I wrote some weird shit about the sprinklers going off in tbe bar and they run out with their clothes hanging off and fix themselves up in the car, and they’re heading towards Gabriel’s. Yeah, there needs to be more than just ‘sex’. 
Getting to know each other, and a game?
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Yeah…um, truth or dare, kink edition?
Think abut it as in doing something many may find hot, but gives you a minute to get them really getting to know each other.
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Yeah, maybe makes sense.
Need to get something going. Some drama, anything too 
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Exes are standard drama. A UFO is unconventional.
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Yeah, but then you have to write a whole plot around aliens, lol.
Not a whole plot. If it’s a UFO, they can argue about what it is, without ever seeing an alien, find out that one believes in aliens and the other doesn’t. The background ain’t needed until you prove what it is. It’s like demanding the background of a shooting star.
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True. To be honest, good idea. Maybe they see one drunk in the yard. JD probably believes UFOs make more sense than Gabriel does because he’s younger and a lot more open minded.
All I can also say is thank goodness for housing interiors 
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I need to write Eddie. Eddie. Catch up, Eddie.
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I think I’m enjoying writing JD and Gabriel more than Eddie and I’m surprised by that lol
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Well, if you’ve found your stride in romance, it would become more enjoyable. Not necessarily surpassing other interests, but more about how smooth the interactions run “to plan”, without fitting into what others would do to make it more miserable for you.
Remember, you dislike a lot of stuff because it didn’t suit you.
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Made a book cover for my ONC entry. Been a while since I made a cover. Did everything myself—even the lettering (which I’ve never done before from scratch)
Will I upload it in time though?? We’ll see
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Yeah the Eddie story is going too slow. I’ve only got about 1300 words for that. I mean, there’s still 6 days to finish it up though. But I am so much more immersed in the JD Gabriel story, and am way over 4K into it. It’s much easier to write too.
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Also made an animated variant lool I have too much time on my hands. Wonder if this works…
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Also very good cover. You’re an artist 
NGL, much better than anything I could draw or letter. Interesting looking as well.
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Just posted my first ONC Entry lol. JD and Gabe.
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I’m doing it this year!
I started one last year but got stuck in a block for so long I literally forgot what I was even writing in the first place lmao
Oh, here’s the cover for it. Made on canva bcos I wasn’t vibing with any of the versions I 'shopped together.
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The Eddie story need to get a move on or he’s out 
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What do you need to get it to 2K?
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A club shootout or something. It’s going too slowly.
Do it. Remember how I encouraged you to get your characters eaten by the girlfriend, right? Do horrible things to them.
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