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Theodore is very proud of his Kayosic heritage.

Summary

I’m Hispanic in real life and I find that Hispanic/Latin/Carribean culture has this warmth and affection to it that is different from other cultures. But I also wanted to combine that warmth with the “hardened” culture of something like the Russians. I’ve watched videos of this girl who just shows what life is like in Russia and how people are, their winters are brutal, and she says a lot of people say “Russians don’t smile.” But it’s not because they’re unfriendly, it’s because unlike the West, they don’t smile for the sake of smiling. They don’t consider not smiling rude. If anything, they prefer sincerity and so they’re not just constantly on the street or at work smiling because they feel like people will think they’re “mean” if they’re not smiling. That’s just a weird American/Western thing?

As for the bracelets, Theodore wears a set.

Summary

I don’t go into specifics as to all of them he’s wearing, but one of them is from his father and it’s meant to kind of protect/give him strength because Theodore is a cage fighter. So it’s kind of like, when a father passes down a sword to his son, like here is this thing so you can continue to be strong and protect yourself. And there’s a part in my story where a girl he dates briefly (during when Rose is also dating someone else) goes sour, and the girl steals the bracelet. He thinks he’s lost it. Rose realizes this girl, who happens to be her “friend” has this bracelet and when she understands the spiritual/familial significance of it, her mob heiress persona kicks in, and she demands for the girl to hand over the bracelet. Later in the story when he and Rose inevitably :wink: finally get together, he gifts Rose a set that’s meant to be shared between the two of them. So he has two, she has two, and he frames it as a “protection ward/bad energy ward” when she starts getting creepy bouquets and signals from her ex, but there’s more to it. She doesn’t get the true meaning of the bracelets until towards the ending of the story. I won’t spoil it, but it’s important.

Theodore is close to his family, including Jax. His father and the men in general can be very stern, but not in a hateful way, more in a “tough love” way. So he has a deep respect for his father and trusts his decisions. Here are summaries about Theodore’s parents:

Summary

Theodore is considered the “shield’“ of the family whereas Jax is the “knife.” Jax didn’t grow up with Theodore at first, Jax was born in their native country, but once Theodore started “getting into trouble” during the teen years, they thought bringing over his cousin and kind of an “older brother” would help. And it was an opportunity to have Jax grow up somewhere more peaceful and less harsh than their native country. Not to mention, the family heir needed someone to watch his back. So Jax and Theodore might’ve been annoyed at first as kids, but they eventually grow up basically like brothers. They’d risk their lives for one another.

As for the arranged marriage, because Theodore trusts his parents. I imagine he was like, uhh, okay, no promises that I’ll marry her but I’ll at least give it a chance. :laughing: Whereas Rose on the other hand, has a completely different kind of relationship with her family, her father especially, so being told that her father has chosen someone for her does not go well. She finds Theodore’s sunny personality suspicious or a mask whereas Theodore gets the impression that she’s too intense, too serious, maybe even a bit conceited. They both get the wrong impressions at first.

I admit I haven’t built up on Rose’s heritage as much.

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I know skin-color wise, she’s more olive toned/brown than Theodore is. So is the rest of her family, and I’m entertaining that in this fictional world, there is no concept of white, black, brown people. Just “people blessed by the sun” and “people blessed by the moon.” The darker/warmer your skin tone, you’re sun people versus the paler you are, moon. And if you’re somewhere in between, you can be blessed by both. I have this head canon that’ll never make it into story, of Theodore flirting with Rose and basically telling her that their children would be beautiful, blessed by both the sun and the moon. That’s as far as my thoughts went with Rose’s culture. :thinking:

Rose’s mother passed away from illness when she was still small. Her mother was basically the last “affectionate” presence she had with the exception of Isaac, a chamberlain her mother hired that also serves as her protection. So a lot of the child rearing fell to him once Rose lost her mom, but due to his position, he can’t express his affection for her like her family would’ve. But Rose basically considers him more her father than her actual father.

At the same time, with her real father, there’s this weird respect/mistrust between them. She interprets her father’s actions and decisions as cold and controlling, but her father is just sh*t at communicating, and due to being the current family boss, obviously needs to maintain a hard presence. So his intentions with the arranged marriage, (she finds out later) has a lot more thought put into it than she thinks. And it turns out, her father was not only supporting her future goals as mob heiress, a path that would steer the family differently than he steered it, but Theodore was the perfect match to fill the voids that were missing in her life. In his own way, with the only way he knew how, he was trying to protect his daughter from the life he knew she couldn’t avoid by setting her up with the “right” person. Theodore (and Jax) show her what true friendship is, without “conditions” or “favors”, warmth, trust, affection. It’s not that Rose doesn’t have friends, but her friends are regular students at her college, so she can’t really divulge too much family business or drama. And those friends know what she is, but obviously there’s a wall both sides can’t scale.

With Theodore and Jax, that’s not a concern. They’re both mob heirs. They both understand the pressures that come with it. They still might not be able to share everything (unless married) but having someone close that “knows the life” is a big help.

Rose is an only child. She has an older cousin who she’s also close to, but due to him being treated as the “back-up heir” and the rivalry her uncle seems determined to instill between them, Rose and her cousin Johan also have limits in their affection. Family politics and all that, but Johan would be the brother Rose never truly had.

Okay, your turn again!

I’m curious about the inspiration from horror movies. I’m not a big horror fan, but I’ve seen enough I think to wonder what concepts inspired you specifically? I grew up Christian before I moved in a more Agnostic direction when I got older, and I was amazed when I discovered all those beautiful statues and drawings of angels and cherubs, when you take the descriptions of angels from the bible literally, angels look freakin’ terrifying! Or are you toying with the idea of Angels = good and Demons = bad to both sides not really being that simple, and black and white?

One thing I’ve noticed is that religions and stories stem from events that happen that people at the time could not understand or explain. Or in times of despair. A lot of Deities come from nature, and there always seems to be a God/Goddess whatever, for “death” or after death. So even though there are different interpretations of what happens in the afterlife, whether we have one God or many, they all seem to have certain concepts in common. I sometimes wonder if we really do have the same God or set of Gods, but they were just interpreted differently across the world/generations. Humans want to make sense of things, but I don’t think we’re meant to “know the truth” even if we’re close. Even with science, there are things on our current world that can’t be explained. There is definitely a supernatural layer at play even if you’re not religious. I’ve heard enough stories from history and watching stuff on YouTube that you’re like, there’s no way this was a coincidence, or there is no scientific or logical explanation for XYZ.

Ever seen this anime Noragami? That presented another idea. That not all Gods and Goddesses exist before humans, it’s the humans that give birth/bring to life these Gods/Goddesses. So basically if people worship a tree over time, the more faith and followers it has, eventually the tree does become a deity. And Gods/Goddesses also “die” when the faith in them dies.

I’ve also heard the Xenogears game has a lot of philosophy about religion. Never played it personally but my SO says it’s what basically made him an Atheist as a kid. The game blew his mind and made him question everything he knew growing up Catholic.

Okay, I ranted. Is there a reason why having one overall God is important to your story? Is a God something that necessarily governs all life or just certain aspects of it, like how there might be a God of a mountain or a death God?

I’d also recommend reading “On the way to meet mom” webtoon. It also has some concepts of what a God is that I found interesting.

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Whoops, sorry for the late reply—I’ve been busy lately :sweat_smile:

clicky!

At the time he was mostly sure. It was the only name he had since nobody knew his identity or had records of him ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Not really for the former, but yes to the latter! In fact, it plays a huge part in Act II, which is the part of the story I’m wrapping up right now :grin: although I don’t know when I’ll finish it :sob:

Uhhh, there probably is, but I haven’t really figured it out :skull: but I will say that complex spells involving shadow magic can be used to not only hide entire areas from people, but also force secrecy on those who know how to access that hidden area.

I see! In another book series of mine, shadow magic was one of the newer branches of magic and was at first mistaken for sorcery, which did not bode well for the first practitioners of that branch :sweat_smile: but after they realized it was distinct from sorcery, they decided to study and advance that branch further.

Oooh, is this common knowledge in that universe? Or is it something that only certain people know in the story :eyes:

Sure thing!

  1. The realm that the story takes place in is called Idelhen. It’s a planet that’s much smaller than Earth and most of the land is part of a giant continent.
  2. Gifteds—people who are born with magic, superpowers, or both—make up a very tiny portion of the human population. Their powers start to manifest at around age six, and they typically get sent to academies—boarding schools that solely cater to gifted children—at age seven. Why boarding schools, you ask? Let’s just say that children are already hard to take care of without having to deal with magic :skull: non-gifted people specifically are referred to as “ordinaries.”
  3. Being born as a gifted is purely a random chance thing. A good chunk of gifted children don’t have gifted parents, like the deuteragonist of the story, Arden Mægenstern, who also happens to be the most powerful of them all. That being said, there are notable exceptions—certain bloodlines, introduced in the story as the Favored Four, have gifted children in every generation.

I won’t lie, I was debating which three tidbits to include :joy:

clicky! part 2

Now I wonder if there’s a type or source of blood that Charcoal wouldn’t want :face_with_tongue:

This is gonna sound very cursed, but, uh, what would Charcoal think of menstrual blood? :skull: I already know Richard’s probably not gonna want to touch it :ragejoy:

Well Edin is 100% human, like all gifteds, although many people wonder otherwise :joy::sob: virtually every person I’ve talked to about Edin has asked me if he’s a vampire :sob: (he’s not)

But if you’re asking how close he is to an average Joe, well, I’d say not that close? Even if he doesn’t remember it, he’s been through a lot in his past. Add in the fact that he’s a powerful gifted and twice-cursed, and he’s far from average :sweat_smile: but underneath all that is a pure heart and an innocent soul.

Also, as a guardian, he basically fights beasts for a living. Being a guardian also involves memorizing and being able to identify every single type of beast there is, even if there’s a very low chance of encountering certain types. Some of these creatures can be rather scary :grimacing:

Oh he does feel pleasure from killing when he’s overtaken by his bloodlust curse, but when he’s snapped out of it, he instantly feels the opposite. It only triggers if he’s in a battle and something or someone starts to bleed.

There’s actually a whole arc at the start of the story where he, the guy who gets paid to fight, tries to avoid fighting so that he doesn’t trigger his urges. Obviously it doesn’t last :ragejoy:

His method while under his curse would be bloody and brutal :woozy_face: basically he wouldn’t go straight to the kill, but he’d purposefully attack as many body parts as he could to let more blood flow out of his target. And then he’d kill the target. And then if there’s still a lot of blood left in the corpse, he’d hack at the corpse to let some more out :skull:

I’d also describe him as “unstoppable” when overtaken by his curse. He’d be faster, stronger, and wouldn’t stop until every single enemy was dead and chopped to bits. Someone else has to yell at him to snap out of it, but it doesn’t always work :grimacing:

Ah, that reminds me of my other character, Eddie! Like Edin, he’s also blond, blue-eyed, pale, tall, able to control fire and lightning, and also pretty good with a sword. Unlike Edin, Eddie is actually a human from Earth—more specifically, France—and not cursed at all :laughing:

Their fighting styles are also how I differentiate between Eddie and Edin. Eddie prefers precision and going for quick and lethal blows. Edin… yeah :skull:

What happens when Richard plans an attack but it turns out completely different from how he thought it out?

I have to ask… is this your version of Germany? :face_with_tongue: or would that be Austria? Or Switzerland :thonk: or the Netherlands :face_with_peeking_eye:

Would you say he’s more dangerous as a fighter when wrathy or when he’s not wrathy? :eyes:

I also imagine that temper of his has gotten him into trouble at least once :sweat_smile: is there any part of your story where it happens? Does it backfire?

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@TheTigerWriter

I shall list three things related to my fictional world.

  1. Misting.
  2. Knighthood United Alliance.
  3. First Dynasties.
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Actually kind of fascinating to think about. In a parallel fictional world, we could have had an ancient Greek industrial revolution.

Thinking about how that would impact our entire history… :eyes:

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It makes so much sense. Why get something quick if you live long and so don’t worry about time as much as us human beings do. I forget how some innovation for certain things are because a bunch of people found something so incredibly inconvenient. And to incorporate that reality is pretty smart.

A lot of fantasy, and I think sci-fi, too, has fancy tech just because they can :stuck_out_tongue: There’s not a lot of why.

I don’t question why certain things exist in my own stories as much either, but I have been thinking a little about it for Project Demon Friend because although it takes inspiration from the 1850s, the Industrial Revolution wasn’t happening very much in Arcanland.

If Arcanland is inspired by USA in the 1850s, there should be some trains, but I decided not to give them trains :stuck_out_tongue: (it would mean my characters can get from A to B more quickly, and I can’t have that due to plot)

I did start thinking about why though. Maybe it’s like you said? They don’t feel a need for them. They’re probably satisfied with the hansom cabs, horse-drawn carriages, and riverboats.

I think I need to make more rivers.

I see! Not familiar, unfortunately. What do you like about it?

Questions:

Tell me about the modes of transportation in your world.

Also, do the people of your world believe in any religion?

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Yes! Thank you. But I always have more questions XD

Here you go!

I’m curious, why does he fear it? Is there some powerful energy coming from it that he instinctively fears? Or is there some missing context before this that made him fearful instead of curious and fascinated?

I like the way you write. It’s like an ancient story being told before a fireplace :blush:

Oooh, that’s a cool detail. So, not only does he have to get used to see through the eyes of a Drake, but he has to get used to seeing how they see color and the world.

This reminded me of a video I recently watched about what colors animals see. I know that snakes can see the heat of an animal and use that to hunt. Tigers are orange which seems ridiculous to us because they stand out like a sore thumb, but their main prey, deer, can’t spot them in the jungle because they can’t see that color. Do the violet and green hues act like this as well?

Ahhh, so that’s how Aldan gets the helm eventually.

So, Essingvaux takes Dragon form…was there a specific reason for this?

I looked up dragon drake difference and drakes don’t have wings it seems? So, Essingvaux takes the form of a dragon, and claims lordship over the drakes. Does that mean dragons are more powerful than drakes? Or did the drakes recognize Essingvaux as one of the creators? Or was this a secret?

Why did Essingvaux want to remain and watch over the lands?

And tell me about Undermount. Why is it called Undermount and can anyone go there or only dragons and drakes?

Because I have the land of the living (a.k.a the heavens), the land of the dead (a.k.a hell, the underworld), and the spirit realm (sort of between them like a limbo) in my story, I’m curious how the realms of living and dead in your world look like. And do you have a limbo or something like it?

What happens when someone dies?

Are these the humans? Or not entirely human? Who or what is Mara?

That’s alright :blush:

So, what are some things you would like to share about your story? If there’s anything you’d like to yap about, I’m all ears (or eyes, I guess, because I’m reading it)

Yep, that’s what’s fascinating about history: when you look into the past, you see that a lot of things we consider ‘discovered recently’ were already known, just not as much in detail as we do now.

I came across something similar with the Baghdad battery: some people have claimed it was used for ‘electroplating’, but we don’t have any evidence of that, so people think it was used for ritual purposes. ElectroBOOM has suggested it might have been used for flavouring wine (which I also agree with). We also had that in recent history: imaginary numbers started out as not having a use, but now they’re valuable in electrical engineering and quantum mechanics.

I’ve also been working on this idea, one of my past civilisation is based off the Greeks, and they are said to have used steam engines to power their devices.

Or better: you could do a fusion – there are trains, but they’re for urban or suburban transport, not rural.

A fact you might find interesting: railways precede trains by thousands of years. They’re called ‘railways’ because they look like railings laid on the ground. The idea is simple: roads tend to be uneven, and that makes wheels highly impractical.

That said, most of these railways were short-distance, but then in the 1840s there was a sudden railway mania, driven by stock market stuff. And even then, maintenance was extremely difficult, and it was possible only because of the availability of cheap labour: in the US it was Chinese immigrants and enslaved/“convicted” black people, in India you had cheap labour available everywhere, and so on.

Also, railways can divide just as much as they can unite. In Spain, for instance, railways are a few inches wider than in France. This was a deliberate choice so the French military couldn’t just roll into Spain on a train.

Also, don’t forget the most important aspect of this: precise units. In the past, every country had a different definition of ‘foot’ and ‘mile’. The French foot for instance, is 1.066 English feet (which the Americans use as well; also, that’s the reason people think Napoleon is short: he was 5’2 in French feet but 5’6 in English feet), so if the two nations didn’t use SI units and agreed to build ‘tracks that are one feet apart’, they’d fail.

The game’s pretty beautiful. It features a wide world, a lot of forests, and it’s set in 1899. So it will be very helpful to your cause.

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Okay, this is an interesting question.

Right now most travel in my world takes place on land, via animal mounts or animal-powered vehicles: people travel by horses or horse-drawn waggons, sometimes using camels, mules, bullocks or other animals as well. They also use dinosaurs like hippalectryons (hadrosaurs), perytons (elasmarians) or striderfowls (ornithomimids). But automobiles have just began to show up (think of the Ford Model T). Trains also exist, but they’re mainly uses in urban areas, rather than in rural areas, though they are found in rural areas and where they are found, they’re surrounded by villages in a long line.

And by water, you also have a variety of boats: from small dinghies and sailboats to massive galleys and galleons, most of them powered by a mix of wind, oars and steam engines. Just as with trains, proper sail-powered ships that can sail across the ocean are not prevalent, because no one needs to travel across the oceans. Most people just hop along the coast.

And also, you have airships: zeppelins and dirigibles, and you also have primitive aeroplanes, that look a bit like aerial steam carriages, though they have electrical engines and can actually fly, though they can only carry one person at a time.

Oh boy… this is a big question. I worked way too hard on the religion of this world.

All religions in my world have a single overarching entity in them: Kaal the Time-Dragon, the personification of time. The universe exists within Mahakaal (Great Time), and everything has kaal within it. At the end of one’s kaal, Morthaur comes to reap.

Morthaur is the Reaper and the Sower, the personification of change. In their belief system, Morthaur is the absolute. The philosophy is ‘nothing is permanent in the Kingdom of Kaal, nothing expect Change itself’. At the end of each kaal, Morthaur comes for the reaping. Morthaur comes in a variety of forms, sometimes as a wildfire, a flood, an earthquake, a great inventor, sometimes a volcanic eruption. The only thing Morthaur guarantees is change: out with the old, in with the new.

However, it must be remembered that Morthaur is either benevolent, nor malevolent. He simply is. A volcano isn’t evil for erupting, a storm isn’t evil for flooding, a predator isn’t evil for killing. Just as a volcano creates new islands and brings fertility to the soil, a storm brings water to the land, and a predator kills to regulate the population, so is Morthaur a process: a process by which the world works.

Also, Morthaur isn’t death. Or maybe He is death, but not only death, but also life: Morthaur allows change. When you undergo character development, the older you dies and a newer you emerges from the shell of that older you. That character development is Morthaur in action. Without death, there can be no life.


What about your world’s religions?

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Here you goooo! :grin:

A is for answers

No, it’s just a rank title thing. It seems to be that way in “real world“ demon lore. I couldn’t find any reason as to why they’re princes (people say, “it’s because that’s what’s in the grimoire“ which is not an answer). I’m thinking maybe prince has some kind of different meaning in the demon world (real world demon world, and my world demon world).

But the prince in my story is addressed as my lord, sire, my liege by his subordinates… so, maybe there’s some kind of royalty thing going on? Idk.

Human food works except for pumpkin pie. Idk why.

I speculated on IG once that maybe there’s a famous demon that resembles a pumpkin pie, and so everyone is disgusted by pumpkin pie. Or maybe pumpkin pie smells and tastes like something that demons hate eating in the underworld?

Anyway, it’s not enough to just survive on human food. It tides them over and also helps them bond with humans, but they really do need those corrupted and terrible juicy souls.

But if they can’t get souls, corpses are fine as well because human flesh energizes them more than human food or animal meat.

Might have to actually :stuck_out_tongue:

Responses and questions, some questions related to sciency stuff

Reminds me of Greek Mythology where some God’s finger turns into a God after being severed. Could this kind of thing be the case in your world? Not just for Gods but any other creature?

This is amusing :grin:

Huh, interesting. Do any of her own powers cancel each other out? Can she use two different ones at the same time?

How does she learn to use the ones she’s born with?

Do any of her powers ever overwhelm her or is her body able to take it all because she’s a Phoenix, Balance Keeper, Eternal and Immortal?

Richard might be a little jealous of her. He has a lot for a human, but he always wants more. He can’t get more because Charcoal doesn’t have more (or so he says. He’s not a prince for nothing :smirking_face: ).

What is space magic? Magic to create space for things, or create and manipulate the actual cosmos? Or both?

lol XD Alright then

Do you have anything in your story that you think might offend a whole bunch of people? (let’s face it, there’s always someone who is going to be offended by everything, but is there anything specific in your world?)

I guess that’s kind of like what I’m trying to go for, too. Everything associated with life has a place to go. But souls devoured by demons cease to exist.

Like this. They just stop. But if we get into details, they get digested and turned into energy to fuel demons.

Hmm. Crazy idea, but do souls have calories for demons? :thinking:

New term! Essentially zombies without flesh?

Cool! :grin: Egyptian mythology is very much like this! The sequel to Project Demon Friend takes inspiration from Egyptian mythology and there isn’t any idea of an evil god. The god of death, Set, is often portrayed in media as evil, but he’s not evil in actual mythology, at least from what I’ve read. Everyone has flaws and good things. Similar to deities in Hindu mythology as well, I think. Western mythology has demons as evil and angels as good.

Interesting that there’s this difference, don’t you think?

lol XD

Demons are bored, too, that’s why they go off to look at humans. Entertaining food source. The phrase “don’t play with your food“ doesn’t apply here :wink:

By the way, what does everyone eat if they eat anything for sustenance? And how long can they go without?

What was it like exploring a big bad Amneris?

Ooooh, the almost-succeeding-in-destroying-walls beings? What do these guys look like? Are they good, bad, or just bored?

Ooooh, okay, then I have some questions.

Do you have parallel realities? (have you read The Golden Compass a.k.a The Northern Lights?)

Can time travel happen and does it?

What about stopping time in a certain range or for the entire world?

What about erasing or extracting certain parts of memory?

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Right gotta find my new glasses :rofl:

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I mean, it’s a story so you don’t necessarily have to stick to the rules of these things :eyes: It sounds like you’ve put a lot of research into this. What made you decide to go with angelic/demon lore to start with?

Wow :joy: I was gonna ask why

What would happen if they couldn’t get hold of souls/bodies/etc. in time? Can demons starve? Does it destroy them or just make them hangry?

:partying_face:

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I don’t see why not tbh. It hasn’t come up before but that doesn’t mean it hasn’t happened :thinking:

Her shadow magic’s pretty weak because her Balance Keeper power is based in light. But that’s the only one that really causes problems.

Don’t see why not. It hasn’t happened yet. Maybe I’ll add it :thinking:

Ah. Yes. That. So, funny story, she never actually got her personal power until book 4 in the series (so +5k years later) :joy: Thankfully it was a relatively easy one to figure out so she pretty much got it straight away.

Oh they defs overwhelm. If Amneris uses too much power in one go, her body starts to break apart. She has completely self-destructed in one case but reformed only to be destroyed again for other reasons. But yeah, there will be a day when she won’t be able to maintain a physical form anymore because she’ll just be too powerful. She just keeps getting stronger and stronger and stronger until, well, that’s where the conspiracies come in :smirking_face:

There’s a bit of a running gag where a character tells her she should get rid of her powers and Amneris will just look at them and be like “no”. And that’s the end of the conversation.

Ayy a lot of people are jealous and try to steal Amneris’ powers all the time. Yes, this includes other Deities :joy: Endless amusement

Yes. Is the short answer :joy: Space Magic is one of the Five Forbidden Magics because it’s super powerful. Create, manipulate cosmos, energy, destruction, gravity, matter, antimatter. It gets pretty crazy tbh.

I’m white and majority my main cast are POC. Believe me when I say I get a lot of hate for it :joy: I also take the piss out of religion, politics, cults, human rights. Do pro-LGBTQIA+ stuff which pisses people off and call out abusive relationships, consequences, the hardships of family, cultural differences, how everyone has the ability to do bad things under the right (or wrong) circumstances, etc. I also make reference to a lot of the nonsense humans do to each other because they think they’re better than each other.

I once got asked why I don’t put trigger warnings on my books and said “mate if you’re at book 3 and are offended because there’s no trigger warning, clearly you didn’t pay attention to books 1 and 2”. Tends to shut them up :relieved_face:

Makes sense. Mine is more based on belief. If you’re a person who believes your soul ceases when you die, it does. Same deal with afterlives. Unless there’s an Intervention, of coruse.

Ooooo thats a good question :thinking:

Nope! :grin: Deathwalkers are dead people chosen by Iniq (Death) to work with her. They’re beings from many species, can interact with the living, can have solid forms. Think of them as glorified Reapers. They also have death magic and are responsible for making sure souls end up where they’re meant to within the domain they’re in charge of.

Egyptian mythology is something I’ve been obsessed with since I was six which is when I went to Egypt the first time :joy:

Amneris is actually from ancient Egypt on her Human side. She also works part time in Amenta/Duat (the Underworld) so interacts with a lot of the Gods.

She’s practically been adopted by Osiris. Ra has made her an honourary Deity since it’s his fault she ended up working in the Hall of Judgement in the first place. Anubis she considers a brother (which is funny because she has a brother) and they spend more time at each other’s throats than doing their jobs. Isis has an ego and is power hungry so often insists on helping Amneris learn to use her powers for totally not-selfish reasons. Ammit is a puppy. Set is an arsehole but a likeable arsehole who’s more chaotic than evil. Amneris made her daughter after Hathor and her stepson is named after Horus. The only “evil” evil one is Apophis/Apep. There’s a lot more main Deities who do cameos of course.

Yes, I have a whole short story collection taking place in the Underworld and reference it more than a few times in the main book :joy: I bring up some of the more obscure Deities as they’re still lurking around.

Yes, I own a copy of the Book of the Dead that I use as a reference :relieved_face:

But yeah I always liked how they were more obscure. They an be good and still do evil. They can be evil and still do good. Moral greyness is so much more realistic. Western interpretations of the now “big” religions are a) ripoffs of older religions/mythologies and b) too set on “good” and “evil” because they can’t comprehend creatures can be both despite the obvious evidence. Looking at you, Old Testament.

Being an Atheist also helps because I can be more objective I’ve found :sweat_smile:

Once must always play with food. Otherwise it’s no fun :relieved_face:

Regular food tbh. No idea what Vetlun eat, assuming they even eat in the first place. Immortals don’t need to eat but do so out of habit (think I mentioned this further up with Hathor). First Beings, Primordials, Elementals, other Deities don’t necessarily need food but some decide to have it because they can and they like it. Same deal with the lower down the food chain deities. Some frown upon it, some like it, some don’t care.

In the case of mortal species, animals, plants etc. I’ve tried to cover everything. Got your meat eaters, vegetarians, vegans, bit of everything eaters, allergies, diet restrictions, energy eaters. Comes down to the person, their preferences, cultures, habits, health issues, species, etc. Usually they die of starvation like a normal person would if they don’t eat for a period of time.

Generally an “oh shit” thing tbh :joy: She’s already not that much of a good guy so going full evil was (and will be once I actually write it) lowkey scary. Overpowered, hell-bent on destruction, cool with killing literally everything, no morality whatsoever. I’d go with “yikes” as a way to sum it up.

Yup, those ones. They’re antimatter humanoids so they look like humans but definitely aren’t. They’re not good, bad or bored. They just got a bad deal. They were banished from Creation to the Void during the first battle against the Veltun and just became bitter and angry because they never found a way home and were forgotten.

They almost succeeded in destroying the Walls because the right circumstances came together (by pure luck) for them to break through and almost return home.

Yes. It’s a megaverse so there’s many parallel realities then parallels to those realities and parallels to those realities etc.

Yes and yes. This is mainly explored in Hathor’s series because, again, she’s the Vessel of Time. She does time travel as part of her role and has Time Magic. In her first book, she accidently time travels back to meet her grandmother and mother’s past life identity.

Yup, that has happened. Stopping time for the entire world happened when Hathor discovered her power for the first time. She’s never done something on that scale since but has done quite a lot of localised stops.

That one is a bit tricky tbh. It can happen but it’s more a matter of being sealed in the subconscious than anything else. It’s there but can’t be accessed. Memories can be shared or placed in objects. Facts can be lost over time as well like forgotten histories.

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Fortano story (got a name for your project?)

Qs for Theodore & Rose

I might have seen that video. It sounds so familiar to me. Or maybe a clip of it.

Anastasia’s country and culture is inspired by Russia and I think somewhere in my mind I had remembered that video of Russians not being smiley but how that’s not a rude thing. Anastasia’s people have downturned eyebrows and very angular faces, so they look angry and are often called standoffish or cold (and some are literally cold as in they have powers connecting them to the spirit realm which drops their body temperature), but they actually have a very emotion-driven culture and are really caring and are the best hosts ever.

Americans are unique for sure XD

Ah, nice!

So, he’s wearing a lot of bracelets, then? Does it matter which arm he puts them on? Or does he have them on both arms? Is there any meaning there? How about the order of the bracelets? Does it matter which ones are put on first?

Does he ever take them off? (during a bath?)


“Where Duke builds the house, Tabitha ensures it survives.“ I like that sentence :grin: A nice sum up of their relationship. So, how did Duke and Tabitha meet? Was it love at first sight or an arranged marriage, and what did they think of each other than vs now?

What kind of relationship does Theodore have with his mother?

Aw, that’s so nice! I have some characters in my story who are like that.

Will’s street gang, the Black Thorns, is basically a deep brotherhood relationship, despite what they sometimes do to each other. For some reason, Will’s the only one using his real name, and the others have code names which he gave to them. I think that’s Will’s way of showing affection, but also hierarchy. As if he’s the only one allowed to use his real name and get away with it.

So, what do Theodore and Jax like to do in their free time?


At least he gave it some thought :stuck_out_tongue: And his parents were okay with how he went about it? They didn’t try to force him into it if he didn’t want to do it?

oooooh, I like that! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

That’d be such a sweet scene if you added it when they start falling for each other more :smirking_face: You sure you’re not going to add it in?

Awwww! Maybe he doesn’t go about it very well, but he’s trying so hard for her :pleading_face:

Interesting. So are there every any moments where she’s out with them and has to leave for “family business“? Is there anything they talk about behind her back? (not maliciously, but in a caring for a friend type of way?)

Poor Rose. She sounds like she needs a shoulder to lean on :pleading_face:

The Rose in my story can temporarily turn all her bad thoughts, dreams, and feelings into cozy and wonderful ones, if she likes :blush:

Project Demon Friend stuff

Answers, and…brainstorming?
Summary of all the questions I had about demons and angels

Demons always tend to want to possess people, and there’s never a reason presented. It’s always just “because demons evil“. Why do demons want to go through all the trouble to do it?

Contracts. Humans contracting with demons, good for human, okay, but why do demons contract with mortals? Humans are so weak compared to demons. Why bother with us at all? What’s the point?

Demon names are always the great weapon that priests or whatever use to condemn them back to hell. But no reason given. I tried to search for a reason. Can’t find anything.

One would think that demons, who are so desperately trying to possess humans and scaring them, wouldn’t give their name no matter what. Why give the name at all? Why make the name the final weapon? Humans have grimoires and demon directories…

I could go on forever about that. It’s so ridiculous.

Spiderwalk. Why do demons make humans do the spiderwalk or contortions? Idk. They just do. Needed explanation.

What do demons want from humans? Souls? Then why not take them immediately? Why take them slowly? Why not take them before humans bring reinforcements?

Some horror movies show demons fearing the cross. Other movies show extremely powerful demons not fearing anything. They even go into churches or possess nuns. Discrepancy.

Why do humans seem to have a directory, grimoire, on demons when not all demons appear before them, supposedly? Humans know what demon is the demon of what. Somehow.

Angels. Angels looking like monsters, looking like humans, or some how guarding humans. Why guard humans from demons? What do they get out of it? Why do angels fight demons? Why do demons fight angels? How does a guardian angel work?

So, as you can see, it’s a little about demons in horror movies, and the general, angels vs demons idea.

Me, too! There’s even some similarities between cultures, like some powerful, flying lizard with or without wings that may or may not have created this or that river or valley.

Or some first God that made the land and sea. The similarities in mythology is fascinating.

Definitely there’s things that can’t be explained. Can we not explain it because we don’t have the science yet, or is there actually something supernatural there?

I don’t know the anime, but I read a manga with a similar idea where enough people were made to believe in a god-like being that they actually created it, and that being was used to defeat one of the final enemies.

Yes, okay, I need to explain the underworld first.

So, the underworld is all connected. There’s different regions and cultures just like there are for humans. Western demons and Eastern demons. They have different values and different ways of getting souls. Eastern demons, however, are made up of demons and corrupted angellics.

I’m thinking all their angellics either became fallen, or were made to be fallen, or were somehow absorbed by demons.

But there’s one common area for all which is the spirit realm (you could call it a limbo), and the one who presides over the spirit realm makes judgements for all human souls, demons, and angellics.

So, when an angellic is decided to be a fallen, this higher power has the final say. Is this a God? Or, something else? But what would I call it?

Hm :thinking:

It’s important to the story because of a demonic creature called Tov who is a disgraced.

The “god“ or higher being was the one who pardoned its sins and let it go without punishment, allowing it to simply exist in the land of the living as like, the final place for it to be. No one gets pardoned. No one. So, demons and angellics both despise the disgraced.

Tov has its own storyline which affects some other major characters.

Thanks! Will check it out

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Thank you kindly! :slight_smile:

Like a shimmering light that edges like highlighting on Warhammer Mini Figure Guns, instead of silver its shimmering with Violet and Green at the same time, double exposure style Violet then Green offset slightly and shimmering with a blazing light.

The Futrure warned him, being a God, a Creator, his foresight saw long years ahead, and thus deemed that the Dragons (“Drakes” A general name for all types of Dragons in my world), could be twisted and used to horrific effect when The Endurlon begins. Seeing this he took Dragon form to avert such a fate, and to assist in healing the hurt’s of the world caused by The Children of Mara.

There is a large range of mountains the reach down from the far northlands of Ice and Stone. This mountain range is called Kel. Deep within this range is a vast mountain which stands loftier than the rest, Undermount this realm is, the realm of Dragons. Deep within the foundations and roots of Undermount is where they dwell, in vast caverns, deep below the earth where it is warm from the thermal vents. It was here that Essingvaux laid claim to the throne, fought with Jortundul for the right to reign. This was long before the Winter Elves came to Kel, and subdued the Dragons with their magical songs… But that is in another age, and a tale for another time…

Each race has their own Heaven and Underworld I guess, even the Dragons believe in such things. When someone dies, they go to either one in terms of their life and their deeds. Yet they are judged by The Void Wardens, and sentenced to their fates, Judge and Jailer they are, and they keep watch over those realms.

In time the Creators did see their world blossom, but it was deemed that the race of men could prosper beyond all… For they perceived it within the hearts of the good…

They chose the fairest of maidens to bare their children, one for each creator, in a four year cycle for each birth… Mara, a maiden of Redstone they chose, for she was pure of heart, and her people loved her deeply. Her children, borne of the will of the creators would grow in craftmanship and medicine beyond all who came before, and mankind would grow to lofty heights… But it was not to be…

Temulkar the youngest of her children bore cruelty within, and in time turned to darker thought and arts of blood-magic… And in time created horrors of his own…

SD

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I was so busy, too!

Responses and Qs

Eventually, you will :wink:

For a second, I read that as “also force sorcery“ XD

What do you mean by “force secrecy“?

I know we’re not taking about this other book, but I have to ask, in the lore of this other book, what is the difference between sorcery and shadow magic? And is there an opposite of sorcery and shadow magic?

In another story of mine, shadow magick is called “dark anomaly“ and people with this anomaly can pull shadows from people’s organs and kill them. Handy in battle, but a little too overpowering, so on top of that, they also get to hear and feel the emotional pain of the people dying. Can’t have overpowering characters, after all, I thought at the time :stuck_out_tongue:

Not common knowledge. Some people know. I know that at least Richard (seer from demon) and Mallord (seer from angellic) probably know.

In Arcanland, demons roam like no other, and they like interacting with humans (don’t ask why, Idk XD ). I wouldn’t be surprised if some curious human decided they wanted to know some stuff about the demons and angellics. In the story, it’s quite a recent thing for humans to learn that demons aren’t evil creatures (like, in the last few years or so), so maybe someone decides to study them and write a book about it :stuck_out_tongue:

Demonology taking on a whole other meaning here.

Tell me about this name. The inspiration as you the author, and the meaning of the name in the lore of the world. Does it have anything to do with hens? :rooster:

You have magic and superpowers? How are they different? Do you mean you have, like, wind element magic and super strength or something?

There’s already a term in the wild Earth where this word typically refers to children who are smart beyond their years. Prodigies, if you will. Are the children in your story like that as well, or does this solely refer to their abilities?

Okay, so you have gifteds, ordinaries… are there any other social terms? Is there any class differences? Do these two see eye to eye? Do they discriminate against each other and have bad nicknames for each other? Is “ordinaries“ something the gifteds refer to them as?

(there is a crow right outside my window screaming right now)

Historically? Or just in her generation?

They sound like they know how special they are :stuck_out_tongue: I’m imaging they’re rich and live in the nicest place in all the land. Or, maybe not. I don’t know about the social structures of your world at this point.

Just guessin :wink:

I can imagine that XD I can imagine you sitting there for an hour, staring, wondering, yes, this is the…no actually, wait, maybe I should talk about, okay, I got it! No, I don’t…yes, this, and then…wait.

Accurate? :smirking_face:

Final Q: Remind me who Arden (the one with the many powers?) and Edin are (Edin is the one with the memory loss, right? The curse?), and what are their roles in the story. What are Edin’s powers? Also, which one is the protag, and do you do POV switches?

Little by little our questions and answers are mixing together :stuck_out_tongue:

Btw, do you have a project name for your project?

Edin, Eddie, and Wrathy, I guess

No, wait, when you started with this, I immediately knew what you were going to say after that pondering bit :joy: I didn’t unblur it, but I did anyway XD I knew it.

omg, imagine, maybe there’s a demon who is so high-end fancy and only licks menstrual blood once a month because it thinks any other blood is barbaric, or something XD

Well, Charcoal enjoys extracting it, so, probably wouldn’t want to wait a month. He likes the hunt. He might sound like a posh British gentleman, but he looks like a terrible beast and does terrible beastly things.

Honestly, I didn’t think about menstrual blood at all. But it IS blood. So, it shouldn’t be off the table, right?

That’s why we have these conversations, Stella! XD It’s so awful and cursed it’s wonderful

You know him well. He’s proud of you :smirking_face:

Actually, Anastasia is in her forties meaning, she hasn’t hit menopause yet. Hm, she’d be on her period at times at Richard’s house. I could… have a period scene. Not that there will be any blood, but maybe just a scene. I want to normalize periods in fiction. I had mentions of it in Between Roses.

(getting all kinds of ideas… processing…)

Assessing Edin… Hmm, this is scary in terms of the human sense, right? Then, I don’t think Edin can take Charcoal :smirking_face:

Demons in their full form have this demonic aura which humans fear on an instinctual level. It’s not just about what the demon looks like. It’s actually something wafting off of them. It’s not something you can even practice to not fear, so if a human doesn’t fear a demon they simply have no ability to feel that fear (like a mental disorder).

Richard is a psychopath. His brain is simply wired differently from birth (he’s also always been drawn to the dark and sinister stuff of society which…he doesn’t even know why). So, he simply doesn’t have much feeling. Doesn’t mean he doesn’t have any feelings. It’s just limited.

Anyway, that’s why Richard didn’t fear Charcoal when they first met, and all the first times they met after that in all his other lives.

okay, here’s a cursed scenario: Richard visits him and brings a bottle of “wine” which has a few drops of human blood in it. And tricks him into drinking it. Now, what would happen?

Oh? Has he ever had to be restrained?

What if there’s no one around to stop him?

During this time, is he able to differentiate friend and foe? Would he accidentally hurt someone on his side if he gets too out of control?

Can he hold a conversation during this bloodlust stage?

How did Eddie get to Idelhen? (yes, I remembered the name without looking back! Probably saying it wrong in my head, but I remembered it as “Idle Hen“ :rooster: )

So, Eddie is an…Earthling? Edin is Idelhenian? or something? Do you have names like this?

The thing about Richard is that he enjoys himself. So, if something goes wrong, he improvises.

This just in:

Richard: If my plan goes off the tracks, I make new tracks. Simple as that.

Charcoal: But that is after you panic and curse all the gods you can think of, and try to do something ridiculous that could get you caught, and then I have to stop you and then finally–

Richard: Shut up, Cee.

He’s so confident and sure of himself. As you can see XD

Yep! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I do want to do a story taking place is Deuskauz because I follow this “travel to Germany“ account on IG and the buildings are just so :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :heart_eyes: and the culture! :heart_eyes:

I just don’t know what yet. Probably not mediums.

I have a very good comparison now. Wrathy Will = fights like Edin. Not wrathy Will = fights like Eddie, more or less.

Yes.

He gets wrathy during a heist at a cafe when things don’t go his way, starts a wreckless shootout which triggers a certain detective supposed to be retired (or dead) and in hiding (guess who), and then that gets three of his gang members killed.

His gang ends up in the paper (like he wanted) but “legendary detective becomes hero!“ is the main story, and no one fears his gang, which makes him even more wrathy. He’s also referred to as “Will Cooper, the boy with hair like burnt broccoli“ which hurts his ego.

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Finally arrived to your post! :grin:

Tell me three things about misting.

What is this and what does it do?

Also tell me a bit about how it started.

What are the First Dynasties?

(btw, if you don’t have questions about my story, you can ask about writing, too, if you want, or publishing or anything related to being a writer :wink: )

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Here you go :blush:

Response to message 1

Wow, you know a lot about this! :open_mouth: Do you use any of these facts in your story?

Ooooh, that’s a cool detail.

In my world though, Sensland (which is inspired by Spain), is an island, so, I can’t use it there :stuck_out_tongue:

In Japan we use the metric system, so feet, yard, inches, has always been a mystery to me XD I always wonder why “feet“? Maybe a long time ago, that was the smartest way to measure something but can’t they change it now? I had to look up what 5’2 and 5’6 are :stuck_out_tongue: I see, 10cm difference. But that’s quite significant if 5’2 is around 157cm.

Wow, so pretty! :open_mouth:

Sometimes I wish I could do more 3D games, but I get motion sickness :sweat_smile:

Response to message 2

This is so unique, I like it :grin:

I have a question, so, do the people of your world call them “dinosaurs“ or do they have other names for them?

What does the keeping of dino-transportation look like? Let’s take hippalectryons. If someone were to get one, how do they get one, do they need a license, and how do they keep one? Food, care, etc.

I’m specifically thinking in comparison to horse riders. I’ve watch plenty of videos about people caring for horses, so I’m familiar with that.

The coast is all connected? What does this world look like?

I love the idea of airships because, well, steampunk vibes are awesome :wink:

I have a story that has airships (don’t ask details because that world is severely underdeveloped) and there are brands just like cars have brands. What about in your world? Are there high-end brands? Brands affordable to middle-class and lower class people?

Interesting! I don’t think I’ve read about any religion like this before. So, it’s like a change-based religion? I like that you have “great inventor“ in there because some great invention can change the way people live. But they accept it more because of their religion?

I feel like we need that religion in our world XD Some people hate change so much.

I know this is probably about animals? It made me wonder, what if someone murders someone for malicious reasons (or, worse, no reason other than because they can)? What does the religion say about that? How would they deal with the situation?

What about if covid happened in your world? What would people think? How would they react?

How does the idea of Morthaur play into the law when dealing with criminals?

Quite loose, despite the story being mostly about demons :stuck_out_tongue: I take inspiration from Christianity because I grew up with it a little bit, I read the bible front to back, and it’s most familiar to me.

Since I only world build as far as whatever character believes in, here’s some facts related to religion in Arcanland:

  • Some people pray to God or cross themselves to rid of “evil“
  • Exorcisms do exist and have been performed (not in the story)
  • There’s churches around Arcanland and people go to worship on Sundays
  • There’s a handful of terrible and awful rich and greedy men that believe worshipping God is a woman’s thing and think there needs to be a religion for men and be about what men want ( eyeroll :roll_eyes: )
  • Some people think demons are evil (despite scientific studies and news articles claiming otherwise since a few years ago)
  • Some people believe angels are messengers of God, and believe in guardian angels (they don’t call them angellics although “angellic“ is the correct term)
  • There are cults that worship a foreign entity that is believed to grant wishes after human sacrifices are made
  • No one believes in resurrection (unless they have been, themselves)
  • Some people believe curses are real, and that mediums can talk to spirits
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I’m gonna be even busier the next few weeks, but I’m saving the details for an announcement I’ll make later! :shushing_face:

hmm, if they're merging, perhaps I'll put them under one giant banner! :P

Thank you! :grin:

I was about to use Harry Potter as an example until I reminded myself that you haven’t read the books or seen the movies yet :sweat_smile: but basically, some places are surrounded by a special magic that either hides them from people, makes them otherwise inaccessible, or forces the people who know how to get there to not spill the secret. The Headquarters of the Guild of Guardians had to be protected with extra enchantments following a devastating raid on the previous base o.O

A similar difference (gosh, that sounds like an oxymoron xD) to the one between sorcery and shadow magic in my current project’s universe—one is a complement of light while the other is the absence of light. Except in this book’s case, there are several more branches of magic beyond light, dark, and shadow, and they each have their quirks :eyes:

For example, in that universe, light mages have the ability to heal, dispel darkness, and do other cool stuff, but they are then unable to lie. Dark mages corrupt and steal life forces from living beings, and the use of even a little bit of their magic scars the souls of those who use it. Shadow magic’s main quirk is that its users can instantly tell if someone is a sorcerer, which no other type of mage can do. There’s just one problem with that: since nobody can tell the difference between the two essences, sorcerers can lie and say they’re shadow mages, and then frame actual shadow mages :skull:

Oooh, this reminds me of how telekinesis is handled in the other universe! In that universe, telekinesis is essentially the extension of the sense of touch, so the user feels everything they touch. Pain included.

I mean no offense, but I love the use of the word “probably” in there :joy:

Ooh, how recent would you say? Within the last century, decade?

Makes me wonder if there’s a university course that teaches that in your universe xD

LOL

The truth is, I tried putting some words in an “Old English Translator” that actually isn’t a translator, but rather a site that spits out random Old English words and pretends to translate what you’ve written :skull: one of the words that came out was idelhende, and I thought, huh, that sounds neat, I’ll remove the last two letters and name this realm “Idelhen.”

I’ve just looked up what it actually means. Idelhende is apparently Old English for “empty-handed,” which I find pretty neat. Prior to naming the realm, I just referred to it as “the Void.”

Yep! Maybe it’s just a me thing, but I’ve always thought of the two as different. Magic specifically allows you to do several things like cast spells, brew potions, and other stuff like that. Superpowers can only control one thing.

So Edin is a gifted with superpowers, specifically fire wielding and lightning wielding, whereas Arden is a magician who can control light magic and shadow magic. The other characters in the book have a variety of powers too—Edin’s first coworker can heal and control metal; his second coworker can summon force fields; one of his other colleagues can wield ice; another can shift earth and stone.

In this universe, “gifted” solely refers to their abilities. I was considering using a different term, but “gifted” just felt right to me ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ it partly stems from the fact that people were gifted special abilities by the Creator.

I have an online friend who believes the term “gifted” should be capitalized and occasionally crashes out when I don’t do that :rofl:

I won’t lie, I haven’t thought too much about this, but those are the only terms people generally use. Maybe “magicians” to specifically refer to those who can control magic, like Arden, or “guardians” for those whose job is to protect the realm from magical threats—which would mean every able-bodied gifted who’s graduated school in this timeline, since the realm had plunged into a rather dire situation by the events of the first book :skull:

There are class differences, but those mostly have to do with sheer wealth than nobility. Guardians get paid handsomely for risking their lives to protect everyone else. This often means that no matter what kind of background they came off, they will almost certainly end up financially comfortable, especially for the higher ranks. This is why having a gifted child can also be seen as a “lottery ticket”—assuming the child grows up to be a guardian and doesn’t die early, their parents can rest easy knowing that they’ll be paid well enough to support their family.

As for whether they see eye-to-eye, it mostly depends on how often they hang around ordinaries. The majority of gifteds come from ordinary families, so they tend to see eye-to-eye, though I’ll admit that some of them can be rather out of touch :sweat_smile: being born as the only gifted in the family can also breed resentment if that child has ordinary siblings :confused:

And hmm, I don’t know if this counts as discrimination, but there are many things gifteds can’t do that ordinaries can, although some of them can be justified. The most well-known example is how they can’t hold public office or any other position that holds a lot of authority. Centuries ago, there was this one gifted who schemed his way into a nation’s nobility, usurped their king, and tried to take over the world… and yeah, it went about as well as you’d expect :skull:

Ordinaries is a term that people use if they need to distinguish between them and gifteds, so outside of that people don’t really use the term.

Historically. She’s one special gal :relieved_face:

Oh, they do :joy: they don’t just live in the nicest places of land—they even build castles on isolated and floating pieces of land!

I don’t know how good you are with spoilers so I won’t spoil too much, but Act II of the book I’m writing right now does talk about them a lot more :eyes:

And a little fact: even though Arden was extremely powerful and skilled, some of those descended from the Favored Four looked down on her because she didn’t come from a special lineage like them… which is funny, because even though her parents were ordinaries, they were still wealthy nobles who ran a multinational company :skull:

Somewhat accurate :rofl: part of me was also wondering how much I could fit in one bullet point before that one tidbit veered into “two tidbits squished into a single line” territory :rofl:

Sure thing!

So the protagonist is Edin, the amnesiac who can control fire and lightning. He also wields an enchanted sword that Arden had given him, and it’s especially handy because he can use it to augment his powers and deflect spells (which he can’t do on his own). Edin starts out a little passive, but he shifts into a more active role as he tries to fulfill his duty as a guardian and unlock his past.

Arden is the deuteragonist, mentor of Edin, and one of the senior guardians in the Guild. She can control light and shadow magic. I’d say she sort of takes a “behind the scenes” role that helps readers to see what goes on in the upper levels of the Guild as well as the things she’s done to help Edin.

There are POV switches between the two, but Book 1 is mainly from Edin’s POV. Its sequel will be the opposite :wink:

Yep! The first book’s titled Blood Will Tell, and it’s part of The Gifted Blood Trilogy.

It took me an embarrassingly long time to find a title :sob:

I just got flashbacks to me texting my now-ex boyfriend about a cursed snippet I had written once, and he said, “What a terrible day to have eyes” :ragejoy:

Or someone who thinks it’s a “more practical source” :woozy_face: to quote myself: “These women are losing a lot of it already anyway, might as well take advantage” :skull:

The average period lasts about a few days till about a week, so theoretically he could target about five or six women a month.

This sounds so bad out of context :ragejoy:

True. In other words, maybe someone aside from me had thought of it too xD

The most cursed conversations can be the most entertaining! :head_shaking_vertically:

I’m flattered :joy:

And yes, normalize periods in fiction! And in normal conversation, too. Apparently it’s taboo in American society to discuss periods in public or with anyone who’s not a woman, which I found weird. I have a friend who apparently won’t even broach the subject with his younger sister because he thinks it’s very off-limits (for context, I was trying to advertise bidets as a good way to wash while you’re on your period because it can easily rinse clots off).

I’m glad I’ve given you more ideas xD even if it started with something cursed :face_with_tongue:

Mostly, yeah :joy:

Cue Edin running to hide behind Arden and use her as a human shield :sob:

Oh wait, that’s actually pretty cool! Now I gotta ask which came first: Richard being a psychopath, or only psychopaths (and similar people) being unaffected by demons?

What was Charcoal’s reaction to Richard being unafraid of him? Was he intrigued, shocked, offended, anything?

Oh that’ll depend on what part of the story we’re in at the moment, but it involves huge spoilers :sob: assuming we’re talking about the Book 1 version of Edin, his curse will detect that the wine contains human blood and prevent him from drinking it, and he’d go feral if someone tries to convince him otherwise.

Yep. There’s a scene where Arden has to rope him in with a lasso.

If there’s nobody around, then the curse will wear off eventually, but that might take a while :skull:

So far he’s able to differentiate between friend and foe. In fact, on at least one occasion, the reason he went on full bloodlust mode was because he saw a friend getting hurt :skull:

And sort of, I guess? But it’s not really him talking, more like the curse bringing out his sadistic persona. He can’t hold a real conversation unless someone really snaps him out of it.

Whoops, I meant to say, Eddie and Edin are from completely different series and universes. So they don’t get to interact with each other at all :sob: except when they’re in my head doing shenanigans.

But Eddie would just be a human. Edin would also be a human. But, uh, Eddie would be a more “normal” human :woozy_face:

Honestly, I think he and Eddie will get along :joy: or at least get along more than Edin would.

Nice! And that’s so real. So I imagine there’s a lot of sausages, beer, and schnitzel? What about spätzle :eyes:

Ah, nice! Personality-wise though, would you say Will would get along more with Edin or Eddie? :thonk:

Edin and Eddie are both good bois who generally follow authority and have a strong sense of what’s right, but they do have quite a few differences:

  • Eddie is a teenager who looks and acts mature, so people mistake him for an adult. Edin is an adult who looks and acts sheltered or naïve, so people mistake him for being a teenager :sob:
  • Eddie is alone because people are scared of him. Edin is alone because he’s scared of people :joy:
  • Eddie is a perfectionist prodigy with high standards for himself. Edin isn’t a perfectionist or a prodigy, and has missed targets more than once in the story.
  • Eddie may or may not be a little sadistic or psychopathic naturally—actually, that may be a strong term, but he can be very judgmental, though he tends to keep the mean thoughts to himself. Edin is the opposite (don’t let his curse fool you) and worries more about people judging him than judging people.

Mallord! My man!

And oof, three deaths :face_with_diagonal_mouth: do he and his gang end up burying the bodies, or are they forced to leave them at the crime scene because of the situation? How close and how long had he known those gang members?

LOL
This is like the scene in Tangled where Flynn Rider is more concerned with how ugly his nose looks on his wanted poster than the fact that he’s on a wanted poster at all :ragejoy:

But why does he want his gang to end up on a paper and become well-known and -feared? Just for clout? Or is there something else at play?

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Answers! Demons melt, kinda

So, Richard appeared as a villain in another story and he already had some powers then (some blood ritual thing, the ability to completely become someone else, and suddenly being somewhere as if he had teleported, and also being good at many things). He was already immortal, too.

I wanted to write a story with him in the center for a long time. I think in that first story I had moments where his shadow would move on its own, as if there was something about Richard that was otherworldly, but that people would brush off as a trick of the eye.

I had to work that into his story.

Then in the first chapter, I made this pun: “Richard ‘lived’ with the ‘devil’” and then snickered to myself.

And so then I had to do research XD

Angellics came around after that.

I thought, huh, so what if Richard is the “bad guy“ and Mallord is the “good guy“. Demons vs angels? No I don’t want angels. Angellics, yeah, let’s go with for now… and years later it has stuck XD

It was a pantsery placeholder.

Yeah, well, I speculate it has something to do with the texture, but not sure. Demons don’t want to even imagine it, so I can’t ask them :stuck_out_tongue:

They lose the energy to remain in the land of the living (this is true for any and all demons throughout the entire world). They will eventually get sucked back down to hell. Kind of like melting the Wicked Witch. It’s a little different if they’re contracted because if the human eats, they can share energy between them. Even, yes, pumpkin pie although taste is also shared, so… :grimacing:

this one became long :stuck_out_tongue:

Qs and “What about you”s

I like that you can say this XD There’s so many possibilities that, sure, it could’ve happened. It’s like you’re just the person recording everything :grin:

XD

Anything is possible.

So, can she extract her powers and put them somewhere else for safekeeping? Or, rather, let’s say she can without dying, so, how would she do it and where would she put it?

Wait, how many years in each book? Could you give a rough timeline?

Was there a reason for this? Or just because, Amneris, of course, this is how it would be for her? :stuck_out_tongue:

Have you watched X-Men: Dark Phoenix?

I won’t say anything more in case you haven’t seen it.

How do they do this? Just start vacuuming her or something? :stuck_out_tongue:

Ooooh, forbidden magics, eh? Tell me more about what’s forbidden. And how many of these does Amneris have? (it’s been a while, and I forgot all of the things she has and if any of them are forbidden)

lol XD

Nice.

This, I lean into a little in Project Demon Friend, and also things to do with human relationships and social structures (especially the top guys who think they’re so darn good because they have big wallets).

Do they look like how they did when they died? So, if they had their head lopped off, would they be carrying that?

There’s different domains?

I’m jealous! Must’ve been awesome.

I want to go to Luxor! I want to see the Nile in the sunset.

This Old Testament is wild.

I’ve read the bible front to back for fun (bored) and I liked the Old Testament better for the wild stories, except that part where someone has too many kids and has to name them all :stuck_out_tongue:

Sometimes I wonder if I’m an Atheist, but I don’t think I fully am. Not sure what you would call, “I’m open to the idea of going to Heaven, not that I believe it fully, but I don’t think Hell is a real thing, and not sure if praying does anything, but I’ve had strange dreams that can’t be a coincidence, or is it? I don’t think God has time for all of us all the time, and not sure about this guardian angel thing… Idk, whatever, but I’m not closed to the idea of religion… eh, too much to think about“ :stuck_out_tongue:

Is there a popular food they all seem to like, or hate? (like demons hating pumpkin pie in my world)

Sounds like you had fun though :wink:

That sounds miserable.

You think they’d ever return home?

okay :grinning_face:

Got it (just went over my head XD )

Do the parallel realities interact?

Are there Deities and Void and Creation and Vetlun and Beyond, and… uhm, the nothing space that’s like death in all of them, or no? How do parallel realities connect with the rest of the lore?

What happens to other people when time is stopped and then moved again? What if Hathor stopped time, tickled someone, and moved it again? Would they suddenly laugh when time moves?

Oooooh, this reminds me of a very old story where I had a world that could extract memories and put them in gems. Doing this makes the person forget. Releasing the memories from the gems made the memories appear like clouds. People who touch the memory clouds could then remember the memory.

(writing this made me realize… we now store things in the Cloud :eyes: )

I also have a story where a character can extract memories and they come out looking like bubbles of light. The people he extracts them from don’t feel anything and won’t forget anything. He stores them in jars to look at them later for his personal enjoyment, yes, he knows this is creepy. But he doesn’t look at anything personal.

Another story (apparently I like this idea), with gem-based magick (I guess I also like this idea), has characters sharing memory through magick connection. They would hold hands and let their energy meet, and share memory this way. But this can be dangerous because some magick is predatory and can try to eat other magick when the magicks meet. One or both sides has to have extreme mastery over their magick to do this.

Anyway, what does memory sharing and putting into objects look like in your world?

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Yep, I do use it often, though my problem is I know way too much and I can’t get it all out without overloading the reader with dozens of concepts per chapter. And I’m already writing a mythological story.

You can still build bridges for train tracks.

Do people in Sensland all have common sense?

Yeah, basically. In the past, exact measurements weren’t necessary. A kilometre is defined as ‘1/40,000th of the circumference of the Earth’, except somene screwed up the measurements so the circumference of the earth is between 40,008 km and 40,075 km. Fortunately, now we define stuff by light, so a metre is the distance light can travel in 1/299,792,458th of a second (didn’t look that up, it’s by memory).

Fun fact: the word ‘mile’ comes from Latin, and (funnily enough) actually means a thousand (e.g. millipede = thousand legs, millennium = a thousand years). The original Roman mile is 1481 metres long, described as ‘a thousand double paces’. It was used by the army, since that was the way you measured how far you went. You didn’t need to know if the nearest town is 1.22 or 1.24 kilometres away.

Wow. You can play older games. I play a lot of Thief, and that game’s gorgeous.

They call them birds.
Not joking, they’d look at a giant sauropod and say “woah, that’s a big bird.”
But then again, rats and elephants are both mammals.

Yeah, basically, though you don’t need a licence unless you’re living in the city, in which case the licence is for for your vehicle and not the animal. Most people in rural homesteads own plenty of animals: cows, goats, sheep, pigs, dogs, chickens, horses, etc., so just throw in hippalectryons, perytons, striderfowls, etc. in there as well, and no one bats an eye. Though if you want to take them into the city, you may typically need a licence so the animal is registered, but that’s more so for analytics purposes.

Actually, now that you mention it, I may need to look into this more. Thanks for tthe heads up.

Like Earth, people just hop along the coasts. That’s how it was in Earth’s history as well. Sailing across oceans is a relatively new thing, and it’s often risky and fraught with peril.

Nice, I like the idea of different brands of airships. That actually sounds very realistic, and I’d say my world also has airship brands, though that’s something I haven’t delved into yet. Now that you mention it, I need to go into this.

No wait, I forgot about the real prompt/didn’t go into there at all. Morthaur is not a religion, it’s a philsophical concept that all the religions adhere to. Morthaur isn’t actively worshipped (more on that later), it’s just a cosmic principle that just says ‘nothing will last forever’. If Covid (or any plague) happened in my world, people will still act like normal people, but they’ll know that it’s inevitable that this would happen, and that it will soon pass.

I’m not sure if I’m explaining this correctly. The concept is a bit complex. There are other concepts like Desire, Maya (illusion) and Dharma (duty).

  • Desire is the force that created our universe, but also the root of all suffering. An individual desire food, desires love, desires rest, and that’s why we exist, because every since the birth of the universe, desire has been active. However, you also suffer because you want something and can’t get it. If you desire food and don’t get it, you suffer hunger. If you desire love and don’t get it, you feel depressed. The person who does not want does not suffer. So true enlightenment can be gained by being self-aware of your suffering. That doesn’t mean Desire is bad, but it’s good to be aware of its effects.
  • Maya is the force of illusion, transformation, projection. The people believe that all things that exist stem from a single source, the One, the Absolute, and Maya is the force is the that makes The One appear as Many. So in reality, everything in the universe is a fragment of the whole, including you and I. So when you learn to look past the web of Maya, you can see that all your joys, all your fears, all your achievements and sorrows are illusions. Only the One is real. And in doing so, you become One with the Absolute, and escape Samsara.
  • Dharma (moral duty) is the dark that’s assgned to you. Sometimes it may feel like you have no control over anything. No matter what you do, the world is going to hell anyway. There’s too many dictators, too much corruption, too much injustice, too much unrighteousness. So it may be a bit depressive and it feels like nothing matters. In that moment, the Sacred Texts remind us that it is not our responsibility to think of what else is happening, only what we must do. That is our dharma, and nothing else. If you do your duty correctly and the world still collapses, you can breathe a sigh of relief, knowing you did what was in your power to do, and the rest is not your responsibility.

Also yeah, these concepts apply to our own universe too, because these are genuine philosophical concepts. Morthaur exists in own world, and influences everything.

As for religions, my world has these main religions:

  • Church of the Radiants: the most prevalent religion in Alendir, centred around the worship of the Radiants (also called Light Gods or the Exalted Six): Aelinor the Engineer, Ajúr the Life-Giver, Azir the Warrior-Poet, Anín the Navigator, Mithral the Defender, and Kaal-Ei the Grim-Reaper. They believe these gods to be the creators and current rulers of the universe.
  • Church of Aši: an equally prevalent religion in Alendir and the Forest Kingdom, this religion worships Aši the Preserver, whom they believe to be personification of the universe itself. They also worship Morthaur and Kaal, but Aši is pivotal to their religion. They believe Aelinor to be the Avatar of Aši. They believe when adharma has risen to its zenith, Aši manifests Himself to bring balance to the world.
  • Church of Adi Morthaur: the most prevalent religion of the Forest Kingdom, their worship is centred on Adi Morthaur (the First Morthaur), whom they believe to be the lifeblood of the universe. Adi Morthaur is worshipped in six different forms: The Wildfather, The Hermit King, Kaal Fear-Killer, Lord of the Dance of Apocalypse, the Mother of Mountains, and Adiguru (the First Sage).
  • Cult of the Cosmic Force: the second most prevalent religion in the Forest Kingdom, this religion worships the Cosmic Force, whom they personify as the Great Mother Maya. They have many goddesses, all considered incarnations of the Cosmic Force – the Mother of Mountains, the Black Lady, the Star Mother, and the like.

Cool! This looks very Christian (I think).

So that means your angels and demons are simply animals like humans, but people assign them mythic status?