Writing a novel based on a medical theory set in a science-fantasy setting?

I am doing my research, but honestly it is a bit tough—still I am doing as much as I can.

I made a thread weeks ago about a story called Inside the Chaos. Now, I want to change that story entirely to something else.

Here is the plot:

A young woman winds up in a car accident. Although she lives through the accident, she has to undergo surgery to get a brain transplant because of how severe the car accident is. The brain came from a donor who was a criminally insane serial killer which is now in the head of the woman due to negligence on the facilities part. Now, the female male is on the path of recovery, until she winds up acting out of character as time progresses. Things get worse when the female male kills her mentor and goes on the run. She even kills her parents, but her brother goes to unravel the mystery of what happened to his sister along with the origins of the donor facility.

The story focuses on both the sister and the brother.

My question is strictly research related: If brain transplant was a possibility, do you think there will be an outcome of something like this story, just far less exaggerated?

What are your thoughts on the plot and the question?

Thoughts and feelings?

NOTE: THE MAN AND WOMAN AREN’T HUMAN AND IT IS SET ON A FICTIONAL PLANET!!!

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Sounds something like the movie Dark CIty with Keifer Sutherland, where a doctor switches people’s memories around to see if they’ll act on those memories or whether their true soul will prevail. He puts the memories of a serial killer into one guy to see if that dude will go on to commit murder, but there’s a little something different about that guy…

Good movie! Ought to watch it if you get a chance and like gothic sci-fi. (*^-‘) 乃

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I think it is a good plot, but a human body can not survive without a brain, as the brain stem controls breathing and a lot of other things, and the operation to do so is very complex.

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Its an interesting idea! Itd be a complicated operation (plus there’s the chance of organ rejection to worry about) but good to explore it

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Some animals can regrow parts of their brain…of course, some animals don’t have a brain at all…

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I’m having a hard time understanding the why behind a transplant like this. It wouldn’t save the life of the person in the host body (in this case, the woman). Because the sense of self is contained within the brain, it would only be saving the life of the person who owns the brain (in this case, the criminal man). So, who is behind saving the life of a criminally insane serial killer by giving him the body of a now deceased (brain dead) woman? Who would want to do that? I’m curious about the motive behind that.

But I suppose that is only indirectly related to your question. If it were possible to do a brain transplant, I don’t think it would be done in this manner, so it wouldn’t line up with the story, no. Because, again, the brain is what contains the sense of self, and arguably, the “soul” or life of a person is tied to the brain because of that. So, if scientists or brain surgeons were to perform a brain transplant, it would be to save the life of the person who donated the brain, not the life of whoever’s body the brain was going into.

There’s a whole lot of various ethical concerns about using a brain dead person’s body that is only alive through life support to house another person’s functional brain as well, because those are both two separate people, or were before the transplant, and while you may be saving one life by doing so, you would also be causing immense trauma and lowering the quality of life for that person, while taking advantage of the dead to do so. That’s a whole mess that, as listed above, would require some incredibly interesting, if unlikely motives to make someone go through with doing the surgery at all.

It would make more sense to clone or genetically engineer a body for the brain, that is more compatible with it and won’t be violating human rights (at least not as much) to do so - or even use a robot and somehow hook the brain up to control it like a mech suit - than it would to transplant one person’s brain into the body of another person’s. Logistically, it just doesn’t make sense to me, unless it was some mad scientist’s experiment and they had something personal invested in such a procedure. Perhaps they were a relative of the criminally insane serial killer man’s and thought he was wrongly sentenced to death (I assume that’s how the brain was donated)? Then, out of desperation, they may use a readily available body of someone recently deceased, if the body was in good condition. It may be cheaper, but it would also be a crime to do so, so they would indeed have to be desperate.

That’s just an idea though. But it’s the only one I can think of that might make sense in this situation. Otherwise, it seems like a bit of a stretch logistically. The person performing the surgery would have to be, at the very least, morally unsound, if not mentally unsound as well.

It’s a very interesting concept, but one that requires a lot more in depth thought in order for you to spin a story around it that is capable of suspending disbelief in the reader.

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Well, that’s understandable. I really came up with this idea on the fly and really didn’t put much thought into it

Also, the characters aren’t exactly human which makes this a challenge.