An exercize in Characterization and Description

This time, instead of using an image, I’m going to give the start of a scene, and you’re free to add elements to describe it from your character’s POV.

Scene: Ink spilled on a page, an inkpot laying abandoned on the side.

Sara

The masi was still fresh, its’ burnt smell filling her nostrils. Someone must’ve mixed it recently. The writer also seemed to have left in a hurry, the pot spilt over the book, likely to blot out the content on those pages. She’d gotten to them, clearly. The liquid was still wet. Her suspect couldn’t be too far.

Malika

A book - could she even call it that when it’s pages were so tattered and worn? It was clearly made of thin recycled paper, what with it’s already muddy color. The book lay open, the text on it obscured by masi that looked like water with munisicle amount of ash and glue inside of it.
She could barely even smell the fresh mix, what with its’ diluted content.
Not a man of taste she had on her hands, clearly.

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Sorry for being really late to this :sweat_smile:

Arden

Arden held up the photograph. As her veiled gaze lingered on the picture her fingers held, she breathed a soft sigh.

Morgan Stafanen. She was still five years old in that photo. Her hair was a light brown, tumbling to her shoulders in waves and fastened by a flower on one side. Though it could not be seen, Arden knew that the little girl’s eyes were a light brown as well, albeit a bit darker in hue, like caramel. Her eyes were caramel, soft and sweet, like the smile that she was flashing in the photograph. Her skin was fair and clean, in contrast to the ground surrounding her, which was littered with dark and dead leaves. Arden supposed that the picture was taken in her family’s garden. Why else would there be a flower on her head and fallen leaves on nature’s floor?

Her thumb brushed the surface of the photo. Little Morgan was holding something in her hands. Magic. Arden’s lips stretched into a pained smile. She knew what it was like to hold magic in her hands for the first time. She wondered what kind of magic Little Morgan was holding at that time. Healing magic? Plain magic? Light magic? Whatever it was, Arden knew that later in Morgan’s life, it would morph into one of the strongest forms of light magic known to man.

It was a pity that that light had long been extinguished.

Arden returned the picture to where she first found it, letting it lay inside a drawer. The corners of her mouth sagged. “I’m sorry, Morgan.”

Fallon

Fallon held up the picture. Though her mouth did not frown, her eyes surely did as they glimpsed the girl in the picture.

Morgan, her older sister.

Had it not been for the fact that she was wearing pink, Fallon would have mistaken the girl for herself. The two shared so many things in common: the same wavy locks of chocolate hair, the same pair of caramel irises, the same small button nose that would pop out of their faces like popcorn, and even their smiles! Thin lips, corners quirked up, no dimples, no teeth. Just a pair of crescent moons with the radiance of suns.

One thing that set them apart, besides Morgan’s preference for things pink and pinker, was their magic. Fallon exhaled. Morgan Stafanen was a wielder of light magic, and was a very strong wielder, at that. It was no wonder that the sun was shining on Little Morgan—Morgan was a little sun herself.

As for Fallon, she was a little shadow.

You can’t have shadows without light, Morgan’s soft voice cooed in Fallon’s head.

Fallon’s whole face frowned this time. She clutched the picture in her hand. “I miss you.”

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I posted the album cover to “Kill 'Em All” if you want to tackle that next

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Sure, I may do that. I’m going to go through all the prompts I’ve missed first :rofl:

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Here’s one :wink: Your character has just set eyes on this abandoned mansion.

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Nathaniel and Rachael

“Are we really going to stay here, tonight?” Rachel stopped cold, staring up at the monstrosity before her.

The echo of her troubled thoughts amused her mate greatly. “It’s just an old Sears house. And no, why would I make you leave your bus for a house that isn’t connected to the grid? We’re just here to explore it. Come on, you made me jump out a perfectly good plane, you can come into the spooky old house with me.”

“But what if someone is on there?” She almost took a step backwards at the thought of someone jumping out at her in that death trap.

“Woman, you’ve just shifted, let Leah out and use that nose of yours.”

“Full shift?”

“No, we need to be able to crawl about that old thing like monkies, not dogs–that and I don’t want you burning through the mass unless it’s necessary.”

“If you keep me from shifting for too long, I’m going to get fat.”

“Woman, you gained a ton a weight before your first shift–what did I do then?”

“Kept grabbing my ass.”

“Yeah, it’s the first place you gain. It’s sexy as fuck and I just want to bury my…damn it, we are here to use your talents not get me horny. Come on, sniff around already.”

“You’re going to have to take your hands out of my back pockets if I’m going to get closer…”

“Goddess bless it!” Nathaniel stepped back and put his hands in the air. “I’ll behave, now seriously, quit stalling.”

Rachel’s face elongated, leaving her looking more like Anubis than a wolf, and Leah came forward a bit as scent was more instinctual to their wolf half. Words were slurred, even gutteral–never ceased to amuse her mate that female wolves tended to have lower voices than their male counterpoint, but the shift back to human left them kind of squeaky until they settled back into their normal range. “Old den. Whose pack?”

“One from my great-grandfather’s era. Pack war where we killed off the males and kept the women, really old behaviors that died out around the era of Free Love and Bell-bottoms. I used to come here with great-grandma, as she lead various dogs through the old site, looking for the source of power this pack held. I was pretty little when she gave up.”

“What kid of source?”

“Some bauble, much smaller than that statue of ours. Any ranking female that knew about it cut their own throats after being captured, rather than tell. But there’s descendants of them with us, still. They deserve to have what is theirs given back to them, no?”

“Traps?”

“You’re a wolf, babe.” Nathaniel began the half-shift himself, darker hairs entangling with the normal blondes, his words becoming a thick snarl, as well. “We will figure them out as we go. Come on–and keep the snout. We might need it.”

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Sara

It rose against the white sun like a haunt, not quite a temple, or a mansion. No, it looked like something from her home - from the Western isles. As she got closer, the details became clearer. Windows, balconies, bricks. Trees, bare and leafless, standing before it as if on guard. Vines growing up the facade. This definitely did not belong here, on this side of the ocean.
“Is that what I think it is?” Malika asked. Sara nodded, not turning around to face her.
Malika’s steps got louder as she jogged forward. Sara was expecting Malika to stop beside her, but she continued towards the house.
“Malika wait! We-”
It was too late.
Malika had already dropped the knocker.
“-don’t know who lives here.”

Malika

The silhouette rising against the sun looked out of place. There was not much settlement nearby to speak of, and the trees had been thinning for quite a while, but something about it looked off. Sara seemed to agree, her steps slowing down.
Why did the building have such pointed tops? Why was it’s side rounded and not flat like most others over-
Right. This building, it wasn’t built in the Aryan way. It looked like something from the western isles, maybe.
“Is this what I think it is?” She asked.
Sara nodded, her eyes fixed on the building.
That meant someone from the west had to have built this! What if Sara knew them? It would be so great for Sara to meet someone from her side of the ocean after so many years.
Malika jogged up to the building, picking up the knocker.
“Malika wait! We-”
She dropped the heavy metal, the sound vibrating through the air.
“-don’t know who lives there,” Sara shouted.
Malika bit her lip.
She might just have made a big mistake.

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This fell into disuse. Welp.

Excercize: describe a dusty kitchen filled with cobwebs and all the kitchen utensils lying around.

Sara

Clack.
She froze, lifting her foot, scared someone heard the sound. Slowly, she put it down on the ground, the tiny touch kicking up a storm of dust into her face. The room was coated in grey, undisturbed for ages, so much so that even the wind no longer bothered it.
The object Sara had hit earlier rolled to a stop a little farther from her, and now she could clearly see that it was a steel pot. Like everything else, it, too, was coated in a thick layer of grime. All around her, usual kitchen utensils lay in disrepair, after being abandoned for devas know how long.

Malika

Her hip bumped into something beside her, and something on the platform fell off, setting off a chain reaction of noises of steel as utensils collided against each other. Malika winced, covering her ears until the noise had subsided. She lifted her sari, taking tentative steps through the dust and grime, careful not to touch anything around her. Her soft steps still managed to kick up small clouds of dust, and they wiggled in Malika’s nose, causing her to sneeze and cough. Breathing in the dust started hurting for her, and Malika decided to turn back and out of this cursed place.

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May Redman

I watched as the harrowing tallness of the house mixed in with the cynicism of the dull brown paint reminded me that I was nothing but a speck of a living creature in the world. People would tell me to burn it. “Any threat is best combatted with a fire of some kind.”, they’d say. I didn’t want to be an arsonist no- a historical preservation site like the manor, would have a whole white-collar committee behind it. The first rule of business that my dead mother taught me - “Avoid messing with bureaucracies.”
The only way out was to disappear. I was told I was excellent at that.
With gravel crunching against my feet, I hiked uphill and knocked on the door; knowing no abandoned house wouldn’t have its fair share of house ghosts, poltergeists and strange wind-instrument musicians.

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Prompt: Your character(s) is / are looking outside a window, the view is of a barren land with a few small buildings to the side, a forest behind the compound. The sun is just rising, casting rays of light through the forest’s trees, and birds are flying out of the forest

I will answer this later with my characters

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Sara

Morning light shone through the trees, illuminating the backs of the birds that were flying off to get food. Some of them had probably been left behind to guard the young ones and the eggs.
Like Kusuma, and Dilip.
Sara wondered if the birds ever missed their family. But then again, they returned to their family at night.
For Sara, nightfall was still a long time ahead. And it had no guarantee of return.

I describe a similar scene from Malika’s pov in the book

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Prompt: A simple rose. (color can be chosen, but must be the same for all characters)

Sara

Sweet, earthy smell spread through the room. The culprit was a flower on the table. She picked it up, and yelped, dropping it again. Her finger had caught on a thorn, and now it let out a few drops of blood. Sara sucked the blood out, smiling as she picked up the flower again, more carefully.
Pain follows beauty.
Such a delicate flower. But pain had forced it to adapt, to get stronger, to grow thorns.
Just like her.
Sara liked the flower.

Malika

The flower stood on the table, only one. She frowned. Why would anyone send her a singular flower?
It was a beautiful one, granted. The scent spread out throughout her room, and she tried to lift it, shrieking as it fell from her hands, her finger feeling a sharp prick.
Thorns.
The flower looked beautiful, of course.
But not everything was as it seemed. She swivelled her head to look around her room, and she didn’t know if she was releived or apprehensive because she found no one.
Caution was smart.

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This should inspire you!

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ooh.

Sara

Strange boxes were stacked on top of each other, and their forms vageuly reminded her of people, with uniformly broken and light-giving spheres for eyes. One of them stood in the middle, two boxes on his chest box - the smaller one at the bottom having two of those strange circles separated by a mesh of metal. Above it, the second, taller box showed the likeliness of a man who was too old and smiling too hard - like one of those creepy older men who liked to prey on young girls.
The other stacks of boxes were sitting on cushioned chairs, gathered around the larger one in the middle, holding colored blobs in their clawed hands. Some kind of weird food, no doubt. Sara cocked her head at the strangeness of it all. This must be a moving sculpture of some sort. Abstract art was something she had never understood.

I think Malika would react similarly in this case, considering neither of them have seen a robot and don’t know what ice-cream or dougnuts are. They also don’t know what tv and radio is or they’d just use that.

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The way you described the robots is unsettling, but Sara has never seen tin toy robots before. Very interesting.

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Modern man who is really into art.

Niko

It was a beautifully painted picture of a family of adorable, brightly colored, toy tin robots watching The Creature from the Black Lagoon on one robot’s tv chest while eating donuts. The youngest of the bot family had a cowboy hat on their head.

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@Churro You will like this one.

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Yeah, in their world, they haven’t yet discovered electricity, so they are FAR from even imagining robots.
So they’re stacked boxes with weird circles and spheres on them. And she thinks this is weird, abstract art because she knows nothing of these creatures

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I mean…robots even show up in Greek Mythology. The idea of metal human-like creatures that can serve and help people has existed since forever.

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Fair, but my book is set in an alternate world inspired by my culture, which is very intertwined with relegion, and so far I don’t know of any mythos surrounding that… But interesting thing to research, for sure

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