio

He is fairly new and not as developed yet, but I think it’ll be interesting to explore a royal necromancer character and how he interacts with the protagonist (Lilian/a). Despite being a necromancer, he is not evil and mainly wants to keep his few remaining people safe.

He was the crown prince of a desert kingdom, now functioning as king (despite no official coronation ceremony) due to the royal family being wiped out except him. Most of his kingdom is in ruins too, save for the very few living villagers and a lot of undead roaming around. The undead are loyal to him, at least.

Considering his current physical state? Yeah, he’s not a “real” man :joy:

Not at all, especially with what happened to his kingdom and him being left to deal with the aftermath.

He is technically human, but he’s involuntarily stuck in his lich form by the time Liliana and Aleksei meet him. In theory, he could recover his human form (won’t spoil how :wink:). He is also a necromancer and can manipulate life, summon and communicate with the dead. However, he currently can’t use his magic to its full scope… so far I’m thinking because of a curse.

He currently looks like a giant skeletal monster, so high chance he scares most people away :woman_shrugging:

He doesn’t look bad in his human form, but his people tend to be really pale due to getting little light in their region.

Hard to say since I haven’t written this story yet, but at the moment he seems depressed and even hopeless about his current situation. Despite that, he is kind and protective of his remaining subjects, and I feel he has a darker side that could come out if someone he cares about is in danger (and considering his magic, this could be dangerous).

Octavio and his people follow their culture’s norms without issue, but tend to enter into conflict with other nations due to their practice of necromancy.

Used to have a good relationship with his family when they were alive. With them gone, he now has a good bond with some of his subjects, though his castle is now mostly empty and left to slowly rot without maintenance.

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