#ONC2023

Touhou project released an rpg for mobile and I wish that more urban fantasy took Gensokoyo’s approach of essenitally being a place hidden from the rest of the world by magic. I’m just saying that a lot less people would think about how wizards could have prevented ww2 if all the wizards lived into what essentially amounts to a magical hidey-hole.

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I noticed reads too lately. I am wondering if Wattpad tinkered with circulation a little to bring more active profiles to the top? I saw ranking update quite drastically. If so, it’s a good change.

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I’ve mainly sketched chapter 4 of my main project. If I manage to finish it tomorrow to my satisfaction, I might work for a bit on chapter 2 of my unexpected project. No problems to speak of so far. There is about 5.5K in the main project and 2.3K in the second one.

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Is it a bit of a tight squeeze to push a mystery into a novella format?

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Not at all. I’ve read mysteries that were 1 page long in a magazine, since I was a kid. The difference is that in the longer the book, the more likely you are to accidentally give away the WhoDoneIt? before you reach the reveal because a novel needs a ton of filler, and that filler drops clues.

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I have two stories that I could do for Cold Brew and his cousins, and I want to enter one of them into the ONC, but I think that the actual murder mystery part needs more planning. Like, to streamline it, but I could also do an introductory story introducing the main characters, and the possible threats as well and use the prompt “I had a good time ruining everything”.

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Do what you must. You know, 2 related novellas can later become 1 50+ novel, as you integrate them in an edit.

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Yeah, true. I think that my prequel (before the accident) will be easier to write for the ONC, and afterwards, I can just use clues; have a main A plot with Cev, and a B plot with Fabio for now.

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Sounds interesting! :grin:

If she has no fighting experience, maybe using the item is her only way to defend herself?

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Got that cover fixed.

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my story is technically fantasy on the barest of technicalities.

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Okay, guys. Submission Form is up!

I finished chapter 4 this morning and submitted my main project to the contest in Mystery/Thriller category. Fingers crossed. It’s slightly under 6K atm.

I also did my first outline revision, moving some plot beats and adding a couple of scenes. Again, nothing major, but I think it will do the storyline some good.

Now, going to stretch, clear my mind and see if I can do chapter 2 for my second project.

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I lost this one, in the shuffle, so I had to come back in for it.

Wolf & X Bunny is at 2038 words with 2 chapters. Will be putting up the link in the other one after submission and I settle the other 2.

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I spent the last few days trying to visualize my entry and what I should do to keep it short and simple. And today, I finally got some of Chapter 1 written! :star2: It was tough to write but I’m hoping it’ll be easier to get into now that I have it started. Already loving one of the characters, and she’s only been introduced for a paragraph or two now :'D

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Usually it gets easy once you get the ball rolling

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I’ve decided to try participating. I have 1k words. I’m kind of pantsing like I always do. I should probably… not do that, right? :laughing: I have an issue writing “short” stories so I was thinking of trying to consider each chapter it’s own “episode” as part of the larger story? :thinking:

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Depends on how you divide up your story, really. I’m thinking aboout an episodic as my 4th test.

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I’m feeling stuck because I don’t know how to set up the turning point. I need to do some rethinking of how I initially planned this.

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Oh-uh. I found a way to move forward, it’s fun and exciting, but it’s leading me on a different path, away from the prompt. This is what sucks about ONC. Sometimes a story takes shape inspired by the prompt but no longer resembles the prompt so it doesn’t count. Ugh. I hate having to curb good ideas in. There must be a way to salvage this.

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Yup. I’m thinking of doing that instead of her running around, trying to survive until the reaper knocks-out their target.

It’s a shame, but at least it’s helping you out write something.

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