I am, but it needs to be at the right moment or else it will be a mess. It’s where I’m introducing Esteban.
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So what needs to happen between where you’re at and Esteban?
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The Azteks need to attack the club, and Esteban needs to be there and Eddie needs to save him. I was gonna have Eddie talk to him a bit at first to introduce him before the attack?
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Do they know each other really well?
If so, they only need a “in group greeting” out the way.
If they don’t either a 3rd party introduces them, or they take up half the dang chapter sizing each other up.
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They don’t know each other.
I was either gonna have:
A) Eddie dancing with Krystal and he spots him and goes over to talk to him or check it out more.
B) Krystal or one of the Vagos already knows him, and see him interested in Esteban and introduces them together.
What do you think? 
A has physicality, B has brevity. Physicality makes it look a touch more polished, but the brevity gets you through the lull.
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Yeah, true. Maybe A works better cause I see Eddie as more of a flirt than someone who just gets introduced to people. But then the lull, yeah. That’s true, idk. I could also do B > A. He gets introduced to him, and then starts to flirt and be interested in him? Decisions lol. (B > A could save time but A is more true to Eddie’s character, prolly). I am 1.3k into the chapter still.
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I’ve made the executive decision not to enter ONC. Good luck to everyone who’s entering! I’ll check out your stories 
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Aw you didn’t enter? 
That’s fair enough. There’s always next year
Thanks!
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ONC TO-DO LIST TODAY:
Add/Edit JD and Gabriel’s second chapter
Submit
I decided I’m not gonna enter Eddie cause I can’t finish this first chapter with him, but I will be writing his story at another time. It’s a lot of effort to get one good enough, let alone two. I was a bit ambitious this time, lol.
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I saw it.
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Thanks for reading. I’m just glad that JD is at least submitted!
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How is everyone getting on?
I’ve got the past 8K written on Heal Like an Egyptian. I am in the editing phase of that, so I can post it. And the only thing left to do to Virulent Beauty is let the spouse do a last-check read on through the 8K, and then it can be submitted. So I’ve only got Retired for Reasons to write to the 8k, currently.
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You’re very productive. Getting two stories up to the 8k mark. 
And you have the other one finished and edited at 20+K, right?
I am trying to get JD and Gabe up to the 8k stage, but they probably need a few more awkward encounters to get there. I’ve written them up to the part where Gabe and JD almost get caught and he has to make JD go to church with him and pretend they are church buddies.
Yeah, 1st done, 2nd to 8K+, 3rd plan to shift to that right after edits.
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That’s great
Of course, if it doesn’t make 1st round, I might be tempted to finish this one out, first. We will see. lmao.
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