Awe, thank you ;-; Yeah, I’ll live, I hope, but for now I’m in a sort of constant state of half asleep, groggy, headache… fun fun. Haha yeahhh, black sneks are masters of disguise
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just throwing this out there, but chamomile/peppermint/herbal teas really help in such cases
yes, they definitely are 
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Thank you <3
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I LOVE it- just a suggestion, the text seems kinda small and unproportionate compared to the rest of the cover? idk just my thoughts
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The text is nearly touching the edges, it’s much larger than what people are using for this genre right now, but I’m blind so like to keep my text a little larger 
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ooh-
Do you think it should be on the edges, sort of thing? Feedback is very much appreciated!
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I just think it could be taller/stand out more or the model could be a bit smaller o.o
Thank you!
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Thank you! It’s actually Empire of Lies hehe. But yeah, probably gonna change that E, multiple people read it as Lices.
…I actually like far apart letter spacing hehe.
As for tye second cover, Paws, Sprees are the keywords, so in a different font. The rest of the fonts are the same… and yup, should reduce the shadow. I actually had it on a lighter colour before and it wasn’t standing out until I added adjustment layers. And then I forgot to reduce the shadow hehe
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Thanks! I’ll change some of those into basic letters!
(I… didn’t buy desire. I have a non commercial free pack.)
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Wow, that’s great! Like Manya said, I think the model could he smaller, so the subtitle up there has some room to breathe, and isn’t at the edge anymore. It’d also make the title seem more proportionate.
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That was a typo xD apologies
Oh I know 
But in this case it seems too much - Especially since there’s no spacing in “of” but there’s so much between “Empire” and “Lies” also the fact that it touches the border thingy at the edges
I guess it looked like a different font due to the weight difference 
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Ah okay! I’ll try reducing it…
hm maybe… I used only two fonts on that cover.
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Oh. There isn’t a free pack of a Desire, only stolen ones :')
Thank you for the feedback!! <3
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Wha- oops. I will probably end up buying it sometime later, so…
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Haha, I just know some people aren’t comfortable with stuff like that from indie designers
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wait, so, I have to pay for Desire Pro even if it’s just personal use?
…
guess I’ll have to uninstall it 
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Desire is paid only, but I get some people don’t particularly mind and get it from like, dafont, or through dodgy zip files. I just mentioned it because I know I personally had some friends with free versions, and were unaware it was paid only :’)
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It’s also why the foundry sells a few different bundles with less letter types or more for different budgets, and every ‘free’ version I’ve seen is utterly incomplete
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