That’s pretty good XD
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Aln says, “He’s probably a thousand billion jillion years old.”
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Still collecting draft notes and scribbles for the next chapter.
Most recent major event I jotted down is Dov offers to wash Freyja’s hair after the girls’ baths, and to teach Freyja swimming in the mornings at the villa pool before the others wake-up. Ample time, Dov suggests, for the equally shy and inquisitive girl to ask any possibly embarrassing questions about what she learnt (the human body being her current subject of curiosity), or to talk without an audience (Krista accepted), or just to chill for a while.
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Sona’s costume is a living statue.
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also I was screaming “Landmines” by bellsaint at the top of my lungs.
I shall return with something to say.
Kirlan plays a flute and everyone starts to sing…so, I had to come up with a new poem.
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Marta takes the kids out to gather garlic flowers just in case vampire serial killer tries coming to their place
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Chapter 1, Part 5:
Brianna finds her aunt Natasha standing in front of her dying father holding a gun, getting ready to kill niece at the place Andrew sent her and the Guardians to.
Jorildyn (the MC) is somewhere in the empire knocked out after turning into a blazing inferno then bursting out of a hotel and crashing landing in a place with water, causing a huge panic.
That is all I got.
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Chapter 1, Part 6:
Jorildyn awaken to find herself in water, surrounded by people, naked and tries to figure out where’s Princess Brianna and the Guardians. She goes to search for them still naked and getting weirded or perverted gazes.
That’s is just early in the part.
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After burying their father (The King of Redstone), Dalvryn and Dhrunan choose to order an evacuation of their kingdom. They decide to relocate their entire kingdom to the Middle Kingdom, where thy deem it to be safer at this time.
That evening they wander the halls of the Citadel and end up in the lower regions and into the cellars. There they sift through the vintage wines and ale’s and get very drunk. For a time they forgot the troubles of their kingdom and behaved rightfully loose.
It is slumped upon the cold floor where Alondil finds them, and is subjected to their tomfoolery in abandoned measure. Though he wishes it not so…
SD
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yes.
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End of draft of this chapter:
The man turned around, a broad grin on his features. “Kari!”
WHACK!
Start of the next chapter:
“I cannot believe you punched me!”
Amneris glared at her brother. “And I can’t believe you expected anything different to happen.”
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that’s amazing hahah
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Thanks 
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Eryn wakes up and thinks she’s upside down, but she’s not.
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is she sideways? 
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Actually, there’s the ground above her and the sky below her. But she’s not upside down 
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More random note scribbling.
- Krista awakes to find Freyja and Dov seated on Freyja’s bed, browsing through two large hardback picture books.
- Krista sneaks up to her companions, giant teddy in tow, and greets Freyja in German to test her language study. Freyja replies with a gentle smile and “Guten Morgen, liebe Krista”.
- Attempting to ignore her blush, Krista greets Dov in Russian and he stumbles a friendly reply (Dov’s hopeless with anything other than English).
- Dov asks if they woke Krista; he instructed Freyja to be very quiet (no speaking) until their host is up.
- Krista shrugs and asks about their morning study.
- Freyja replies they’re reading about human physiology. Her topics of interest this morning are Dov’s body, her body, children and reproduction. And how the whole lot works.
- Krista smirks and asks the teddy propped on her hip, how often she would have to wake up beside Dov before she began thinking about similar topics.
- Dov mourns his depleting sanity and asks Freyja if she has any questions about the books.
- Freyja picks the new topic of Dov’s family and his childhood memories…Then the topic of her family, and her lack of relevant memories…
An alternative beginning is for Krista to awake and find Freyja reading through the books by herself, with Dov (seemingly) asleep in his reading chair. Krista notices Freyja’s eyes emit a faint neon glow in the ambient pre-dawn light. In a brief, hushed discussion, Krista ponders if Freyja has a form of passive night vision…Freyja claims everything looks different shades of green in the dim light, and focusing on small words hurts her eyes…Dov also claims he woke with Freyja, but didn’t want to disturb the snoozing Krista.
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then how does that work?
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