It’s different wiring. I’m going through BifL right now, I noticed:
1-9 chapters: typical cheating teens issues. 20K, all I could stomach.
10-12: captivity and history collide with resolving into a relationship.
13-20: early relationship, running a messed-up pack, getting characters in place.
21-27 : animals swarming from the desert to attack, high school graduation, becoming a Siren,
28-29: Outsiders
30-31: Climax
32-33: Outtro
Book 2
What type of division is this?! lmao
I dunno, lmfao but it makes sense to the story, right? That’s the main point isn’t it? 
The plot has to work in conjunction with the book doesn’t it?
Well, it’s really 4 parts.
1-9 is Act1
10-12 is sloooow transition into Act2
13-20 is Act2
21-27 is Act 3,
28-29 can count as transition
and the rest is the climax-resolution spiral of act 4.
It still fits a format, but it’s not so hide-bound.
But it still makes sense doesn’t it? In the context of the story. 
It does fit a format, but it’s not the same as every other format.I don’t have a lot of loose stuff in the story. Some of it I could trim if I wanted to follow a strong storyline, but this is supposed to be someone’s memoirs–they LIVED this, not made a great story. Requires different thoughts.
Yes, and it’s great that there is a distinction made there Hopefully people will get that!
Out of nowhere, the squirell walks towards me with a Rod shaped nut
I’m seriously thinking about retitling the whole collection as Memoirs of a Luna and BifL is the first of the 3 “books”.
Yes, you should do that.
I am gonna do a Pissyverse within the Churroverse, lol. Which is a small collection of the “supernatural side” of Angel Falls.
Why not write a novel like Olive Kitteridge or A Visit from the Goon Squad where the novel consists of interrelated short stories that ultimately tell a story about the main character(s)? You could tell each story from a different character’s pov, or center each one around a different character or something…? ¯\_(ﭢ)_/¯
I don’t if it would work for the wolves and vumps
There’s a cat song for that.
They’re launching next month (September) so they’re in beta right now, but this is their website: https://www.kerning.app
I’m definitely interested to see how this will play out.
Tomorrow, editing day.
Hopefully, it won’t be too bad.
finally 
finally finished rewriting this one chapter and it only took the entire week. someone take social media away from me, i can’t stop doomscrolling 
okay, still need to finish this round of edits but i don’t think anywhere else left needs as intense of work as this chapter did. I for real had to re-write the whole thing from scratch and then re-write it again. It’s worth it… but still
nooo my music
You can have it when you write faster 
ughhhhh fine
so mean 
Did you do it?