@CarlaBlack Ornella’s Fable || Chapters 1 & 2. Read and reacted/given feedback to.
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I will be playing catch up on my end this week and next with stories so that hopefully by April I am back on the train woot woot! 
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Awesome! take your time. Im excited to read more of your story. 
awesome! Are you still planning on working on that Egyptian themed story?
The murder chapters are well written, but I think they could be expanded. There were too many characters (12 mothers and their daughters) so knowing the characters more might help, especially the daughters.
Maybe you could give reasons for why they are neutral or favoring the mom killing (like the mothers were too busy with their success to focus on their children etc)
DOTM- Completed chapter 18
HC&C - Completed chapter 10
Thrones of Misery - Completed chapter 3
Ornella’s Fable - Completed chapter 5
@Norwood515 Will start Reason why Jude exists:). Also, sharing Spells with you and the new email id of @Halfley. Will update chapter 16 hopefully by tomorrow
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@TMinx804 - DOTM completed Chapter 1-11
@TMinx804 - Smear completed Chapter 1-11
@akaiItachi - Spells completed Chapter 1-11
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers Chapter 1-2
@Shea - Throne of Misery completed Chapter 1-8
@Norwood515 - The reason Jude exist 1-2 Awaiting for 3+
I’m gonna add a doc for Ornella’s Fable Chapter 20 to 30
ı’m trying to read more than a chapter at once, so I might skip one or two stories here and there, but I’ll come back to read more chapters the week after
@TMinx804 can you hang on a little bit more for your stories? I would like to finish them! 
@KnightofEmpires - Blood and Cinders completed Chapter 1-10 - Awating for 11+
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I hope there’s gonna be new chapters of blood and cinders!
My Dark Fae Romance isn’t really going smoothly so I’m working on a thriller instead with some romance. It called Three of Mine. I’ll be working on it today and hope to get the chapters out soon. But we’ll see. I’m looking forward to it.
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of course!
Hi everyone!
Done:
@TMinx804 - Smear - Ch2
@Shea - Throne of Misery - Ch2
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable - Ch2
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers - Ch2
@akaiItachi - Spells - Prologue and Ch1
Waiting on book:
@Halfley
I’ve added Chapter 3 to Jude.
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers- Completed Chtr 3
@KnightofEmpires - Blood & Cinders- Awaiting new
@akaiItachi- Spells- Completed Chtr 15
@CarlaBlack - Ornella’s Fable- Completed Chtr 13
@Shea - Throne of Misery- Completed Chtr 9
@EKShortstories - Cold Creek- Awaiting new
@norwood515- The Reason Jude Exists- Completed Chtr 2
Smear- added Chtr 23
Got the rejection letter for the full request I had out on Smear. I’m going to pause on the querying for a wile and focus on really editing.
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@TMinx804 - DOTM completed COMPLETED
@TMinx804 - Smear completed Chapter 1-11
@akaiItachi - Spells completed Chapter 1-11
@Vintaginity - Cake Toppers Chapter 1-2
@Shea - Throne of Misery completed Chapter 1-8
@Norwood515 - The reason Jude exist 1-2
I’m trying to read more than a chapter at once, so I might skip one or two stories here and there, but I’ll come back to read more chapters the week after
@TMinx804 can you hang on a little bit more for your stories? I would like to finish them!
@KnightofEmpires - Blood and Cinders completed Chapter 1-10 - Awating for 11+
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What it doooo! 
@KnightofEmpires B&C - ch 6 completed
@CarlaBlack Ornella’s Fable - ch 8 completed
@TMinx804 DOTM - ch 16 completed
@Vintaginity HC&C - ch 6 completed
@akaiItachi Spells - ch 3 completed
@Norwood515 Jude - ch 2 completed
I added ch 10 of TOM!
As I get well into the middle, I fear my pacing is too slow. If you notice anything low tension (in a bad way), please note it! I also enjoy suggestions for upping the stakes. Thank you all! Im so glad I found a place on the internet to work in 
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Sorry to hear this! Your writing is really good so hopefully you’ll find the right agent/publisher soon.
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Assignment post coming soon.
I ended up getting Covid this last week and spent 3 days with a fever of over 101 
so we are still recovering…
Oh no! I hope you feel better soon!
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- The Desserts -
User || Book || Chapter # || Email ||
@Vintaginity || Cake Toppers || 4 || vintaginity@gmail.com
@TMinx804 || Daughters Of The Moon || 22 || tminx804@gmail.com
|| Smear || 23 ||tminx804@gmail.com
@akaiItachi || Spells || 16 || choudharyrahil20@gmail.com
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 25 || catcarlablack@gmail.com
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 10 || sheaxrhodes@gmail.com
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 3 || Avanorwood515@gmail.com
@Halfley || New Story incoming || 0 || authordstevens@gmail.com ||
- The Deserts -
Please do not send chapters to those on Hiatus unless asked to do so. Members in a catch up status will stay there until asked to be removed or once it has been more than 60 days since their last response. Members on a Not Responsive status will be removed after 3 weeks of being on the hiatus tab, and are welcome to rejoin when they want.
@KnightofEmpires || Blood & Cinders || Catch up ||
@EKShortstories || Cold Creek || Catch up ||
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- Brittani’s Tracking -
@TMinx804 || Daughters Of The Moon || 22 || 22
|| Smear || 22 || 22
@akaiItachi || Spells || 15 || 15
@CarlaBlack || Ornella’s Fable || 20 || 20
@Shea || Throne of Misery || 9 || 9
@Norwood515 || The Reason Jude Exists || 2 || 2
@Halfley || Story Incoming || 0 || 0
User || Book || Chapters Posted || Last Chapter Read ||
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Will fully update soon.
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How do you make this so pretty???
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